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Base +19, burstdragon323 +7, nkq +2

Where's best girl Liter?

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no poli in this one??

Base +6, phantomruler +6, plusarkos +6, gilpo +6, Leonidas23 +9, Solmyr Barad +6, yeykonyo -1, aoiiie -3

If only it was uncensored...

Base +10, RapidBlast +5, aoiiie -3

Based, need me more nikkussy

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why is the filesize 3 times bigger than the raw files

Base +7, AncientPhoenix +7, TDream -11, aoiiie -3

TL is good, but your typesetting is super cramped and really large for no reason.
Need to make your leading more spaced out and text smaller so it's easier to read.
Also, don't stack your type, and have everything bold...

Other that than, good work. 3/5.

Base +7, Leonidas23 +9, aoiiie -3

Cheers, i'll keep that in mind.

Base +6, Leonidas23 +9, aoiiie -3

Great book. I like chad commander(s) in doujins

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