New ver.
Many thanks to rsx205 (korafu) for the TL corrections. Also to scarletO_ for sfx.
JPN & RAW : https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/103091200
ENG (MTL) : https://e-hentai.org/g/2396612/bf0f0c6440/
RUS : https://e-hentai.org/g/2457523/b7037798cd/
FRE : https://e-hentai.org/g/2594228/0b264c9734/

tbh I think this is a rewrite more than a rough TL
edit: ok I didn't see the MTL note

001
OG: フェルン～、何？こんな遅い時間に来て欲しいって…
TL: "Yawn~ Fern asking me to come this late in the night, whats gotten into her?"
ED: she's talking to Fern directly here, not talking to herself

OG: これ私も流石に予想外だったわ
TL: ...I really have no idea this will happen
ED: she's saying she didn't expect this to happen

002
OG: ほらッ責任取って下さいッ
TL: N/A
ED: you left this blank. it's Fern telling Frieren to take responsibility

OG: んぶっ
TL: "Ugh, Frieren-sama"
ED: this is just sfx for getting a cock shoved inside her mouth

OG: んぐうッ
TL: "Frieren-sama, I'm coming!!!"
ED: this is just sfx for getting a cock shoved inside her mouth

003
OG: 出ますッフリーレン様ッ
TL: "Ugh, your mouth feels really good Frieren-sama!!!"
ED: she's announcing that she's gonna cum

OG: イッく
TL: Frieren-sama!!
ED: she's announcing that she's gonna cum

OG: いつぶりだろうこんな熱く濃いモノ
TL: "Haaa, there's so much in my mouth"
ED: she's thinking to herself about when the last time she had a load this hot and thick was

004
OG: フェッフェルン？！
TL: "Wait Fern, Ah stop!"
ED: she only says Fern's name here

OG: このむっつりスケベッ
TL: "Frieren-sama, you're[sic] insides feels good"
ED: the gist is she's calling her someone who is secretly lewd

OG: んぐッ
TL: "Ahh- Frieren-sama"
ED: this is just a moan. ok I'm gonna stop listing sfx/moans here since it looks like they're literally all rewritten

OG: んはっ♥イってるんですか？
TL: "Ahh...I'll be going faster"
ED: asking if she's cumming

005
OG: あんっ
TL: "-Sama"
ED: "Anh"

OG: またキますっ
TL: "Frieren-sama!!!"
ED: announcing that she's cumming again

OG: N/A
TL: Ahhhh Fern!!!

OG: N/A
TL: ahhh~ ahhhn~

Last edited on 09 December 2022, 05:35.

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Why??? Just whyyy????

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Fucking yes! Turn Frieren into a proud mother!

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这么快就有本子了

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@rsx205 Thanks for the translation.

Art 6. Plot 6. Sexiness 6. Translation 6. True to character 6. All out of 10.

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