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Thanks for your time!

What a waste of time and cum

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you wanted to write a short story but instead tried to make a comic... well this is not it chief. i can't criticize the art, it's proper to the purpose of illustration but the repetition sure is annoying.

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Why does this nonsense clog up the daily updates every single day?

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At least make some small changes if you're going to repeat the panels...

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quite good

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