Artist:

https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/1754480
https://twitter.com/sawada___
https://sawada-39.fanbox.cc/

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>my first image set clean/translation/rewrite
Which is it? A translation or a rewrite?

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This translation is very poor and also very stiff.

If english is not your first language please get a proofreader.

Here's my TL:

"Looks like I'm about to blow, say the lines I taught you before"
"...."
"You don't say em, how about I bring some more boys over?"
"Cum inside me....please"
"Eh...It's alright if I you get pregnant?"
"....Please do"
"Well if you say so (laughs)"
(What's with him, he's gonna cum inside anyway)
"Oh damn, I'm about blow my load Saren-chan"
"Cum inside me"
" how about 'Please' ?"
"....Please cum,.... inside"
"I can't hear you"
"Please cum inside"

"Fuu....I let a lot out, you know what that means?"
"I do."
"Then. You remember what I told you to say?"
"Right now.....I'm"
"Face me and say it"

"Right now, I'm filled with so much of your semen....I'll do my best to get pregnant"

Last edited on 01 September 2023, 03:13.

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my reaction to first page is"ambatukam"

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