Hello. This is both my first upload and my first fanbook I've completed. It was a long and difficult road to get to this point, though the majority of the pain was self-inflicted. Thanks again to everyone in the /a/ threads who helped push me along. This wouldn't have gotten finished (or even started) without you fags.

I'm more than open to any and all critique, so let me know what you think. While I intend to try my hand at doujinshi again in the future, I plan to focus more on improving my draftsmanship before I attempt anything of the sort. Any help or advice on that matter is more than welcome.

wow, a new comic.I love its style, so cute that I took it in my favourite.

I'd like to know why the tag amount is so small....only English.where are author and charactor?

Base +1, TheKidAgain +6, Vastolo +8, Poliana +6

This is awesome!

Base +6, Nlkfma +11, AnonymousStranger13 +6, TheKidAgain +6, sg2 +9, umakeisee +6, kailli +12, Vastolo +8

This is amazing, doujin anon. You're the best! Many thanks from an Asagaofag.

Base +7, DonKnotts +5, zodaloo +6, Vastolo +8

Happy day when a new Kunoichi Tsubaki doujin gets released!

Base +8, Vastolo +8

This is absolutely incredible!

In my opinion, all your hard work paid off. This is some top quality art and the interactions are cute and fun. The girls are adorable, the sex is hot (not to mention uncensored which is an absolute rarity), and the whole comic is great! I love the style, I love the design, and I especially love the lewd thing the girls do with the guy. Everything about this is in my opinion, PERFECT.

From your ending note, you seem to be a little hard on yourself. (Understandable when you're aspiring for professionalism) However, I cannot find a single thing to criticize at all. Sure, perhaps if I were to really try, I could probably go over this with a microscope and find the mistakes you're worried about, but they would be so minor that it wouldn't matter. Your draftsmanship is flawless in my eyes and whatever you feel needs to be improved is unnoticeable to me. The fact is, you've made an awesome doujinshi that had easily become one of my favorites, and I right away became a huge fan of yours by this alone.

I really, REALLY hope that you continue to produce work like this in the near future. You could easily become a well known and loved artist. I hope it doesn't take you too long to start the next project because I think you're already more than talented enough to continue. Thank you for this incredible gift which I hope is the start of you gaining a grand amount of support which you more than rightly deserve.

Base +9, sg2 +9, DonKnotts +5, zodaloo +6, Vastolo +8

Tysm Doujin Anon! Words cannot describe how grateful we are to receive such glorious art.

Honestly, I can't find a single thing wrong with your work. It's perfect, down to the last minute detail. Wishing you luck on what you plan to do next!

Base +7, DonKnotts +5, Vastolo +8

Churu Churu Yeah Yeah!

10/10 Artwork.

Base +6, DonKnotts +5, zodaloo +6, Vastolo +8, Ecloset -2

20/10 would fuck.

Thank you anon, where can I donate?

Base +6, zodaloo +6, Vastolo +8

Bro, this is one of the best Tsubaki doujins ever, you really did a good job. I hope to see more of you, seriously, this is very good.

Base +6, Vastolo +8

i assumed it was just a sc/a/nlation, i was measuring against the doujin gods and finding it to be serviceable (and i have been around enough to know many)

in its own weight class this is top shelf, especially when you factor in the composition and such that a pin-up wouldn't flex

many EN artists are celebrated for less, i sometimes disregard the Western tag entirely, i hope you gain a loyal (even generous) following in whatever publishing models remain in the internet of tomorrow...

Base +7, Vastolo +8, Poliana +6

Amazing, It was worth the wait.
You really have a talent for this thing, the paneling was good too.

Base +6, Vastolo +8

If this is your first work, I shudder to imagine what later works might do to the sanity of lolicons worldwide. 5/5

Base +8, Vastolo +8, eee47 +6, AnonymousStranger13 +6, Poliana +6

Quite literally THE perfect doujin - art matches, if anything it adds to it. Uncensored. Perfect English. Cute and Funny. No ugly bastards/rape.

Base +9

This is my first comment ever here, i need to express how damn good this is: Its Cute, its Beautifull, has Incredible Art and a god damn masterpiece for me! If you take donations, one of the few things where i would straight foward ask you to just take my money. If you happen to have anykind of donation, call me one of your supporters for sure. Respect on this lovely doujin, i hope it´s not going to be your last!

Base +6, DiarrheaDisaster +5