I hope this is at least of passable quality.

You need to apply an actual white stroke to floating text or else it's really hard to read.

Base +24, Seaea. +6

ENG Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2653503/52793eb6ef/

Base +6, Azura Meta +6

Page 17: I have refuse him → I have to refuse him

Base +11, Seaea. +6, laptopsuc +7, TheSPNCupcake +6

Censorship is very bad. Thanks for sharing.

Base +13, Seaea. +6, etamxes +5, TheSPNCupcake -6, Tsutiya +6

01: annoing => annoying
06: since last went out
- missing subject => since we last went out
09: going wash
- preposition needed => going to wash
16/41: dont => don't
17: I have refuse him
- preposition needed => I have to refuse him
40: Nahaso!
- wrong name
- untranslated?

Base +8, etamxes +5, laptopsuc +7

Converting lesbians is the best genre.

Base +23, r3d_alert +6, xerorushbluh +6, ihminen +8, gtasan1903 -6, evilfuzzyman +6, TheSPNCupcake -6, finnick8 +8, demonxlol +6, Bizzo87 -7, Shadow_771 +12, Shantara -6, Rimaka -7, and 7 more...