Yui's part only for now.

DILF nothing, that's a fat bastard variant.

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I can buy that he can beat and maul a person without repercussions, somehow. What I can't buy is why is anyone still going to school after that.
"The principal molested a girl and clearly intended to rape her, someone tried to stop him and got beaten and got his hands cut off because of it...see you on Monday"

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What? Did he just? Bro this so mess up.

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Idk why you can't find a native proofreader. Besides the overall bad grammar, this reads extremely poorly. I can literally tell the JP sentences from your translation (or rather, machine translation.)

rough grammar

p.4 this man is a bad news
p.4 yeah... kind of oppressive > missing "he's" but also this doesn't make much sense
p.4 if this man comes > ? come where
p.5 how about we make a stop by > cut "make a"
p.6 i've > kinda weird to contract "I have" here
p.8 In this way, in modern literature, themes, subjects [...] > this is complete nonsense
p.8 principal, is there something... > Is something the matter, Principal...?
p.8 I just do a tour > I'm just doing
p.10 Indonesian sentence lol
p.12 You're breaking a law > the law

and more

Also, do you REALLY need TWO credit pages?

Last edited on 20 November 2023, 00:35.

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Did you fill the bubbles out yourself or is a non-transparent bubble ver. out there?

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Wtf Ugly Bastard commit crimes as its normal and nobody report him to Police? Well its hentai so Police not exsist in this world. So Ugly Bastard go full on Judge Dredd mode i am a Law. Damn poor teacher get his hands cut off cuz try to protect girl. And all others have power to stop him but jest let him go? Maybe this Ugly Bastard from same league as this one https://e-hentai.org/g/2554348/582ec38377/? Cuz he do same things fuck the law cuz he is law.

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@vulture_ireng dude, next time use chatgpt to correct your English grammar/spellings, it's literally free

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THIS is seriously fucked up. You have to be wrong in the head to fap to this.

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I agree with @Chris2999, this one is just weird.

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Lmao wtf is going on? At least give us a flimsy excuse like hypnosis or something.

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Temen lu ga ada yang bisa bahasa inggris apa bro? Cari lah yang bisa proofread

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i need there to be at least some logic before i start fapping....

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NTR hypnosis/mindcontrol is so low tier yet I'm willing to accept it in this scenario because just how fucking ridiculous this is. Fuck it man any some sort of excuse would have been enough.
That said after page 17 whoever still went to school deserve all the bad shit that happens there.

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@Yukipo~ @ChronicLogic why would you need mind control here? He is clearly doing some mafia-type stuff, with the "accidents" that befall his enemies but arent traced back to him. Maybe its bribes, blackmailing officials or just connections, but the result is the same. The explaination is here, its just not stated outright

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There are only 2 types of perfect anime girls. Tanlined tomboys with pixie cut and thick librarian girls with glasses and braids.

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I AM THE LAW

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School shooters got nothing on these NPC'S.

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Meh, nice concept but the art is really below average...

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artist is just taking the piss lmao

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This translation hurt my eyes, body, and soul. It was worse than NTR part 😢

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