Translated by Urichamaru.

What happened on page 13?

Base +10

@ Ingvar_77 - Guy I commissioned to re-translate this was also working on other projects and studying for a college final or something, so that's probably why the whole thing looks kinda rushed.

Base +9, malikski +6

Mikuru is top agent from the future sent back to keep Haruhi happy. She is doing her duty and decent chance her personality not what is shown.
So don't feel too bad for her she's been trained to handle this and if it could break her she not be sent on this mission.

Base +6, malikski +6, FertyJukli +10, Mabifica +6

04: mkilk => milk
05: It's That's
- stuttering? repeating may be preferred => It's- It's / That- That's
08: shoot
- throw cry? => Here!
13: personlity => personality
13: there's 98.259% chance
- article needed => there's a 98.259% chance
- missing relation with the rest of the dialogue
13: coercive please
- noun => coercive pleasure
13: you're make
- present continuous => you're making
- future => you'll make
- variant => you're to make
13: actinons => actions
17: Ah Auh
- not cleaned
18: the severe us off
- nonsense...?
20: some mosaic left on the labia minora

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Damn, this was one of my childhood favorite!

Base +6, Mabifica +6