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最爛的美好結局

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大伙都有光明美好的未来😅

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這什麼強行HE

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我的评价是剧情烂完了

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大家都赢的NTR真没意思，就千鹤那种表面是NTR实则单相思的设定还差不多，大伙儿想看的是变成母猪堕落，这种变成公猪配偶美好生活的真乏味😑

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卷尾后记说NTR作品大多归为两个大分类，一个彻底堕落和前男友干脆分手结局，一个破镜重圆但男主让女主继续和黄毛打炮or女主私底下依旧跟黄毛私通结局

然后说自己想画个不太一样的作品，至少不是单纯的完堕END，从一开始就没打算让每个角色都不幸，都各自向着自己新的人生方向前进blabla

问题是你这不还是单纯的堕落了然后分手结局，无非在摊牌环节多了点人物互动而已，最后也不是和平分手而是女主自己一条路走到黑拒绝男友提出的复合

开头说自己其实不想放弃田径，最后也还是放弃了选择了给大叔当老婆照看家业，那这心理挣扎环节努力了个锤子，还不是回到了最烂俗的“我选吊大的，我听吊大的，因为吊大改变人生路线”情节

反而让整个故事变得更烂了，完全可以不写这些的，就突出一个画蛇添足

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She dropped out of her track running activies and became a housewife after graduation.
Dunno, I think her EX BF going out with a clingy oppai loli is a W in my book.

Also, LMAO at the author regretting making this as netorare and then turning it into vanilla so he felt guilty for the BF and gave his a good GF instead.

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是兩邊都不討好的 結尾

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只能说是作为ntr作品是又逆天又无聊。
神特么跟个大叔跑了然后当家庭主妇生孩子，不学习不上大学了吗。
不论啥样的ntr作品，必定就是悲剧，没有goodend/happyend。这强行整个好结局太逆天了。

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@Wilfriback
so were in a point where rape, blackmail and stockholm syndrome is considered vanilla now. 💀

as if all the bad deeds of the rapist didnt happen and its now suddenly wholesome.

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说实话这个结局也不算很新鲜了··理论上还是可以算“恶堕”··只是没画出来整天阿黑颜似的看着肉棒满屋子汗臭味那样的场景
你真要整新鲜的还不如男主一刀砍爆肥猪狗头然后女主变成精神病来的带劲
而且既然想整点新东西那就要做好不被接受的准备···就像一宫夕羽那样

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Yeah the ending is vanilla, kinda boring. But I guess boring ending is the best ending for this kind of short doujinshi series. It reflect reality well how after we went through sweats of hardwork, reaching the top, what's left is only sage time (post-nut) clarity.

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👆👇👈👉

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算是恶堕吧，但结局这么写也太没劲了

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最后20多页..20页在拉扯....还不如直接恶堕肉戏整过程..

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无聊，再来个吊更大的把女主牛走吧，大叔和女主情感维系不就是靠根牛子吗，再来个黑鬼把大叔踩到地上狠狠嘲笑他们的感情吧

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@pleomaxx

Forgot to add:
She is watching TV, there she is a club companion who is now a PRO and wonders how would her life have been if she took a diffferent choice in life LMAO

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@wilf

isn't that club mate the one that appeared in the other work?

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@hikashi
Yes
https://e-hentai.org/g/1740913/2e17c79af8/

Though that story is open ending so we don't know what happened after she was told her crush wasn't unrequited.

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算啦算啦，至少男主还有一个可爱的后辈，不是吗

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@pleomaxx I notice these types of stories popping up a lot. I seen another story where mc rape fmc but still consider vanilla cuz fmc is in love with mc 🤦‍♂️

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把這劇情當做成年向AVG遊戲結局的分歧之一
彆扭程度或許會下降一些吧囧

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我反而觉得要是不能夺回，分手就是最好的结局
不过男友由始至终都没有干她就太可惜了

另外要是一开始和男友已经发生关系然后才被夺走会比较好
当然被夺走后男友努力锻炼技巧成功夺回就是最完美结局了

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@Wilfriback
i honestly fail to see how thats vanilla considering the stuff that happened in the previous chapters... ya saying rape and blackmail wholesome?

@Kcjpunk
vanilla is supposed to be wholesome too lol

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这个系列应该算是完结了吧

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看NTR的会觉得这结局恶心，看纯爱的也接受不了前面剧情，属于是想吃两头两头都吃不到

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一帮人都想看血流成河，我个人倒是觉得除了肉戏少不过瘾外其他都还好

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本来挺看好大叔牛走女主的剧情的，结果这结尾我宁愿看苦主反杀

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希望女主三四十岁能心甘情愿照顾六七十岁的大叔捏。😆

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最浪漫的结局，爱了爱了

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@pleomaxx
I was being sarcastic

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与大叔爱爱的画面太少，我都当纯爱看的，这结局一言难尽，两边都相顾，两边都没顾好😅

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这最后一篇也不好冲啊，跟前三篇比质量低了好多

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斯德哥摩

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when the old man dies the reality will snap at her

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好结局（❤）

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快住手啊这根本不是ntr!

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卖了二手奔驰换了辆全新宝马，其实也还行了。这学妹看来对男主也更钟情，而且身材也很棒

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So.... How did they explain that to her parents? That's the only question I have.

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笑死，有个叫ikoofu的挨个评论踩一遍，你不会是作者本人吧？

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白毛就那一本就没了？

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這作者估計是在賢者時間畫的作品，完全用不起來，想畫不一樣結局，但有沒有想過其他作者不畫這種結局原因是什麼?明顯的兩邊不討好
引述我很喜歡的胡適說的一句話:自己畫的本都用不起來，怎會想拿來賣

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就常規的被屌征服，但是女主根本沒和男主做過，說不定男主的更大呢。如果男主沒有發現，劇情就是老套的名面上跟男主在一起，私下和大叔做

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這得畫個和苦主復合的if線吧 這什麼爛結局

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😅女主最后那释怀了似的独白，搞得像自己以前受了多大委屈似的。没继续参加田径自己选的，和大叔一起自己选的，对前男友没感觉有愧疚，中学看起来也没耽误，两人生活也快乐。这种大家都幸福的结局和以前的女主恶堕也没啥区别，甚至淡化大叔和女主的错误和苦主的伤害，使得故事更烂更恶心。

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沒有沒區別吧
後面女主不是說要正視自己所失去的，要做到讓大家認同現在的她，這樣是在向前走，而不是像常見的惡墮結局一樣:我惡墮了，我擺爛。

要是有人把它寫成小說，後面在續寫女主未來三十幾歲之後，跟大叔在一起會有的問題:大叔舉不起來，要幫大叔包尿布之類的，一直虐出軌的，會不會更爽~

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English ver
Chapter 01: https://e-hentai.org/g/1930370/e9ffb90f26/
Chapter 02: https://e-hentai.org/g/1935041/49f4a67b32/
Chapter 03: https://e-hentai.org/g/2345595/25241830f7/?p=1
Org:
Chapter 04: here

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发现中文圈观众就是事多
没看见大叔是搞房地产的吗，屌还大女主又被中出那么多次 (b都被操烂了)
给了个终身就职 (嫁了) 大叔也算很良心了至少没始乱终弃，女主还上个毛线大学
结论：大家都happy。你点进来根本不是因为剧情是因为封面好看对吧，快忘了吧看下一本

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所以说 根本就没有NTR，纯粹就是出轨 你情我愿；还有就是....白毛呢？

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