I loved Sam's design

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One day Jacket Freak would decide to hire someone else to write dialogs. One day

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@Dreamnyaner

JF here.

Well, I have mild dyslexia, English isn't my native language. So that sure doesn't help. I have some in my community to help me with that when possible, but I can't always rely on them either.

That aside, when it comes to "writing style". I do try to take criticism and improve.
But that's a little bit hard to do when most people only offer mean spirited snarky comments such as yours.

Sorry to have disappointed I guess.

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@beladrim

I'll be sincere, all the sarcasm aside. English isn't my native language too. And I don't have problems with any occurring mistakes. It's the text itself. I really love your works. I admire your style because I really like what you can think of, what you can create. You have great imagination, but when it comes to dialogs - they are stale. Your characters always talk the same, always use words like "lol" or middle finger etc. I understand that if you write a character who supposed to humiliate, you have to make them talk in a specific way, but no matter who is dom in your comic - let it be queen, goddess, or Harley Quinn - they all talk like teenagers-bullies

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@Dreamnyaner

I think that's fair.

I've had this said before and I think it's a fair point. I can't promise that I won't feature hyper humiliating doms, but I think some variety helps.

There is actually a set that won't feature any "LoL", middle finger etc... stuff. But I won't promise if and when it will arrive here since I don't leak my own content. I would much prefer if it remained exclusive to my subs, but I know it will get leaked by someone here eventually.

That said, I do come and check comments on my leaked content because I do want feedback and I do want to improve where I can.

I much prefer actual criticism over snarky pointless comments that say nothing.

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this is almost some hellraiser like diabolicalness

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@beladrim

There is too much text also for my taste, makes it feel like a light novel. Sometimes when you write too much you dilute the content.
I prefer a focus on what´s happening on the action scene, description of the "toys" and procedures, etc.

In my opinion dialogues have improved over time, just try new things, more condensed, as this format can get repetitive.

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Hey @beladrim can you give me permission to translate it to spanish? I would like to...

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@Lolamanda.

I will say if someone has already leaked my content. Sure. Why not. It's already out there anyway.
Obviously, I prefer my content not to be leaked, but since this has already been leaked here, sure.

I do appreciate you asking for permission, though. It's nice of you.

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@beladrim Can i add you to discord? I want to send you the first page to make sure if its good enough.

@beladrim well.. no problem if you dont want.. ill make it and upload it at ehentai

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@lolamanda

Sorry, I don't actively check comments here regularly.

I don't usually like to give my discord to people I don't know well. And I also don't want to actively participate in my content being leaked (even in a translated form).
I accept my content leaks in the sense that I understand that it's inevitable and there is little I can do about it.

As I said, since this set was already leaked, I have no issue if you post a translated version of it.

I only ask potential leakers to not leak my latest content too soon, as this will impact me financially. If a set I just posted is posted two days later, I will be upset for sure. Not that I can do anything about it.
If the uploader has the decency to wait a few weeks, it's appreciated.

That's about it, but don't expect me to actively collaborate in the uploading of my content to this site.

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Alright @beladrim , I understand. I hope your life goes good... I will do it the best I can.

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