我去，支持一手

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Finding a murderer through incest? Yep, that checks out.

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thanks for this one, i wish someone makes a version with them but while they know each other's identities (Sensei and Sarina), it would be even hotter imo

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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2621641/6bd7886976/

Since you were outed as a rewriter on your latest gallery, I suppose it tracks that this one likewise has a bunch of incorrect translations as well.

Rough Translation Tag

Page 3
JP: お兄ちゃんっ♥ どうっ♥かなっ？♥
EN: Onii-chan♥ how's♥ this?♥
OP: Onii-chan♥ Does it feel good?♥
Justification: While at first this seems like it doesn't matter, it's actually explained by the rest of the story. She isn't asking if he's feeling good, she's asking if the scene that's being recorded is good enough. If she's doing a good enough job of being sexy to lure out the culprit. Totally different context. Which leads to...

JP: ああ いい感じだぞルビー
EN: Yeah, that's great, Ruby...
OP: Yeah, it feels great, Ruby.
Justification: Again, he's not actually talking about how good it feels. He's directly referring to the (now just an excuse for him to fuck her) plan to record her being sexy in order to lure out Ai's killer. Completely different context.

JP: アイの面影が残るその無邪気な笑顔を道連れにして 俺は地獄へ落ちようと決めたんだ
EN: I decided to go straight to hell and take that innocent smile that reminded me so much of Ai with me.
OP: That innocent smiling face looks just like Ai... Sorry, Ruby. Let's descend into hell together.
Justification: While the nouns are all there, what connects them is wrong. At no point in the original does he apologize or name Ruby, and instead points out that he's the one who decided to do all this right from page 1.

Page 4
JP: ん…？今日はやけに自撮りするんだな
EN: Hmm? She sure is taking a lot of selfies today.
OP: That girl takes selfies way too often.
Justification: Not going to count this one against the 10, but it leaves out that 'today' is apparently different from 'most days', whereas OP's version implies that she's like this all the time, something that was not implied in the original text.

JP: SNSもいいけど映り込みとかには気をつけ…ろ…
EN: Posting on social media is fine and all but make sure you're careful about reflections and...stuff...
OP: I don't mind if you post on SNS, just watch where you point the camera.
Justification: Not quite what was said. While "watch where you point the camera" might be a loose reading, he specifically is warning about reflective surfaces that could reveal her location and/or identity.

JP: お前…そういう趣味だったのか
EN: So you're...into -that- kind of social media, huh?
OP: Are you frustrated or something?
Justification: Pretty much a rewrite. Aqua is calling her out for having a weird hobby here, not being generally sexually frustrated.

Page 5
JP: なるほど…ただの変体に目覚めてしまったのかと思ったが…
EN: I see... and here I was thinking you'd awakened some inner perverted urge...
OP: I see. My sister has gone crazy.
Justification: Pretty much a rewrite; this is not what he said at all.

JP: ぶっ飛び理論だがなるほど一理あるな
EN: That's some twisted logic, but I see...it actually kinda tracks.
OP: Although it's not the worst theory...
Justification: Throws out most of what Aqua actually said.

JP: 今どきは芸能人や有名コスプレイヤーに見た目が似てるＡＶなんて星の数ほどあるから上手く誤魔化しながらスキャンダルを演出事は出来るだろう
EN: Nowadays there are as many JAVs of entertainers and famous cosplayers as there are stars in the sky, so if we play our cards right we should be able to pretend that this is actually a fake scandal we're acting out.
OP: There isn't really a lot of idol porn out these days... We can try as long as we hide you enough to avoid a scandal.
Justification: Completely and utterly wrong. Not only not what he said, but actually the -opposite- of what he said.

JP: ほんと！？自撮りにも限界あるしお兄ちゃんなら信用出来るから助かるよ～
EN: Really!? I mean, there's a limit to what I can do with selfies, and I can trust you so that helps a lot!
OP: Really?! There's only so much I can do by myself. With onii-chan's help this will be a lot easier!
Justification: Left out that the reason she's on board with this is because she can trust him, and that she was actually referring to taking selfies.

Page 6
JP: もっと際どいのを撮らないとダメか
EN: I guess we'll have to take more explicit photos...
OP: Pictures can only make so much of an impact...
Justification: Not what he said at all.

There's plenty more where that comes from, but that should satisfy the tag requirement.

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