[Takayanagi Katsuya] Joshi Rikujoubu Danshi Manager | Male Manager of the women's track and field (COMIC Megastore Alpha 2016-04) [English] [Fecundable Scans]
"Fecund"? Surely you must have named yourself in error when you meant to reach for "Fetid", which would more accurately describe the quality of your work.
Honestly, the translation itself is fine, but yeah the notes subtract more than they add. Still, I like this artist, so happy for anything not machine translated.
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