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One Serving Choice

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Posted:2023-12-01 04:26
Parent:2685106
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Language:English  
File Size:4.15 GiB
Length:391 pages
Favorited:981 times
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Average: 4.22
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Posted on 07 April 2021, 20:10 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -100
this joker posted the first page but not the actual porn smh
Posted on 07 April 2021, 22:17 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +40
Please tell me this isn't some soft reboot for kip. This is a different character, right?
Posted on 07 April 2021, 23:54 by:   La_Mangouste    PM
Score +132
ffs wait at least 4 pages, it's fucking etiquette in here. Never read the faq?
Posted on 08 April 2021, 00:21 by:   EverFreeGaming    PM
Score -100
@La_Mangouste Yeah it's recommended, not a rule. This is an brand new ongoing comic
Posted on 08 April 2021, 02:54 by:   ciln    PM
Score +155
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Last edited on 12 August 2022, 04:57.
Posted on 08 April 2021, 04:01 by:   Zee capten    PM
Score -37
Misleading tags, no less, come on. Maybe give it a few months and some of those will apply but they're barely chubby at page 1.
Posted on 08 April 2021, 08:09 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -100
i wasnt being serious ffs
fucking idiots
Posted on 08 April 2021, 14:41 by:   EverFreeGaming    PM
Score +26
Literally no part of your comment pointed to it being a joke. People take things literally, provide context bud
Posted on 08 April 2021, 20:21 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -100
not my fault yall are fuckin retarded lol
anyway, done with this convo
Posted on 08 April 2021, 22:33 by:   Xx360BlitzkriegxX    PM
Score +73
Welcome back to another edition of "40 pages to get good"
Posted on 15 April 2021, 04:29 by:   bbwadmirer    PM
Score -100
I love down voting the stupid who have no patience. The people who only bitch are just whiny little bitches who are probably 14 year old boys who don't know anything.
Last edited on 20 April 2021, 13:14.
Posted on 20 April 2021, 01:31 by:   Soldier A    PM
Score +96
>claims to love downvoting people
>makes a comment, which means they can't downvote people

?
Posted on 20 April 2021, 07:14 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +1
Jesus. He sure knows how to tell a story that's thoroughly unfunny, frequently confusing, and just achingly slow to unfold. I just don't even understand who this shit is aimed at. I know it's a fap comic; you know it's a fap comic; hell, I think even HE - deep down - knows it's a fap comic.

But then you see page, after page, after PAGE of just mindless drivel before it gets to the actual sauce. And what's the fucking point of that? To torture the audience? Who enjoys this? And if you really do claim to, what about these wooden, trope-infested characters, stretched out plots, and literally dozens of consecutive needless, action-less panels do you enjoy?
Posted on 21 April 2021, 06:42 by:   Nagibator    PM
Score -43
I don't understand why everyone is so angry. You are given FREE access to a quality product, if it pisses you off that this author always has long preludes, wait a couple of months for the comic to come out and then downvote. However, most (with rare exceptions) of his completed works receive grades of at least 4.5, which means he does everything right.
Posted on 21 April 2021, 10:08 by:   Magmas    PM
Score +31
@BattleshipGascogne

If you have these great issues with Kipteitei's work, why not just... not look at it? Clearly other people enjoy the art and even the build up. If you don't, there is plenty of other content you can go to. You seem to have laid it out as you having both a personal and moral issue with Kip and his work, yet you still clicked on an image set clearly labelled as being his. Like, what did you expect? Why bother?

"No, I don't give a shit that this is free - because there isn't a chance in hell that I'd pay this prick for this kind of repetitive tripe."

And yet here you are, whining about it anyway, free content that you have absolutely no requirement to consume but are upset about for... some reason.
Posted on 21 April 2021, 23:24 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -66
@Magmas

You poor people are nothing if not predictable. Why complain about a thing? First, because the artist is a jerk who squanders his significant talent on doing something he isn't good at (he's excellent at drawing, but horrid at spinning a yarn), and who bans people who question why there's a need to string his audience along when the plots are so superficial. There's little that riles me more than those who cannot stomach criticism. Thus, it suits me to dump shit all over his work.

But, beyond that, there's this: being a weight gain fetishist is like wandering the Sahara on the back of a parched camel. Every so often, you stumble onto a palm-dappled oasis, and rush eagerly to the edges of the cool ponds within. Rarely, the waters of this refuge are a sweet nectar. Most of the time, they're drinkable, but not completely satisfying. And then there are the magnificent catastrophes that some how manage to pump out fuel oil onto the sands. As a wanderer making his way across these lonely dunes, I can't pick and choose where I seek succor - I go where the water is, regardless of quality. So you'd better believe that when I haul up to some tar pit like this, I'm going to bitch about it.
Posted on 19 May 2021, 01:10 by:   Azperez    PM
Score +167
For those wondering why there are low scores and hate comments for the author's work despite the art quality, essentially when you take Nigga Moments: noun - "Perpetual "conflicts" between niggas over trivial or ignorant things." and add Nigga Synthesis: noun - "Perpetual "bond" between niggas over trivial or ignorant things." you get a complete fucking disaster. Remember this equation, you'll need it later. Nigga Moments + Nigga Synthesis = Complete Disaster.

It started off with a bunch of people asking questions about the author's projects and genuinely providing constructive criticism which slowly devolved into an attempt to override the author due to disgruntled entitled individuals not getting their desired outcome within said works, Since the author doesn't work in PR but essentially is a smut writer, his response to people's whining and barking was not sugar coated/ filtered which lead to people getting ignored/ banned.

Those given a harsh reality check and put in their place by the author began bonding with like-minded people over their mutual butthurt and began seeking out the author's works to downvoting anything and everything related to it and/or questioning their motives while upvoting their own remarks regardless of how petty they are.

Essentially, this creates a perpetual cycle where the author chooses not to improve and doesn't properly receive constructive criticism due to the blind hate and the entitled mob hating the works because they don't deliver the needed ointment for their butthurt.
Posted on 17 July 2021, 05:43 by:   velour    PM
Score +3
Why is there never any fucking in this guy's comics? What am I supposed to be jacking off to?
Posted on 17 July 2021, 18:35 by:   Xhenos    PM
Score +19
@velour

They include guys sometimes, but this site DOES have a yaoi section if you'd like.

Oh if you meant if HIS work, look up the babysitting one, it's literally about a guy and his baby sitter hitting it off....

Or don't, it's up to you.
Posted on 18 July 2021, 17:13 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -33
i stand by what i said before, except add 44 pages onto it.
Posted on 19 July 2021, 05:06 by:   MissLilygant    PM
Score +27
@BattleshipGascogne | Dude, what the hell are you on about?
You CAN choose where you decide to drink from if it's weight gain content you want. There are plenty other creators that do the exact thing that you're asking for. (Better-With-Salt, Axel-Rosered, Anastimafilia and pixiveo. they don't make comics often, but their stuff's still pretty damn good.)
I've gone literal YEARS without looking at Kip's art regularly, because much like the rest of you, I don't particularly care for it. But if the guy's not gonna take your criticism, then what's the point in being perpetually hateful towards him?

Here, you want a good comic that SORT OF tells a story but also gets right into it? Check out 'Ayano's Weight Gain Journal' (and other comics by the same artist while you're at it.) It's long, there's lots of pages for it already, and the art is fantastic.

Listen, I understand that it is hard to find good WG content. I actively look for it all the time, so I would DEFINITELY know.
BUT, that is not an excuse to essentially dogpile one specific artist because of the way they make their own art.
If you find a pit of liquid and it turns out to not be drinkable, sure. Understandable that you get upset. But when you KNOW that a specific pit produces stuff undrinkable to you, why do you keep coming back to it? Go find something actually drinkable instead. Who knows, you might find one that DOESN'T give you a hate boner more than it gives you ACTUAL boners.

FUCK!
Posted on 24 July 2021, 12:43 by:   Filippo739    PM
Score +65
You know, guys, if you want raw action there are many other comics on this site and porn videos on the web. Not to be a moralist and go like "Don'T lIkE It, dOn'T REad iT" but seriously, many of you appearantly already know this artist and their comics, what are you complaining for?
Posted on 28 July 2021, 19:19 by:   koghs    PM
Score -85
Good evening
Ayano's Weight Gain Journal is shit
Fuck off please
Thanks in advance
Posted on 31 July 2021, 21:08 by:   MissLilygant    PM
Score +120
@koghs |
Evening back to ya
I disagree
Thank you for coming
Posted on 07 August 2021, 23:35 by:   Luxe4Hearts    PM
Score +40
I like my weight gain to have some build up. I like the story so far, and if you have a problem with it, then there are other things you could be doing.
Posted on 10 August 2021, 15:54 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -1
@koghs
its not though its very tame, yes, but its less of a hentai and more of an ongoing story-type thing
unlike this garbage though, ayano is actually good enough to fap to if you really try, though honestly i just like seeing what the next page is in that series at this point
Posted on 14 August 2021, 20:05 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +120
No matter how I feel about the comic, the Kipteitei comment section never lets me down.
Last edited on 30 August 2021, 21:50.
Posted on 28 September 2021, 20:56 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -19
@Luxe4Hearts well he's definitely setting a new record for 'build up' this time - 73 pages, no sex, no fondling, a tiny amount of weight gain on one character. Is it 'built up' enough yet? Can he commence the unsatisfying 5 pages of payoff?

Here's the thing: I like plot, too. Really. But I don't appreciate directionless meandering. There are already like 10 loose ends in this comic, plus DOZENS of pages of needless filler that any other artist could have slickly condensed into a few panels (or just eliminated outright).

The fact of the matter is, there's a difference between world building and sloppy, directionless sight seeing. Good authors are as much concerned with a tight narrative as they are a grand tour - yes, there's always more to see, but the audience shouldn't be shown anything unless it's necessary. The trick is to find a good balance between an arc and a showcase of visual wonder. Unfortunately, that happy medium has not been struck here.

...

But, of course, that's assuming that Kip is doing this accidentally... that it's being done in error; in good faith. It's not. The purpose of this stretched-out yarn is SINGULARLY to farm pathetic fanboys on Patreon. More pages = more dough. And that's why this is so God-awful. Because Kip doesn't give a shit about this either. He's preying on desperate people with page after page of empty, low-effort content, knowing full well that a little army of acolytes will defend any steaming turd he squeezes out. Yes, I am not paying for this. But other people are, and he's using them.

Real artists share a gift - if they make money doing it, grand. But most of us starve. Our work is more important than money. Kipteitei has his priorities inverted.
Last edited on 28 September 2021, 21:12.
Posted on 06 October 2021, 11:13 by:   MissLilygant    PM
Score +40
@BattleshipGascogne | Still here complaining, are ya? What, was the fifth time not enough?

Honestly, man. When are you gonna let this pointless vendetta against Kip go? You already know you don't like his work, yet you come back over and over again, just to continue complaining about how bad Kip is at telling stories.

I mean, for gods sake, I've seen you on other galleries on this very site, where you complain about the quality not being up-to-par with what you'd want.
If you want something to be specifically tailored to you, then fucking COMMISSION someone.
Posted on 06 October 2021, 18:36 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -70
comic still sucks draw porn please
Posted on 06 October 2021, 21:42 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -3
@MissLilygant I'll continue to criticize low-effort crap as much as I like. Stop me.
Posted on 08 October 2021, 15:45 by:   Just_another_FA    PM
Score -37
@BattleshipGascogne Would you happen to have the general details on kip's history and drama? I never paid any attention to him because he's a belly-only autist and I turned my nose up at his art a decade or so ago when I first stumbled upon him. The fact that all of his fans act like rabid paypigs didn't do him any favors.
Posted on 27 October 2021, 05:09 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score -45
surprise surprise its still shit
Posted on 27 October 2021, 13:17 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -59
@Just_another_FA He's a pre-op (or, as far as I know) transexual who lies about being a real girl. He's apparently catfished a few people over the years, since he has a rather feminine face. I'm honestly not too deeply involved in his goings on, but word on the street is that he's about as creepy as people come.
Posted on 27 October 2021, 15:27 by:   Just_another_FA    PM
Score -54
ABattleshipGascogne Jesus, I just expected him to be a huge douche who gets off on manipulating retards. This sounds way too similar to bedbendersinc's tranny bullshit.
Posted on 27 October 2021, 16:43 by:   MissLilygant    PM
Score +30
@Just_another_FA Wooow. Dropping the T-slur in a community like this, which has quite a few trans people in it. That's bold.

It's incredibly moronic and vile. But nonetheless bold.

Also, @BattleshipGascogne
Citation Needed
Posted on 27 October 2021, 22:41 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score -27
@MissLilygant I'm sorry, what is the word of the week that we're supposed to be calling these mentally ill predators? I don't give a shit what the "community" thinks; first because it's a fucking porn site, and if you're here for anything but the occasional fap, you're a tool, and second because the moment I derive my morality from a mob of dipshit progressive peasants is the moment I have lost my own grip on reality.
Last edited on 27 October 2021, 23:05.
Posted on 28 October 2021, 21:31 by:   Just_another_FA    PM
Score -62
@MissLilygant Firstly, eat shit for being triggered over my stating that a tranny is a tranny. Would you prefer 41-percenter, or kid-diddler? Are you a tranny along with kip and that's why you're so triggered? Are you one of kip's paypigs defending his honor for a sketch, or do you do it for free?

Secondly, e-hentai is not your hugbox and no one gives a damn about your feelz you delusional son of a bitch. If you don't like people ridiculing retards who mutilate their genitalia because they can't handle the expectations and responsibilities of manhood, then hop off the internet and crawl to your nearest dilation station. "Moronic and vile" damn them's some sick bantz, you really showed me man.
Posted on 29 October 2021, 13:00 by:   Gojii    PM
Score +103
I'm just of the view that this is cute and fetish oriented, but this isn't freaking porn. Almost 90 pages and the closest to seeing anything was the low riding pants in the recent cafeteria scene.

I enjoyed kip's earlier stuff, and didn't realize this was theirs at first. Was amused at a few moments (the project topic choice was amusing), but its kind of underwhelming and a chore to read through.

I'm not sure why there's the fanatical defense for a long drag out work like this. You could read the first 20 pages and jump to either helping Aika or the first scene Tessa is hitting on her/the project, and then music video and not miss much.

H works don't go more than 25-40 pages max without something going on. About half or more reads like filler. If they're going for a slice of life/romance comic, great. The Tessa music video stuff was nice, but idk. If it's a manga that's intended on going 40, 50 even 100 chapters, great.

But its heavily implied its more than just a fetishized romance work based on people's comments defending it, for most of a year now. Its nice and all, but kind of a let down/underwhelming work.

Side note about the comments. Why do gringos have to always to stick an oar out to defend other groups (yet tell us how to refer to ourselves, "muh latin-x" lmao)? Nobody asked you to speak for them silly internet activist. Go clean up a park or the needles all over your streets and do something useful. So desperate to posture even using anonymous internet accounts on a porn site, lul.

Enjoy what you like or don't. I'd hope this improves and will check back every few months maybe? idk.
Last edited on 29 October 2021, 13:20.
Posted on 29 October 2021, 18:39 by:   Just_another_FA    PM
Score -22
@Goji I really have no idea why paypigs do this, its almost more like a chemical reaction than a conscious choice on their part. Kip has made it abundantly clear that he thinks nothing of his supporters and would likely spit in their faces if given the chance. Maybe its because misslillygant is also a tranny and thus the hivemind defense conditioning kicks in? Regardless, he's making kip's fans look even worse and no amount of whining will save this failure-to-launch comic.
Posted on 31 October 2021, 01:36 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +109
Broken down, it's as simple as this: I wouldn't give a damn about Kip being a douche if the work wasn't lousy/artificially extended. The original Breakfast With Sister was <30 pages, and was pretty much all stuffing/softcore incest. The art was rough, but the content was undeniably strong. Ever since then, the page counts have gone up, and the action has gone down. And now, as @Goji said, I'm not even sure if this qualifies as fetish porn anymore. It's become bad, fake western Manga with a slight kink.

Do I have problems with Kip the person? Yes. Would I really care if this was still as good as BWS? Probably not. Because, like I said, this is a porn site, and I am here to fap. But I can't fap to this.
Posted on 31 December 2021, 09:06 by:   4tech7    PM
Score +3
I love the facial expressions that Kip uses. If Kip came out with a book of emotions, I would totally wait for it to be fully complete. The little “:<“ face is really cute.
Posted on 01 February 2022, 05:38 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +36
Lol I think he's honestly given up on even trying to insert softcover content at this point. I can't even follow the story anymore - it's so incredibly dialogue-heavy.
Posted on 01 February 2022, 06:55 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score +66
Damn, 124 pages and still no action. I'm beginning to think the artist here isn't that great at their job!
tldr; shit still fucking sucks
Posted on 18 February 2022, 05:33 by:   aladin112    PM
Score -18
First thing from this author I've seen, dunno who they are. No idea about the drama, not even into stuffing - I kinda thought there's gonna be vore.

All I know is I've kept on reading and suddenly found myself 50 pages in and caring about the characters. Having no priors, I think it's great. Would make an awesome VN too. Maybe not graphic, but very hot if you let yourself sink in and project properly. Or just... close this and open a more explicit gallery if you don't like this one.
Posted on 27 April 2022, 12:56 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +54
Well, here we are...160 pages in.

- Very little actual weight gain.
- No sex.
- Tons of talking.
- Even more unnecessary angst.
- A wooden, predictable plot telling a largely pointless story that's focused on bad people being soulless.

He used to at least have the decency to end these series, but this one has turned into the comic equivalent of a daytime soap.

By the way, I know everyone involved in this comic is a lipstick lesbian, but is it really believable that NONE of these characters enjoys being penetrated? Not one? Really?
Posted on 27 April 2022, 17:34 by:   LurelightDevil    PM
Score -24
@BattleshipGascogne | Y'ever thought that, maybe yelling on a porn site about your kinks isn't how you get people to make the things you want?

I get wanting stuff. I mean, I feel like more than half the stuff on here isn't the kind of thing I've found particularly up my alley. But then again, the artists don't KNOW what I want. They don't know me.
Unless I've told them directly, I can't really complain that they don't draw the stuff I wanna see. (And even then.)

You've been pretty consistently coming back here, even despite knowing you're not gonna get what you want.
I'd consider buying a commission if I were you. I'm sure there's plenty of artists willing to fulfill your requests.
Posted on 27 April 2022, 20:21 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score +42
"I can't believe it's not shit!" (because that IS unbelievable. it's still shit.) kip is a fucking moron.
Posted on 28 April 2022, 02:47 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +70
@LurelightDevil I come back because a) there isn't that much posted under the weight gain filter, b) kip used to produce some rather satisfying work, and most importantly, c) I like shitting all over this garbage and watching twat apologists like yourself twist into pretzels trying to defend something that ISN'T EVEN PORN.

What fetish IS this trash fulfilling, precisely? Asexualism? Despair? People who get off on numerous, unnecessary text bubbles? By all means, fap away to this tome; this passionless, anal-retentive, tormented bible of angst. But you're not going to succeed in preventing me from laughing at you for it, or slinging criticism at its soulless prick of an author.
Posted on 28 April 2022, 21:53 by:   LurelightDevil    PM
Score -24
@BattleshipGascogne | God damn, dude. Way to get aggressive over someone telling not to waste your breath on something that is garbage, which you know is garbage, and probably still will be garbage when it eventually finishes.

Didn't even actually defend it, btw. I haven't read it, and I'm not gonna bother with it because I have better things to do. (That and I've actually NEVER really enjoyed Kip's work, even when it was "good".)

But like, If you wanna make keep angering yourself and shout about how bad this one artist is for... creating art you don't enjoy, then don't let me stop ya.
All I'm saying is; If you want some actual QUALITY, ya might just have to look elsewhere. (That and like. Actually talk to an artist directly.)

EDIT: Actually, the more I think about it... maybe it's only misleading because it's being uploaded on this site in the first place.
Like, 160 pages and counting. No action to speak of, yeah? That sounds like a little too much time, even for something that is SUPPOSED to have fetish elements tied into a plot.
Now as said, I haven't read this, so I COULD be completely wrong on this. (Which, I am expecting to be, so do correct me if I'm wrong, I suppose.)
But here's my thought.

It is extremely rare (and by that, I mean I can literally only count one instance of it actually being the case) where the person uploading the comic is the same as the one who initially drew it.
Thus, I'm pretty darn certain that this one is also indepently uploaded as well.

Could it be that this isn't actually supposed to BE anything explicit at all?
Like, it's supposed to be just a softcore belly kink comic with perhaps, a touch of angstiness and fluff for those who enjoy that type of thing?
And the only reason it's "disappointing" is because somebody is uploading it, under the pretense that it's GOING to be something explicit because the artist has made such work before?
Just a thought!
Last edited on 29 April 2022, 21:17.
Posted on 18 June 2022, 14:12 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +70
I think the main issue with this one, in particular, is that it's such a fucking cocktease in addition to having tons of filler. Like, there on 180 - tits. But does anyone fuck? Does Tessa get penetrated? Does anyone even kiss? No, of course not.

Beyond all the cynical ploys for dough, I think Kip truly believes that he is telling a story that is both compelling AND erotic. By contrast, I see this entire thing as a dark pit with occasional sparkles of diamond embedded in the walls. Are those little nuggets worth spelunking through the obnoxious remainder? YMMV.
Posted on 12 September 2022, 22:42 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score +13
its updated. time to continue blasting it for how awful it is
Posted on 13 September 2022, 14:13 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +65
It's just so long. And every time it seems like it's getting somewhere, he resets.
Posted on 17 September 2022, 11:03 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +24
213 pages in I suspect there are three distinct characters in this, but I'm still not sure.
Posted on 27 September 2022, 22:44 by:   GWZ-KTS    PM
Score +50
Hmmm...

You know what? I genuinely Kip is a troll. He's a troll and he truly enjoys doing nothing to piss you guys off.

Look at page 165 and 166. He had room for a cheap navel fingering here. He chose to barely do it. Do it in a way, that nothing here is truly... "there". He's a complete artist now, he KNOWS how to do things. He just doesn't want to do it, or even worse, he WANTS things not to be done.

Again, page 176. Could've been the start of something here, but... again. No. For reasons.

Kip is a troll, guys. He's feeding on your rage. Feed him indifference. It's time he knew what "nothing" feels like.
Posted on 04 January 2023, 08:13 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +66
@GWZ-KTS. Kip is in an echo chamber at Patreon; I don't even think he reads/responds to comments on Deviantart (there's a growing faction of followers there who are equally as fed up).

In a nutshell: people are paying for this garbage, so it will remain garbage. Kip is hardly a troll. If anything, he's religiously earnest, and becomes completely enraged at the slightest criticism. I know because I have seen it - he used to ban anyone who even questioned his art over on DA.

So, no, he REALLY believes this is magnificent, and the simps who pay for it REALLY believe this is satisfying fap material.
Posted on 05 January 2023, 00:58 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score +45
i get harder reading forbes articles
Posted on 12 February 2023, 15:13 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +32
Lol. Latest development in this story on deviantart: Generic lady 1 has managed to stuff generic lady 2 full of sushi. Which would be a promising situation in most other content like this, but not from this author. Do they fuck? No, and frankly, I didn't expect that. Do they go somewhere else to eat more? No. Do they even kiss? Come on. Does generic lady 1 wrap up the scene by sending generic lady 2 home in a taxi? Bingo.

How many pages will the next build-up to nothing last? I doubt even Kip knows.
Posted on 05 March 2023, 12:18 by:   Phoenix Zeriff    PM
Score -27
Personally, I couldn't Imagine being rude and complaining about free content that you don't have to look at or get. I just honestly can't imagine being such a loser and yet there are so many Kip watchers that are those such losers.
Posted on 18 March 2023, 15:58 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +36
@Phoenix Zeriff: But it's not free content. Even though I'm not, people are paying him to make this. He's a professional and thus doesn't deserve that free pass. I'd leave it if I suspected Kip was naively doing his best. But I don't.
Posted on 08 June 2023, 03:44 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +53
I just don't even understand what this is about anymore. It feels like it was written by AI. Like there are so many threads introduced here and then dropped. What even *is* the story?
Posted on 12 June 2023, 09:14 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +34
@BattleshipGascogne: I think that's it. Kips output has reached a point where he has enough garbage to train an AI model. Shitical mass, if you will. The question is, is it just the story?
Posted on 13 September 2023, 20:26 by:   JackyDD    PM
Score +12
I like Kip’s art. Have liked it for years. However, Kip has this horrible, HORRIBLE habit of dragging the story out. Just when you think something’s going to happen, it gets interrupted, and we don’t get any payoff.

I like the story he’s telling, and I like the characters, but this constant “it’s happening, it’s happening, it’s- OH MOTHERFUCKER, ANOTHER INTERCEPT!” drains me of any good will. I want to finish this story just to see what the payoff is, but I’m terrified of wasting my time in the end.
Posted on 13 September 2023, 22:52 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +34
I said this over on Deviantart, but it's worth repeating here: with the potential exception of Tessa, all of the major characters are just variations on mean/bad people (which is to say, they're flawed to the point where they would be considered antagonists in other stories).

The fat one is so stupid and oblivious that she's not worth examining beyond the fact that everything she does hurts someone; Saiya is a self-insert - an almost offensively uncaring and nihilistic bundle of crap who just swerves from gratification to gratification without any thought of consequences or goal in mind. The mean chick (Tessa's homie, who I can never remember the name of) is just... rage. She's an angry ball of fury, and hasn't been given even a hint of redeeming qualities. And then Tessa has some occasional sympathetic moments, but spends most of the comic upset.

If there is a theme to this story, it isn't pleasure or bliss - it's misery. The only time our actors are happy is when it comes at the expense of one of the other players - they can't be content without it directly costing their comrades. So in addition to the story (whatever it is) being insanely long and comically cynical (seriously: the portrayal of men as being exclusively chauvinistic, sports/booze-obsessed losers is telling. There's nothing like writing off half of humanity with broad strokes, Kip), it's also a miserable slog. Because there's never a moment when someone isn't shoving a boulder uphill. And whenever they reach the top? They drop it on the next person.
Posted on 14 September 2023, 09:53 by:   JackyDD    PM
Score +38
@BattleshipGascogne: That’s something I noticed, too. This story is kind of painful, honestly. Every time someone’s feeling GREAT, it gets ruined or interrupted by someone feeling miserable over it. Why can’t they just figure this out and get on with the lovemaking? Why all the misunderstanding?

It’s like Kip is dragging it on for the sake of some buildup, but at this point there’s no payoff that can make this all worth it, unless Kip just makes 200 pages worth of pure, unadulterated, stuffing and belly worship.
Posted on 22 October 2023, 22:11 by:   donglything    PM
Score +12
@JackyDD: I mean, I haven't read the whole thing, but isn't that pain kind of the point? With the title "One serving choice", this is obviously an allegory for cheating, or at least committing to a decision. Saiya can't fully commit to her relationship with aika, I guess because she feels guilty about her influence in aika's life, which causes pain for her other prospective partner, Tessa; who then in turns manipulates and hurts Saiya in an attempt to make saiya commit to her instead. Until she commits to her partner, Saiya's going to keep hurting the people she cares about.
Posted on 23 October 2023, 17:06 by:   Itsews    PM
Score +6
i try to viev my nickname
Posted on 03 December 2023, 21:34 by:   -_-_--_-_-_-__---_    PM
Score +43
Coming back to Kipteitei's galleries just to read BattleshipGascogne's rants is one of my guiltiest pleasures
Posted on 06 April 2024, 00:35 by:   Skittles666    PM
Score +18
nevermind forbes, i get harder looking at readers digest
Posted on 06 April 2024, 04:54 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +18
There's nothing really to say. I wish the characters were more likable. I can enjoy sex scenes when I know nothing about the characters... or like them... or only like one of them.

But when they're are just... bad (not, like, sassy naughty 'mean' girls - but just weasels)? No, I can't get off.
Posted on 06 April 2024, 08:20 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +18
Can't wait to see how Kip is going to derail the current situation into flaccid nothingness.
You can tell he wants to, or he might not have used five panels on it. Do we get another cut back to the other girls? Only time will tell. A lot of time.
Posted on 06 April 2024, 10:19 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +18
@Idealizer the weird thing is, it wouldn't shock me if Aika just randomly shows up at the door, the 3 have a big fight, all fuck, and the comic ends. The most gratuitous conclusion possible for this comic is for all the drama to be suddenly rendered utterly pointless. And that's the ending I'm banking on.
Posted on 07 April 2024, 23:56 by:   AbyssLily    PM
Score +2
Dam…. It’s pretty unhealthy I like chubby girls but these is too much
Posted on 15 April 2024, 23:42 by:   T is for Turtle    PM
Score +6
Loving the comments like "this isn't porn"
Alright? There's so much on this site that also isn't. There's cosplay and artbooks. Half the stuff that just scrapes artist's twitter media / pixiv pages is filled with non-porn stuff. Whats the big deal?
If it isn't for you, find something that is. It's that simple.
Posted on 21 April 2024, 06:20 by:   BattleshipGascogne    PM
Score +18
@Turtle

It's porn. It's just really extended and unsatisfying porn. And most people aren't looking for that when they trying to jerk off. Nor are they generally here on this website for casual reading.
Posted on 04 May 2024, 13:36 by:   Idealizer    PM
Score +18
Aaaaand sexytime is once again called off, after 18 (?) pages of edging.

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