This is my second time translating a doujin I just hope I can get better also because at first I saw that a lot of doujin (which I thought were good) weren't translated, so I tried to learn how to do it

raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1630453/3df892050a/

It looks like you use the downsized images to translate. You should use the best quality raw you can find.

Base +8, Woz777 +1, darkwing42 +50, darkblane257 +8, TCJJ +9, wakkawalla +7

why are you subjecting us to your english practice?

Base +6, Keric22 +7, oheye +9, Kaelthor -6, Woz777 -1, mentosftw +6, ZaHallen +6, Nahkaparturi +6, CrossD -23, swordpaladin +9, Takepyon +6, darkblane257 +8, SeptimustheSeventh +3, and 8 more...

I want to laugh , but i can't tell what's writted here seriously when some words like "preverted" are cut preverte-d because "why should font size matter ?"

Base +7, Gabs999 +6, Majorfoxy1990 +6, wakkawalla +7

the doujin scene of granblue is just happen to be dead now you made it even more dead, thanks

Base +7, Majorfoxy1990 +6, Mashuqur +9, Fofotron +19, TCJJ +9