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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2526311/1fcb815181/

The following is based strictly off of reading the translated text of gallery ID 2674912 as available on 09/13/23.

Pg 1: "I will the one to beat you." s/b "I will be the one to beat you."
Pg 1 (caption): "styleidol". Space missing. Also probably s/b "Idol-style pants"
Pg 2: "Her meat is quite thick," - Only sort of makes sense in context. Could use a double-check on the translation.
Pg 3: "Stretched and lose" s/b "Stretched and loose".
Pg 3: "Big Breasted Cow" s/b (ideally) hyphenated as "Big-Breasted Cow" to indicate that "big" applies to "Breasted" and not "Cow". This isn't strictly required (not much in the way of breasted cows), but recommended.

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フレン～😭

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What a stomp. At least some of the other girls in these hentai manage to kill lots of monsters before they get captured to repopulate the monster race.

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Vtubers make for lousy warriors it seems.

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This is like "The Ugly Barnacle" of porn stories.
>"There once was a beautiful girl. She was so beautiful, she was raped for the rest of her life. The End."

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I think the fun of these stories is that the woman remains defiant before eventually being broken.

Having her already begging for her life on the second page ruins the fun.

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