https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01081649.html
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1549334/0e24006a79/

Other Language or Version
Japanese raw
korean
Chinese translated by Lxns个人汉化
Chinese translated by 冊語草堂
English translated by Defski's Moonrunes, You are here!

Series part : 俺の幼なじみがあまあまカワイイ2
Japanese digital
Korean digital
Chinese digital
Chinese digital, translated by 冊語草堂

Series part : 俺の幼なじみがあまあまカワイイ3
Japanese digital
Chinese digital, translated by 无毒汉化组
Korean digital

Base +46, Fanservicefan +23

07: wonder
- subject missing: i wonder
09: really give him a good look
- interjection? => really, give him a good look / for real, give him a good look
- adverb? => give him a really good look
15: You drop something?
- past event => You dropped something?
- interrogation => Did you drop something?
17: i'm the one to talk
- idiom => i'm one to talk

Base +8, DJ_Puchuu +16, rsx205 -30

Tsukako TL makes you a hero in my book.

Base +6

@orasame Every one of your "corrections" can be explained away as informal English; the great thing about dialogue writing is there's no set rules.

Base +13

PSA: Please do NOT ever have sex on or even near public cooking stations and equipment. This is a very easy way to spread bacteria. Thank you. 😂

Base +8, 3t14 +11, venfare +9