[Kawaraya-Koubou (Kawaraya)] The day I lost my virginity to my sleeping sister | 잠든 여동생에게 동정을 버린 날 [English] [Ldino]

[Kawaraya-Koubou (Kawaraya)] Nemutta Imouto de Doutei o Suteta Hi | 잠든 여동생에게 동정을 버린 날 [Korean] [lurker]

Doujinshi

Posted:	2023-10-10 06:25
Parent:	None
Visible:	Yes
Language:	English TR
File Size:	46.47 MiB
Length:	18 pages
Favorited:	438 times

Rating:		210
Average: 1.59

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Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:34 by: gigan

These "just pretending to be asleep" stories are becoming so common I feel like they deserve their own tag.

Posted on 10 October 2023, 06:48 by: @Inkblot

"coherant"

It's bad enough that this is a translation of a translation. Everything else is somehow worse. You didn't need to inflict this on the world.

Posted on 10 October 2023, 09:29 by: zufield

You couldn't be assed to even clear the original language out of the text boxes? Really?

Posted on 10 October 2023, 10:45 by: Samuelnos

So, you did an MTL, didn't mark it rewrite, didn't bother trying to fit text to boxes, used a crap font.

Posted on 10 October 2023, 21:34 by: Oryx

"Vigina"

Posted on 11 October 2023, 02:14 by: derek58

Total garbage

Posted on 11 October 2023, 05:33 by: jarv251

Chunky white balloon text in a black border, are you serious? This shit is nigh unreadable, couldnt even get through the first page before my eyes started to hurt.

Last edited on 12 October 2023, 06:19.

Posted on 17 October 2023, 21:06 by: walgadon2

Impressive, you would almost think it's on purpose at this point, got a full bingo card right here.
Machine translation, translation of a translation, while the original was available, did not clear the old text, did not botter to make it fit. I will however say thst uts readable and the actual font is not bad.

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language:	english rewrite translated
parody:	original
group:	kawaraya-koubou
artist:	kawaraya
male:	muscle sole male virginity
female:	closed eyes defloration impregnation sister sleeping sole female
mixed:	incest