TL is weird

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Japanese
Chinese translated by ANDX個人漢化
English translated by WolfieTL, You are here!

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3rd page
"I'm so weak that I can't move...." line is wrong, the point is that the guy is weak but his dick is energetic, not she.
Weird TL

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"Onee-san" in this case not means older sister but older girl

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calling this an english translation would be far too generous.

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5 star for the art but the terribad translations takes 4 stars away.

Sloppy Seconds. Please.

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This is just a (poorly) edited machine translation, bordering on nonsense. Fuck you.

p.1 your tired
p.1 don't make a sound just because I'm giving you guidance > nonsense
p.1 you really don't have the strength or the stamina > "the" should be "any". using "the" implies a specific goal. you don't have the stamina [to XYZ].
p.1 it's too hard for you to be alone? > more nonsense. how does this tie into any of the previous or following dialogue?
p.1 that doesn't matter c'mon let's do some weight training > one of the rare instances I'm going to flag lack of punctuation as a mistake just because it fucks with the syntax so much it makes the sentence confusing
p.3 I'm so weak > clearly not the right speaker, making this, again, nonsense
p.4 if my squats
p.4 it's getting harder and harder > referring to what? squats? lol
p.5 im
p.6 your weak

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This is an MTL, the credited translator is using MTL software and pretending to be the translator. Not sure why anyone would want to take credit for a terrible machine translation but there it is.

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ty @cutegyaru

p.1 your tired
p.1 don't make a sound just because I'm giving you guidance > nonsense
p.1 you really don't have the strength or the stamina > "the" should be "any". using "the" implies a specific goal. you don't have the stamina [to XYZ].
p.1 it's too hard for you to be alone? > more nonsense. how does this tie into any of the previous or following dialogue?
p.1 that doesn't matter c'mon let's do some weight training > one of the rare instances I'm going to flag lack of punctuation as a mistake just because it fucks with the syntax so much it makes the sentence confusing
p.3 I'm so weak > clearly not the right speaker, making this, again, nonsense
p.4 if my squats
p.4 it's getting harder and harder > referring to what? squats? lol
p.5 im
p.6 your weak

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I feel like if this artist did ntr it would be godly.

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