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[Mizuyuki] Itsuka Mata Zenhan | "Someday, Again" - First Half (Amami) [English]

[みずゆき] いつかまた。 前編 (甘蜜) [英訳]

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Posted:2023-08-10 15:05
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Posted on 10 August 2023, 15:05 by:   rubber20    PM
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Posted on 10 August 2023, 16:57 by:   smartmeister    PM
Score +43
alriiiiiight !
Posted on 10 August 2023, 19:36 by:   orasmase    PM
Score +191
03: Am I [...] who felt => (inconsistent tense) / Was I [...] who felt
03: Am I the only one who was overly => (inconsistent tense, redundant) / Was I the only one overly
03: bad reaction => (countable) / a bad reaction
04: a classmates => (plural) / classmates
05/25: failing mark => (countable) / a failing mark
13: bit too quick => (uncountable adverb) / a bit too quick
13: so good beyond imagination => (one superlative is enough) / good beyond imagination
13: bit relieved => (uncountable adverb) / a bit relieved
15: on it's own => (possessive) / on its own
19: I was expecting [...] it seems like there's [...] we meet => (inconsistent tense) / I was expecting [...] it seemed like there was [...] we met
19: deserted toilet => (countable) / a deserted toilet
21: remaining classes => (adjective form) / the remaining classes
21: scloded => scolded
24: how orgasm felt like => (generality, prefer present tense) / how orgasm feels like
25: I find => (inconsistent tense) / I found
25: homeroom teacher => (specific, needs article) / the homeroom teacher
25: What did you do [...] I'm not doing => (inconsistent tense) / What did you do [...] I didn't do / What did you do [...] I haven't done
26: become => (inconsistent tense) / became
26: normaly => normally
27: studying for entrance exam properly => (specific to the uni) / studying properly for the entrance exam
27: that doubtful eyes => (plural) / those doubtful eyes
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Last edited on 10 February 2024, 20:46.
Posted on 11 August 2023, 05:36 by:   mish2001    PM
Score +34
female:defloration

Wow, you don't see that everyday

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