https://e-hentai.org/g/1035111/fb2890841b/

in the 2017 translation, the mom and daughter in the window were HIS mother and sister.

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why do these sort try to shoehorn in a fat ugly character with access to supermodels. There is no way the people who supported the idols would allow this guy to live if this happened.

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@Red 255 yeah, I remember that. I wonder which one is correct.

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Checked the raws and it looks like the mother/daughter are actually supposed to be MC's mother/sister, so the old version's translation is correct.

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based virus

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@i like halo

Making the protagonist a schlub is aimed at strengthening the fantasy for the intended audience. By making him unattractive, (often in multiple ways), the reader is encouraged to think "if this guy could make out like this, were I to be in this situation I'd really be able to score."

It's similar to why so much power trip fantasy hypnofetish content involves the controller making stupid mistakes: You know you wouldn't be that stupid, so you would make out better.

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Wish there were more outlandish worlds like this in hentai. Make it easy and fun to fap to.

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this is just beastiality

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Introduced a few translation mistakes while hitting the narration with the localization bat. Not great.
How the hell did they turn "little sister" on page 7 into "daughter"? The girls in the window are obviously his "former" mother and the little sister of the girl he's walking to school.

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