As always, support the official artist in anyway you can!!!

Fanbox: https://tanukin.fanbox.cc/
Fantia: https://fantia.jp/fanclubs/502505

Original comic purchasable sites:
Booth: https://glutamic-acid.booth.pm/items/4184811
Toranoana: https://ec.toranoana.jp/joshi_r/ec/item/040030964357/

...i wont weaponize the rough translation tag but jfc at least read what youve written before uploading...

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战！（裤裆特写）

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hi @varroami im really sorry that the translation isn't up to your standard. I do try my best with these and want to keep improving my translation game; so if you could point out a few examples of what I could do better next time i would appreciate it.

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你叫二爷来日士郎我都可以吃cp，找个路人就是单纯南通发情。

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Don't use the downsampled gallery images. Download the full-sized images. The original images were around 1410x2010. So by using the downsampled images at 1280x1816, you've automatically given yourself a worse end-product before you even started working.

Typesetting notes:
Keep text centered in the speech bubble and use the same font size across all speech bubbles on a page unless you have a good reason not to.

End sentences with a period. If a sentence continues into another speech bubble use an ellipsis (...) to show that the thought is not finished.

With an all-caps font, always use capital I with "I", "I'm", "I'll", and "I've", all other words should use lowercase i, even if they're at the start of a sentence.

Don't use <3, use ♡. Though the original text uses ~ so you should stick to using a tilde.

Don't use "ur" in dialogue bubbles.

Typographical errors:
Page 5: "theres" --> "there's"

Page 6: "dont" --> "don't"; "Im" --> "I'm"

Page 7: "shouldnt" --> "shouldn't"; "theres" --> "there's"; "your" --> "you're"

Page 8: "its" --> "it's"; "Ill" --> "I'll"

Page 25: "to fast" --> "too fast"; "its" --> "it's"; "lets" --> "let's"

And it just continues on like this. Make sure contractions have apostrophes, make sure you aren't mixing up the possessive "your" with the contraction "you're". Get someone to proofread your stuff before you upload it.

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设爆了，狠狠地超，就要看他这副堕落的样子（）

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