lol

Thanks for the translation!
[JP] : https://e-hentai.org/g/2339084/30de25d6b2/
[KR] : https://e-hentai.org/g/2342054/8501a4797d/
[CN] : https://e-hentai.org/g/2344665/ff29f0a977/
[CN2]: https://e-hentai.org/g/2456750/4a1d721051/
[CN3]: https://e-hentai.org/g/2600262/173e65a0ef/ (decensored)
[EN] : https://e-hentai.org/g/2729450/0aef2fc7f3/ <- You are here :)

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05: no way you be => no way you would be / no way you'd be
08: this brat, pretend
- common clause => this brat pretends
- participle clause => this brat, pretending
11: a perverts
- singular => a pervert
11: cant be => can't be / cannot be
11: Sakurai looks like you need
- distinct clauses => Sakurai, (it) looks like you need
11: How you do inspection?
- missing article
- suggestion? => How about you do an inspection?
11. sakippo
- not English
11: The loser should listen to the winner.
- punishment rather? more imperative may be preferred => The loser shall listen to the winner. / The loser will listen to the winner.
11: you so strong
- missing verb => you are so strong / you're so strong
11: oni-san always cum
- third person => oni-san always cums
14: it's squeezed dry
- incoherent: ongoing? => it's squeezing dry
- more appropriate subject? => you're squeezing me dry
15: you, who was
- second person => you, who were
16: both of mama milks => both of mama milkers
17: chaukkatchuuu
- not English
17: a failure adult => a failure of an adult
17: gussu
- not English
17: Picture!?
- not an English expression
18: boobs [...] it
- inconsistent number => boobs [...] them
20: i can't do it with my girlfriend's boobs
- incoherent: wrong speaker? => you can't do it with your girlfriend's boobs
23: that's is
- extraneous auxiliary => that is / that's it
23: the thrust are
- inconsistent number => the thrust is / the thrusts are
28: in my chest
- wrong location? => on my chest
28: has gone as far as it has to go
- wrong idiom?
29: let's make [...] with me
- redundant: already in subject => let's make [...] / make [...] with me
29/37: girlfriend sister
- possessive => girlfriend's sister
34: wont => won't
35: Sakurai moan
- third person => Sakurai moans
37: due to problem => due to a problem
37: with MTL
- shame

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This level of effort should qualify as defaced, honestly.

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My fucking eyes.

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You putting your Ko-fi is the cherry on top to the most hilarious joke ever.

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tagging based on @orasmase

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And now you doomed us who patiently wait for a proper translation.....

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>MTL
>Asking for money
>Dog shit typesetting
Every fucking time. Seriously fuck off with this shit.

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