Translated by Ayane
http://doujinayane.blogspot.com

Comments, questions, suggestions, etc are welcome ^_^

Awesome, thanks for uploading. I love Rin, especially in this guy's works

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The start of an awesome series. Gotta love Rin.

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While the quality is good, the plot does not fit at all, there is absolutely nothing short of 1 of the 5 true magic users that could threaten an mage with unlimited mana and someone who can take on servants and would become powerfull enough to become one even if he hadnt gained an massive power boost

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Holy shit, I finally reread the beginning and SAKURA+RIDER are the ones who caught Rin? This is all a revenge plot for them not letting Shinji die in UBW Good!

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Pretty sure as a mage she could spawn gold or hypnotize that rich fucker to give her money.

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tohsaka pleases old men for money

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I absolutely love how Rin's body is drawn. I would like to see her fight more or have more of her characteristic attitude, but the tone in this is pretty good and it still has a good bit of her personality. I really wish they would stop calling it "The shady organization" though. That kept throwing me off and taking me out of the moment.

Art 8. Plot 6. Translation 6. True to character 5. All out of 10.

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