Raw: https://e-hentai.org/s/a57651f244/1235797-71
Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/1240993/4b63381943/
Artist pixiv: https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1529782

Currently trying to learn Japanese and figured translating something would be a fun project. My Japanese is still very rough, so this uses a mix of my knowledge and looking stuff up along with cross-checking with DeepL/Google. This is my first time translating/editing/redrawing/etc. so there's bound to be some amateur mistakes here and there. With that being said, enjoy.

your translation is godtierCSO 🇺🇸🏆... but be aware there is this little shit named cutegyaru and his group of friends who wont hesitate to shit on you when they have the occasion.

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In the effervescent annals of language liaison, there resides an irksome specter, the loquacious "Cutegyaru." This egregious translator, akin to an intractable malady, maliciously lingers within the cerebral confines of all she encounters, sowing seeds of toxicity. Her noxious allure bewitches the unsuspecting minds, ensnaring them in her web of capricious whims. With disdainful elegance, she prances forth, exuding a supercilious aura that permeates all communication with an unabashed hauteur. Verily, like a wretched tenant, she leeches upon the sanctity of linguistic exchanges, dwelling relentlessly rent-free within the very soul of her host, an enigmatic scourge of the verbal realm.

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MTL is inaccurate lol. Dont rely on it to crosscheck.

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@Jhongerkong
Hopefully you can keep learning and giving us this type of stuff. I believe in you!!!

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Your translation was very good, at least in regards of the english parts since i don't know japanese.
Just a tip: since this is your first keep it in mind so that in the future when you are better at this you can see how much you have improved and perhaps update this one if you find any mistake you didn't find today.

About the story, i honestly expected more, it seemed too short and too rushed, but the boy was cute crossdressing tho

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Mostly made sense, seemed coherent enough. Nothing jumped out at me as so awkward or strange it interrupted my fapping. That's all that matters. Therefore it's good enough. QED. Thanks for posting.

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The artist draws cute traps, but he needs to work on his storytelling. I get it was short, but I feel like it could have been handled better.

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