Wow. Worst editing job ever? Fortunately, this has been re-edited at https://e-hentai.org/g/150427/ad6ca62947/

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@Red Piotrus

I don't have a slowpoke slow enough for this.

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It is a shame !

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i agree

worst ever.........

kill it with fire

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Lol, talk about karma. I remember translating this when I was 16 and hardly knew a lick of Japanese.
XD Awww...my first/worst translation ever. I basically just wanted to get the gist of the plot so I barely paid any attention to how to type in text. Vertical text, I should travel back in time and shoot myself, but then that'd be a paradox. Awww, I feel so nostalgic. ^_^

I've got some better Japanese skills than when I translated this. Who would like a clean translation?

Last edited on 15 October 2018, 00:47.

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"Pay. gold coin."

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