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2023/02/18 - Updated chapter 16
2023/03/13 - Updated chapter 17
2023/04/13 - Updated chapter 18
2023/05/25 - Updated chapter 19
2023/07/31 - Updated chapter 20 part 1 & 2
2023/10/31 - Updated chapter 21 part 1 & 2
2023/11/23 - Updated chapter 22 part 1

its pretty good i really liked the artoria book from the same artist but what kaedeko contribution in this work exactly?

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Oh shit this is my favorite type of NTR, where they actually bother to let us know the main guy and the girl before the NTR downfall.

It gives the NTR more spice when you actually know the characters a bit beforehand.

I'm not a big fan of NTR where the MC is just a passing background character we barely know.

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太慢了，一点点看根本没感觉

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when will be finished this doujin they will almost reach 1 year and still not finished

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Its gonna be ongoing forever bruh

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之前的姿势都是正常位，让人感觉只有黄毛在主动。
但这次的最后一页，投射出的影子是后入，这就有了女主主动接受和渴求的意味。
虽然是小细节但是真的很色气。

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这B画的好慢啊
有这时间普通NTR大户都画四五本了

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oh fuuuuuuccckkk she got properly breed and dominated, there's no way she'll resist from turning into his property.
this is so good now

oh fuuuuuuccckkk the steamy cheating raw sex is so close lest fucking gooooooooooooooooo

YOOOOO 2 pages a month???? POOOGGG
(lol)

Last edited on 27 May 2024, 12:53.

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I feel quite disappointed with how the story is progressing. All the recent updates have been mostly foreplay and after. The actual intercourse is behind screen doors and small panels with little expression. Normally a bit of that is nice but we're already almost 50 pages in. Plus updates are dreadfully slow at a couple pages monthly. The art-style is nice with decent build up and potential so it feels even worse being invested in it. I just hope it's around 90+ pages to give it enough room for good action and closure but at this rate, waiting for a finished product will take forever.

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if you feel like your cuckold porn is something to be disappointed over then you might as well get disappointed in yourself

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本子里经典的黄毛一次救美大于苦主和母猪的数年交往

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笑死，自己武力值随便打混混结果硬是被救有一下就献身了，不愧是本子女主

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damn, at pg48 its happening!!!

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@wownine
Is that what this is? If that's the case why even date the original boy in the first place then? Or even show her thoughts so we see this mindset reflected properly? Well I'll take your answer and use it to read this as a new perspective cause, at least if it was actually like this then I could get into it way easier. So thank you for the honest answer.

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女友买套见男主一句话不说还跑了，男主都没有点疑心的，只能说小伙子挺乐观(

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这作者是不是画太久了忘了开头女主可是能帮苦主赶走不良的啊
怎么现在被人搭讪就变成随随便便就会被牵手不反击的弱女子了，黄毛你还练了采阴补阳的神功吗

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色是真的色，慢也是真的慢

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@Rou123

Yep... creators who release their work in paywalled sites are incentivized to slow their progress as much as possible because the money is guaranteed before the work is complete.

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Meh. It's definitely being drawn out. You know how it'll end. Predictable endings: Takumi will find out or run away after the tanned blonde guy beats him in a match along with sending videos of her being dominated or she'll end up pregnant and the kid will think it's his while she continues to cheat on him.

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The guy invented how to cuck his fans and has been releasing manga page by page for 1+ year. Fucking prodigy

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I guess the real netorare was subbing to his fanbox all along

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Damn bro we’re about to see this nakadashi in 2026

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这拖延症不去cien做黄油可惜了

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I never felt this cucked so much before subbing to this fanbox and waiting this shit which definitely was not milked at all. Luckily, it was just a dream and I found out I didn't even subbed to this fucker!

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兄弟们完结后帮个忙烧给我

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The real netorare was the timegate paywall along the way LMAO

Last edited on 27 January 2024, 03:50.

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So this is the Star Citizen of ntr hentai…

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The patreon system made the artist extremely lazy.

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Never imagine I would laugh this much in a comment section of a hentai site lmao, u guys are genius lol

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我就看看是武田先做完遊戲，還是這邊先畫完，有會通靈的兄弟們下個注

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My god imagine the insult in calling these updates a “Chapter” to his supporters (Yozo calls them that in his fanbox). One Piece is probably at Ch. 58000 at this point

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2 months for 1 page

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See you in 2 months guys!

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Sigh, this kind of method become more common in doujin. No vanilla or ntr genre are safe from this cursed ritual. All of these fault because of stupid patreon-like bs system that encourage extreme laziness and make people try to scam their supporter or worse.

F for those who still or newly subbed to this bastard. Ya all definitely will experience the greatest feeling of being cucked through paywalled pages and then wait for either 2-8 month just for 1-3 pages.

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有一说一，yozo和枫子这两人是真的能摸，再过两个月就要有两年半了，然后一共就挤牙膏挤出了50页。

作为横向对比，浅川也是在差不多的时间（隔了一周时间——21年12月11号）开始卖他的《夏のやりなおし》系列，截至23年3月一共出了四部，每部都超过80页（就第一部最少）。第五部从宣布开始制作到现在有9个月，也是目前唯一有明确提及会有延期的一部（从23年底到今年春天，可能还会延至初夏）。

而这个月初发售的，同样是剑道JK题材的《心折れ、雌堕ちる。》（全篇50页左右），作者第一次公开样图是在去年10月初。再合理推一下时间的话，可能从C102结束后起作者就开始着手准备了，算下来总共6~8个月左右。

只能说有些东西一有比较对象就藏不住了

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2 months for 4 panels with the same background? This is less than the bare minimum

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see you in 2025 or something, maybe at that point we're halfway through

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理解一下，技能点在了作者画工上而不是他的剧情塑造上，剧情这块前后割裂程度简直不像是一部作品里的。女主前面能赶走混混，后面居然因为随随便便的理由就这么全盘送出去，和自己的青梅竹马有这么多年的感情基础，也算是两情相悦，初体验都做过了，后面被黄毛简单救一下，哈哈，轻松沦陷，合着女主前面与青梅那么多年的感情都是放屁呗。都说慢工出细活，以为是能磨出什么虐心大作（确实很虐，我的大脑被虐到蜷缩）结果是抽象至极。漫友请不要说什么“只要色就行了”“看本不要带脑子”之类的，这种话适用于只看正戏冲完就走的观众，我这种一般全篇都看的当然多少要带点脑子，作者的画功毋庸置疑，但剧情就是很抽象，就是明摆着把观众当弱智，要画剧情就应该琢磨琢磨好好画，不然直接话个几十页正戏多好，一点不费智商。我只能说这剧情拉低了整本的水平

希望各位理解，剧情也是组成本子的一部分，总有观众是会把剧情看一遍的，有不好的地方得提出来，我也并非无脑乱喷。

Last edited on 28 May 2024, 10:19.

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Page 62 was from July 2024 update... this series hasn't had new pages in six months.

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这更新给我气笑了

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上一次更新是去年五月，更新了一页，newbee

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byd气笑了

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开始一月两页，后来一月一页，后来俩月一页，再后来干脆不更了，fanbox，推上也没解释，md怕不是不更了

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质量很高，页数也不少，全本出来的话卖贵点也完全愿意买。。。但这样一页几个月看了几年，已经有点失去兴趣了。。。。

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赶紧画个结局吧，别再往下画了，没意思了

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牛逼，别25年都完结不了

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神人，能画一辈子

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I really hope the fucking ramps up from here, or the payoff from all this foreplay and teasing will not have been worth it. This shit is dragging on for too long.

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@Remm77 Kaedeko was M. Night Shyamalan all along

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还没快进到结局呀，我都想好了女主在道馆众人面前被插爆彻底恶堕，龟男崩溃大哭，这画几年了搁这养生呢

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本子界的富坚义博么？ 233333

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MD！换了个号赞助问更新情况又给拉黑了我，还删评我艹。第五次了，这吊作者评论区就只剩好评了中评都清

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