The Penis Caste 1 & 2 ~by~ Kaitou Yuuhi
おちんちんカースト 1&2 ~by~ 快刀ゆーひ

originally posted:
https://forum.ashemaletube.com/forum-topic/manga-translated-34691/page-1/#postNum5
https://forum.ashemaletube.com/forum-topic/manga-translated-34691/page-1/#postNum6

Manga translated by itsy:
https://forum.ashemaletube.com/search-blogs/?q=translated+manga&page=1

01: so many wearing
- missing noun => so many [?] wearing
02/03/05: boy's uniform
- article needed => a boy's uniform
05: boy uniform is
- generality, article needed => the boy uniform is
05: with dicklette
- article needed => with a dicklette
05: to higher up => to the higher-ups
07: im => i'm / i am
09: actully => actually
09: isn't it
- tag question => didn't she
09: wanted [...] doesn't she
- inconsistent tense => wanted [...] didn't she
11: excited to loosing => excited to lose / excited about loosing
14: dicklette twitch
- third person => dicklette twitches
14: she suck
- third person => she sucks

And so on...
And also:
- upper case inconsistencies
- lack of punctuation
- many dialogues can be more complete (missing articles, pronouns, verbs)

(;¬_¬)

Last edited on 15 November 2023, 18:10.

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Jesus dude how much did you blow this up from the original size? About 800%? So many jaggies...

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looks like retards are working their way up from regular manga translation to this. just don't. a bad translation is worse than no translation.

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What the fuck is this translation lmao

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Garbage tier translations, dickpics that nobody wants, and creepy private forum shilling. Great.

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how the fuck do you blacklist uploaders? i cant take this shit anymore

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There's the earth caste, the fire caste, the water caste, the elusive etheral caste...and then there's the fabled penis caste.

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Holy fuck shave your dick

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I've just added this retard and his dick pics to my blocked uploaders list.

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@Floripes thanks for the idea, I didn't know that was a thing until you said that.

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I hate how there's only a 100 user block limit. I'm nearly running out.

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Jesus fucking christ, ew, just ew.

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Assuming you manage to read through the barrage of disapproval above all the way to my comment, here's some unsolicited advice from someone with no experience on the subject: remove the dick pics and find better fonts. Afterwards, get someone to proofread your translations (I'm assuming these aren't AI-generated). Work your way up to image manipulation to improve the quality of the raws and you're all set. As much as I'm fond of the late 00s, the current h-translation scene is overcrowded with people, some with decades of experience, who are (or think they are) so good at cleaning/editing/translating that they charge for their work, not to mention the semi-pro/pro companies built around the concept. Likewise, your audience is way too used to the current standard of quality. An effort to get the sentiment of a manga across with a lackluster translation won't be met with much gratitude. The age of rewrites and mspaint arial translations is long gone. Keep practicing and release a polished product next time.

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What the fuck is wrong with you? I don't understand why you would use a picture of your own dick on your credits page.

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Stop spamming our feeds with your garbage. Most people would've naturally started improving at this point just from the repetition alone but no such progress has been made.

Congratulations on being my first blacklist. Literally more infuriating than guro. At least guro appeals to SOMEONE.

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Well, Itsy, I thought the translation was pretty good. And certainly didn’t notice all the stuff Orasmase mentioned but on a second look it does seem to be there. The font is not the best but it is readable. Some odd font changes though.

If that really is your dick pic on the last page, maybe get a good wax before reshooting the picture.

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