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[Camrism (Kito Sakeru)] Toki no Bokkiryoku Kaizen Perfect Training | Toki's Erection Perfection Course (Blue Archive) [English] [head empty + Xzosk] [Digital]

[カムリズム (鬼頭サケル)]トキの勃起力改善パーフェクトトレーニング (ブルーアーカイブ) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2023-11-01 02:50
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Language:English  TR
File Size:135.1 MiB
Length:39 pages
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Posted on 01 November 2023, 02:50 by:   Daruna    PM
Uploader Comment


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head empty
Translation: scav
Cleaning, Typesetting, Lettering: Xzosk
QC: scav

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Oct. 15, 2023, 23:26: initial release
Nov. 01, 2023, 02:50: updated the translation of a term ("Armgear") on page 37 to match the now-released localized term from Nexon ("Gauntlet"). updated an oopsie involving fonts on page 31. added a new TL note (number 5) to the uploader comment.

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do smellfags REALLY?

couple of things:

0) i hope some of these descriptions draw out a gag or nosewrinkle of disgust, because reading it in japanese sure fucking did for me

1) Toki already speaks in a fairly detached manner in Japanese, but this ramps up to 11 when she goes into Mission Mode partway through this book. She begins using outright anatomical terms and very military/impersonal speech. Getting this across properly was a challenge but I think it turned out great. Not only is her dialogue different when this happens, but the font is too. I hope you fuckers like Latin!

2) On page 8, Toki makes repeated use of food-related similes (one related to tea, another to breakfast). I inserted a reference to one of her in-game desired items, which is the Health Food Supplement gift: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1098431289092227112/1159550287183347802/image.png

3) On page 9, Toki tells Sensei she's got some previous experience in dicks which is why she knows so much about the subject of ED or whatever. The raw is: 「僭越ですが以前お仕えしていた方のもとでもよくやっておりましたからー」 Now, there is some ambiguity here as to whether she means a previous employer (whether it's Rio à la page 7, or some previous unknown man) OR if she's referring to her previous line of work, i.e., prostitution or something. The ambiguity stems from the 「以前お仕えしていた方のもと」 part. To me, because I'm just no good at Japanese, it could refer to either an employer or a line of work. Thankfully some ambiguity in English saves my ass because "my previous employer" could also refer to a life of prostitution. I'm literally cheating here.

4) re: page 37: Bunny Toki isn't out yet (only a few days left!!!) so I don't actually know how Global will handle naming her EX skill. In Japanese it's アームギア or "Armgear," so that's what we went with here (actually Xzosk thought to look it up, I had no idea it had anything to do with her kit idk i play global not jp). Hopefully this doesn't carbon date us. Though knowing Nexon's BA localization team they'll either fuck it up or just put zero effort in and leave it as Armgear.

4.5) they went with Gauntlet, so now all that shit above is moot because we updated it to be Gauntlet.

5) Nexon has done it again!
JP (confirmed to be on par with the Korean original by someone in the HE server): https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1092707237748813905/1159566363371786431/image.png
Nexon EN: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1092707237748813905/1168870853396660234/image.png
An actual TL: "Hmm... Well, if you're in a rush, I could take off my uniform right here and now [and give it to you]. Though I'm not sure if it would fit you..."
Don't you love when people censor shit for you? I dunno about you, but this grown ass adult man DEFINITELY can't think for himself! I love outsourcing my morals to someone else!
fuck nexon

6) Page 37 guest artist stuff:
- https://e-hentai.org/tag/artist:fuugetsu+makoto (only has content in the non-h section)
- https://www.pixiv.net/users/32669
Posted on 15 October 2023, 23:43 by:   Suubaaraashii    PM
Score +150
P-parmesan cheese…
Posted on 15 October 2023, 23:57 by:   Xzosk    PM
Score +135
:sniffa:

Your comment is too short
Posted on 16 October 2023, 00:23 by:   repokristx    PM
Score +14
toki,太涩了!我要设toki满满一脸口牙!
Posted on 16 October 2023, 02:28 by:   AbusivePlagueDoctor    PM
Score +58
Imagine...
Posted on 16 October 2023, 02:55 by:   SolarHamster    PM
Score +83
"It should've been me, not him! It's not fair!"
Posted on 16 October 2023, 02:59 by:   Fuopanda    PM
Score +43
soooo cute
Posted on 16 October 2023, 03:21 by:   maggot    PM
Score +82
Imagine the smell.
Posted on 16 October 2023, 05:13 by:   BiggusDikkus    PM
Score +142
Damn, if this is how he treats Toki in regards to smell, I can't even imagine what his Ui doujin would be like.
Posted on 16 October 2023, 16:44 by:   Mistermd    PM
Score +44
Thanks Toki, now I'm ready.
BRING ME THE OTHER C&C GIRLS!!!
Posted on 16 October 2023, 20:45 by:   7se7en    PM
Score +73
A hint of what
Posted on 16 October 2023, 22:30 by:   Leonidas23    PM
Score +28
Thank you for the translation and effort. Your TL notes are very interesting as well.
Toki is best maid.

P.S. I thought the next banner would be a rerun with Marina and Cherino. When is Bunny Toki going to be added?
Posted on 16 October 2023, 23:49 by:   keronos    PM
Score +19
B.Toki is still at least 2 or 3 banners away iirc
Posted on 18 October 2023, 09:32 by:   NSFWSB    PM
Score +44
damn, who let LTG in here?
Posted on 18 October 2023, 14:17 by:   NSFWSB    PM
Score +54
@Forties
stay seething bro. Maybe you should vent in the spdg thread or something.
Posted on 20 October 2023, 02:38 by:   Cadavrus    PM
Score +6
Goddamn, randomly putting Rio on blast with page 7. Did not expect that.
Posted on 22 October 2023, 13:37 by:   asdfwf    PM
Score +6
Pg.15 I thought she was going to make him push himself up in order to lick her, missed opportunity. 😔
Posted on 28 October 2023, 16:17 by:   Leonidas23    PM
Score +22
Thanks for the translation!
Toki is love, Toki is life.

Also RIP the Armgear translation, it was translated to Gauntlet.
Posted on 01 November 2023, 06:42 by:   Mahojc    PM
Score +14
why fap when you have Toki?
Posted on 01 November 2023, 15:54 by:   Mistermd    PM
Score +31
I had to spark her and don't have enought for M. Aris...
My luck sucks so bad bros...
Posted on 02 November 2023, 03:45 by:   Bloomberg    PM
Score +12
Couldn't fap, too busy howling with laughter.
Posted on 11 January 2024, 11:07 by:   Prinny#17    PM
Score +20
I was too busy laughing to fap. 10/10

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