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[Secret Service] Doki Doki Pairing~ Chp.1 | Heartfull Pairing Chp.1 [Llanowar_Elf]

[Secret Service] ドキドキペアリング~1本目 [英訳]

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Posted:2023-09-08 09:21
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Language:English  TR
File Size:18.39 MiB
Length:45 pages
Favorited:433 times
Rating:
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Average: 4.35

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Posted on 08 September 2023, 11:49 by:   mish2001    PM
Score +14
Why tf do this characters look so similar to the manhwa I'm currently reading... (Boss, gimme your daughter!)
Posted on 08 September 2023, 13:24 by:   AIDSFART2011    PM
Score +24
@mish2001 maybe because it's the same artist.
Posted on 08 September 2023, 15:05 by:   cutegyaru    PM
Score +40
Cuming > Cumming

Just some general observations:

1. You need to punctuate. Periods and commas aren't optional.
2. Your narration/thoughts font (not dialogue) is really weird and hard to read.
3. Ellipses are ... not .. or .... Same rule when you combine with other punctuation, i.e ...? ...!
Posted on 08 September 2023, 18:37 by:   Imagine_Breaker    PM
Score +7
So why did you decide to take all of the porn out of the pornwha? On a porn site no less? Also this series has already been fully translated so it's doubly useless! Congrats!
Posted on 09 September 2023, 08:22 by:   mish2001    PM
Score +7
@AIDSFART2011 yep, its SecretService
Posted on 09 September 2023, 18:23 by:   KaZe_DaRKWIND    PM
Score +12
Just google "Doki Doki Connection"

It's already completely done and all 30 chapters are translated. This seems like someone attempting to turn a strip comic into a panel comic. With some VERY questionable decisions about cropping considering this is supposed to be porn.

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