[InCase] Alfie chapter 18 [English][ongoing]

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Posted on 10 September 2023, 22:16 by: freeon696

damn Alfie is such a bitch

Posted on 10 September 2023, 23:20 by: Vorin 22

Ah and so continues the self destructive spiral.

Posted on 10 September 2023, 23:42 by: 13rucell

On the one hand, I can kinda get where Alfie's coming from considering where they left off. On the other hand she's being a bitch.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 04:06 by: FishySoldieR

I totally get it, she's been so angry for so long it's impossible to just let it go all at once no matter how good an apology.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 05:33 by: meficrow

If this doesn't end in at least one incestuous threesome, I'm going to lose all respect for Incase.

Posted on 11 September 2023, 07:13 by: UltraBloodeye

kinda a bitch

Posted on 11 September 2023, 16:51 by: Rikimaruve

No oyakodon, why live

Posted on 11 September 2023, 17:00 by: omen666

Lesbian incest is the only way to salvation.

Posted on 12 September 2023, 00:00 by: 14031961PETER

Hooray New Alfie, Great to see this back I missed it, with New Cummoner as well. And The Rock Cocks as well.
Good bit of Drama, sex and fun to read over the coming winter months..

Posted on 12 September 2023, 08:58 by: superbontino

@FishySoldieR

Yeah, plus she was so ready for a (long desired) confrontation that Vera's apologies caused Alfie's brain to go in full 404 error.

Posted on 14 September 2023, 01:42 by: FloMagol

"But your father is gay, gay af, gay as your gay af elf employer and he is taking dick. He has been taking dick all this fucking time behind our backs" Tell her Vera, destroy this fucking bitch.

Posted on 14 September 2023, 17:19 by: Shannon St.Claire

Firmly rooting for Vera at this point. Of the two, she's the one who's shown to have actually had some growth. I mean, yes, Vera was in the wrong on Kupala night and Alfie is justified in her anger but this presentation shows no growth for Alfie at all. She hasn't learned from her fallout with any of her friends, she hasn't learned from the way people have attempted to use her and then blame her for things. She hasn't taken anything away from how people have abandoned her and her mother is the only one to this point who has shown a dedication to wanting Alfie to be happy. Even her look isn't something she deliberately chose; she was going to go to the Big Party as she was and the Goblins just didn't like how she was dressed. At least with Vera, you could see her changing her look back to pants as a function of her being more adventurous again the way she was when she met Derik.

Posted on 14 September 2023, 19:10 by: Drakhesh

Lo and behold, people are still hating on Alfie.
"Oh, Alfie hasn't learned anything"
What was she supposed to learn? That her own mother said to her face Alfie and her father make her miserable? That her own mother practically called her a deviant for sleeping with a woman? Or that her own mother is a hypocrite of highest order, berating her daughter for sins she herself was more than happy to perform - all of which make the apology ring hollow? Because I think Alfie learned that well.
Or should she had learned she cannot trust her so-called friends since they have no respect for her privacy, dragging out her life into the public with *zero* consideration how it might hurt her? Or how she cannot rely on them since even when she tries to make things right, they will first accept it, but then scorn her anyway? Or how she should expect hypocrisy from them when they condemn her for "being a rat" and "scheming" - but having no qualms about benefitting from what she does - since last time i checked, Lydia and Marco were perfectly content with their new elven boytoy. She had learned that as well.
Or perhaps she should learn that she cannot count for a relationship with Ogze, because gods forbid she does anything wron and the goat lady will send her off to the friendzone, because gods frbid someone being imperfect and making mistakes? She learned that too.

She learned all of it. She learned she will always be scorned, and her attempts to fix things are mocked and disregarded. That her own mother is a hypocrite. She's surrounded by awful peopel who project their shitynes on her - calling her a bad friend when it's them that acted horribly.

And oh sure, Vera has had some growth - except Alfie wasn't there to see it unlike us readers. What did Alfie saw?
She saw her mother, who berated her for sleeping with a married woman, being perfectly happy to let a man be intimate with her - a married woman. The peak of hypocrisy.

Seriously, it's like people expect Alfie to be some paragon of empathy and forgivness when all the people in her life do is betray her trust. "How dare you be upset that your hypocrite mother hurt you and your friends betrayed your trust Alfie - stop beign a bitch and accept their horrible behavior!"

Posted on 15 September 2023, 14:10 by: Rubikscube12

@drakhesh actual 10/10 comment. Alfie is unironically emotionally traumatized and people just expect to just randomly get over that.

Posted on 15 September 2023, 15:38 by: Chojiin

I don’t have a problem with Alfie’s reaction, or think it’s unfair. I also don’t have a problem that she’s in a bit of a… spiral.

What I would have a problem with, and what I see too many people do, is stay in that spiral. Too many people marinate in their pain and anger without taking stock of themselves, and improve despite others.

That’d just make her an emo goth. And while big tittied emo goth havlings are hot, I hope she can find a balance to not be miserable.

Posted on 15 September 2023, 19:31 by: Drakhesh

@Chojiin

The issue is (and here I speak from unpleasant personal experience) that you don't just randomly get off the spiral like that. You need help - be it professional help, or the support of people close to you while you try to fix things.

And keep in mind, Alfie tried to fix herself. Even though the whole situation was not her fault when Lydia and Marco forced her to either admit she's promiscuous and be scorned by society or betray her friends, she tried to move past it, admit to her nature and fix her relationship with her friends. And what was the result?
Ogze her it does not matter and outright admitted she thinks Alfie's sexuality is disgusting, her friends seemingly accept her back but mere days later go back to calling her rat and schemer even though the 'schemes' (if you can call setting up one encounter a scheme) benefit them a lot.

It is often repeated a lot that Alfie is a bad friend and daughter - but honestly, what the fuck is Lydia, Marco and Ogze doing to be good friends. because the list of them being shitty people is long. Bizarrely, the closest thing Alfoe has to actual friend is Hana.

Posted on 15 September 2023, 22:40 by: kuroneko1900

Alfie simply got tired of helping people and receiving a slap in the face in return.

Posted on 17 September 2023, 09:42 by: SilverCut

I still hope that some of the other character received some comeuppance for their shitty behaviour. It seems like Alfie has been the only one eating shit for acting out but all the other characters are Karma Houdinis (*koff* a certain elf *koff*)

Posted on 21 September 2023, 12:05 by: Lelter_skelter

And they all lived bitterly ever after.

Posted on 21 September 2023, 23:13 by: smartz118

If any of you guys actually read the previous 17 chapters of this comic, you would understand Alfie's reaction. She was chased off by her mother, and after months and months of trying to discover herself, she discovers that life is complicated and cruel sometimes, and her mother, the very person who chased her off, wants her back, along with a guide who ends up being her boy-toy in tow. Her earlier interactions with different people and asking them questions is her trying to see which kind of life would suit her because at the moment, the people she is with is really not helping her mental health.
@Shannon St.Claire
Even if Vera had some growth, the fact of the matter is that she was the cause of Alfie's problem, and Alfie wouldn't have been in this situation in the first place if she actually been supportive. Alfie has no idea what Vera has been through, and Vera knows nothing of what Alfie has gone through, so why should Alfie take any of Vera's words at face value when all she has learned is that people say one thing and do another all the time, especially her first antagonist, her mother?

Posted on 22 September 2023, 03:02 by: fuckalfie

Alfie just makes for a shit protagonist. Author is aware she's done negative growing in this whole journey of hers so gotta give it to him, but still. She surrounded herself with shitters, learned absolutely nothing, and now 18 chapters in she can only rage because she's worse than what she started while her mother isn't (so in a way she's proven her right too, however misguided Vera was at the beginning).

Posted on 22 September 2023, 04:23 by: MagicalJuko

I think it's just that all of the character development and interaction took the backseat a bit in order to introduce characters and scenes. Now it is mixing in weird changes in pacing, and after so long, investment into the story is just... tiring. I'm tired. Roving out and exploring new cultures? Fine. Showing off fun designs? Great. Seeing a shortstack milf spank an elf? Fantastic, but BUTTSMITHY started way back in 2010, and even by then the story was well under way.

Longevity is a curse on its own without intervention, as much as I hate to say it. You want to hold onto good things precious to you, but those things warp with time, no matter what.

Posted on 22 September 2023, 13:45 by: erana

This chapter sponsored by Mahou 5 Estrellas - helping talk things over since 1890

Posted on 22 September 2023, 14:59 by: SETHRX7

Ah, alcohol! Once again you will save family relations!

Posted on 23 September 2023, 18:26 by: lex15226

Yes, Alfie, alcohol will help in this situation and in no way makes things worse, another brilliant idea.

Posted on 27 September 2023, 12:05 by: SoulSilverOnThe3DS

@MagicalJuko Very well put. Nice reference btw.

Posted on 27 September 2023, 16:35 by: Imagine_Breaker

Poor Cillian. Man is a rock to willingly put himself through this awkward situation and not get the hell out of there lol. He is totally there for Vera and it is fucking wholesome as hell.

Posted on 27 September 2023, 21:10 by: DahSpanker

Jesus christ Alfie, you can speak with her without acting like a turbobitch every half a sentence!

Posted on 28 September 2023, 00:59 by: Shannon St.Claire

WTF does Alfie even want?

Her mother says she was glad to see her and is glad she's alright... Alfie doesn't like it. Her mother apologizes for hurting her —something no one else has done... Alfie doesn't like it. Alfie tells her to get fucked & leave her alone and Vera is like "Okay, you want me to fuck off and I will. I miss you and love you AND BIRTHED YOUR RUDE ASS but if you want me to leave you alone, I will." (okay, maybe not those EXACT words)... Alfie doesn't like it. Alfie tells her she's been drinking for years and Vera doesn't lose it... ALFIE DOESN'T FUCKING LIKE IT.

She becomes more & more insufferable with each page and seems to be attempting to get a rise out of Vera but, at the same time, doesn't appear satisfied with any of Vera's reactions. Major reaction or minor, small issue or large, it's not enough for her. Alfie says the words "GO AWAY" and when Vera is like "If that's what you want, okay." in the next panel Alfie has the nerve to say "So you're just going to leave?" JFC. Vera's literally the first person in a dozen chapters to genuinely be happy to see Alfie and care about her well-being rather than using her (like Rug) but Alfie's too busy being upset that her mom's not upset.

Too bad this is ending; I could go for several chapters of The Misadventures of Vera & Cillian where Alfie's just a minor character who shows up on occasion when they're not fucking Ailduin...

Posted on 28 September 2023, 04:30 by: RuneGrey

I ironically have been here - my relationship with my own mum was terrible until I was an adult - we never got along, always fought, and I wanted her gone from my life.

Discovered about five years later my father had been cheating on her for most of their marriage and she was struggling to keep their marriage together for my sake. People deal with shit in different ways, so I can feel for Alfie and Vera here. Alfie's initial reaction is remembering the rest of the shit she's dealt with, but Vera's clearly changed - I'm interested in seeing how they develop from here.

Not boding great for the amount of sex in the near future, of course.

Posted on 28 September 2023, 04:32 by: Liquid Shadow

@Shannon
https://e-hentai.org/s/b81924dd22/2339474-384 <- This was their last interaction with each other.
https://e-hentai.org/s/a00f6a2d23/2339474-453 <- Alfie's final message to Vera.

What do you think Alfie wants? She didn't want to see her mother at all, but now that she is here she wants the confrontation that has likely been playing in her head on repeat. She wants to finally lash out at her crotchety old hypocritical bitch of a mother. She wants to pay back all of her recent suffering to its source, her mother. The woman that drove her to leave when she should have been a pillar of support when Alfie was struggling with who she was in an oppressively prudish community.

Everything Alfie has gone through has been a direct result of Vera lashing out at her and using her own daughter as an emotional punching bag. Vera has grown and changed as a result of losing her daughter because of her own actions, but Alfie doesn't want that. She wanted to cut Vera out of her life completely, only to find the source of her misery has followed her all the way here. As far as Alfie is concerned, the best thing Vera could have done is let her go.

But now that Vera is here, Alfie WANTS Vera to bite back, to be the same bitch she remembers her to be. She wants to finally fight back against her tormentor and lay into her, but Vera isn't the same woman Alfie remembers her to be, and that is eating Alfie more than anything else could right now. She doesn't want to forgive Vera, she wants payback, to hurt her like she was hurt, and she wants to hurt her even more after seeing her mother commit the same sin she exploded on Alfie over.

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Posted on 03 October 2023, 20:19 by: SETHRX7

Could you two please do not start fight because of Ailduin? His ego is big enough already.

Posted on 04 October 2023, 02:30 by: Sephyr79

Ok, as much as Alfie has been an unstable bitch lately, her trolling her mother over banging Alduin was hilarious.

Posted on 05 October 2023, 00:05 by: Draupnir7

People are so used to seeing a steady dicking or rugmunching smooth things over. Let two fairly decent characters with some depth have a reasonably accurate tense interpersonal encounter.
Vera will get some more dick after, I assure you.

Posted on 05 October 2023, 22:17 by: ronnoc

Props to Incase for almost immediately starting the "smoothing things out" arc in this chapter, I hate it when authors try to artificially stretch out conflict and tension.

Posted on 06 October 2023, 20:11 by: DeepPzizzl

Finally. JUST TALK is here.

Posted on 07 October 2023, 19:08 by: Liquid Shadow

God damn, you cringe-inducing cunts. I want sexy make-up lesbian incest too, but *after* they've had the climactic confrontation that finally resolves the main plot of the story. This is them finally discussing the grievances, misunderstandings, and emotional turmoil that caused the entire story to happen, let it be a serious moment instead of whining about how they haven't started fucking yet.

Some of us actually like having plot in our porn and are here for the story just as much as the sexy pictures.

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Posted on 08 October 2023, 03:15 by: LAOD paope

Incase top 3 writers of all time 4me.(yes I do read books).
I would buy 100yrs worth of seasons of this if and how was ever made.
Unless it goes the fate route. Fate is cool, but it can suck my balls 4going clean 4children tv.
Bring back 'mana mechanics'.
Anyways, incase ty 4being yourself. I have no idea how alfie is gonna redeem herself(will she ever?) Can't wait 2see whahappuns

Posted on 11 October 2023, 03:24 by: SilverCut

Readers need to remember that Vera underwent lots of personal growth on her journey....but Alfie doesn't know that! The last time she saw her mom, Vera was yelling at her and traumatizing her after catching her with Melly. So there's a lot of anger still on Alfie's side - she doesn't know how much Vera developed and grew because she didn't witness it.

Posted on 12 October 2023, 13:31 by: Eyeless wonder

@Shannon St.Claire

isn't that the whole point of the comic? hate or love it. this is an Alfie comic, not a "Vera" not a "Osha" or any of the other characters. this is her story of figuring out who she is and what she wants, characters are allowed to be confused and honestly again this is her story and it wouldn't be a good one if she was perfect. Alfie is a confuse young adult who knows very little because people are so afraid of hurting her. she has a right to lash out at her mother and she has a right to lash out at the other people in the comic that put her in such a positions to begin with
is she innocent? no, fuck no and that's one of the points

anyone saying what "does Alfie even want?" then you're wondering the same shit she is

we've seen Alfie as a people pleaser, we've seen her as a adventurous and we've seen her as fearful and we've even seen her as scheming and hell we know what she can do with her charm, wit and especially with her beauty(its a comic i know but even the characters in the world clearly acknowledge her physical appeal)

@fuckalfie
that is actually a very fair assessment. Alfie hasn't actually grown, in fact she seems to have gotten worse because the people around her has been worse for her. She tries far too hard to fix everyone's problems

now the simping is done. this story is nearing its end clearly and this direction is actually quite charming. so its a shame so many people find it so frustrating. when its a pretty straightforward story

and heres an actual comment/opinion. Ogze, Lydia and Marco needs some major fucking clarity chapters. those fuckers shit on Alfie for making their lives better

Posted on 12 October 2023, 14:20 by: Necro-san

It almost seems unreal looking at these two and realising they are COMMUNICATING with one another, for what seems like the first time. This is some Jerry Springer shit and I'm loving it.

Posted on 14 October 2023, 02:40 by: GalacticInquisitor

But will it stick? Didn't Incase want things to end with Alfie being a trainwreck?

Posted on 18 October 2023, 19:08 by: gntz

ok ... if now start a threesome with alfie-vera-cillian ... this can be the hottest sex scene in the entire comic hands down

Posted on 18 October 2023, 20:46 by: Sinael

Page 15 and Alfie is ready to really fuck it up and screw herself over somehow

Posted on 18 October 2023, 20:51 by: PureEnergy

Super Flash-Back Time...!!

Posted on 19 October 2023, 00:47 by: lex15226

I almost forgot this was a story about Alfie fucking up but thankfully page 15 came to remind me that Alfie hasn't really been a good person since joining the caravan and now will try on purpose to make Vera be angry with her again......i miss Marco, Lydia and Ozge.

Posted on 19 October 2023, 02:36 by: reverendoxxx

Welp this is gona be good, i expect a lot of heart to heart bcs they havent had a TALK on the same ground, maybe this is a opportunity open their hearts and actually know each other as parent and child

Posted on 19 October 2023, 02:37 by: Katajanmarja

Alfie here is just your typical troubled teenager who never openly rebelled against her parents.

Not everybody does it in ways as extreme as she seemingly wants to, but many do. Many go even further, e.g. with various methods of self-harm.

What makes this look extreme is that Alfie is technically a grown-up, and trying to do all of her formerly suppressed acting out in one go. My, she is more talented at being mean than I would have imagined. Then again, she grew up with a good instructor...

What bothers me the most here is that Vera has gone from one extreme to another. Is that realistic in a quasi-medieval setting? Sure, psychological "naturals" have always existed, but solutions such as seeking comfort in religion used to be far more normal. And I don’t mean that Vera would not wish to give all her love to her daughter. I mean that after traumatic excesses, the method of simply facing the facts, trying to process them in an analytical, constructive manner, then realistically rethinking one’s future is not at everybody’s disposal.

"I have fallen, you have fallen, I am in no position to judge you. Let us both go to a monastery and send the rest of our lives repenting." That would be a classical model for a "positive" solution. If Vera is not falling back to something like that, then the travels during her youth, the rather modern attitude of her husband, and all she has learned from Cillian have indeed provided her with some extraordinary insight.

Posted on 19 October 2023, 06:23 by: alaion

ALFIE NO!!!

Posted on 19 October 2023, 08:18 by: ThePunishR

Halfing incest incoming

Posted on 20 October 2023, 05:19 by: redragon1990

initiate order 69

i like how the gothblin brings a rug after alfie calls for rug

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Posted on 21 October 2023, 10:31 by: OccasionalGoldfish

Operation GobMother has been activated...

Posted on 21 October 2023, 16:48 by: BlitzimX

I think this is were stuffs are going to break down. Mom is going to see how absolutly monstruous her daughter has become, and shits will hit the fan when the gobs will try to get to Cilian. Probably even hurting him given he seems to have quite a bad health. And on top, i'm ready to bet that during their robbery, the gobs have destroyed/stolen important stuffs precious to multiple people. I really don't see any way for Alfie to get an exit on this. I can understand she's been through a lot, but at this point she's just become a monster, and i just want someone, anyone, to slap that bitch back to reality.

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Posted on 23 October 2023, 14:01 by: dprice22

This is where Alfie show Vera how much she's learned about Rug-munching.

Posted on 25 October 2023, 11:59 by: Neeckin

Now Alfie is just trying to hard to try and get her mom mad and it's gonna blow up in her face

Posted on 25 October 2023, 18:31 by: Shannon St.Claire

• Alfie: "Rug, meet my mother."
• Rug: "Oh, you mean the cunt you called a cunt right here in this letter I kept all those pages/panels ago because I'm obviously the type to keep shit like this?"
• Vera: "You called me a cunt in a letter?! This means you truly hate me and we cannot reconcile!"
• Alfie: "Wait! No! I only wanted you to hate me due to my current efforts to manipulate your emotions! Not for anything else!"
• Humans: "We're back. We're mad. Goblins stole from us in a way that could only happen if you had inside knowledge."
• Alfie's Former Friends: "It was you, Rat!"
• Ailduin: "This is a betrayal of the highest order. All I wanted was to be the prettiest girl around, suck a few dicks and get fucked. You ruined it, Alfie, and the consequence is death."
• Alfie: "But! But I thought I could talk my way out of anything! I thought my pain was a reason to be awful rather than being in any way introspective and working to better myself! I didn't know it could have actual consequences despite all those times it had consequences!"
• Vera: "My life is ruined. I had a miserable marriage after an abusive childhood. All I wanted was for my daughter to grow up and be better than I was. I now see that she's an awful person who just wants to manipulate everyone. Including me. And she never believes there will be consequences for her actions. I give my life instead, Ailduin. Cillian, you were wonderful while it lasted. You showed me that people really do care. Alfie, I hope you go on to be someone good, I guess. But I can't bear the thought that you become any worse. Good-bye. I hope you give a shit about something other than manipulating people."
• Alfie: "I really didn't think this through! I was just having so much fun manipulating you!"
• Humans: "DIE, TINY WOMAN,"
• Alfie: "Now I have no one but the Goblins!"
• Rug: "Nah, you don't have us either. We live fast and die quick, if you didn't notice. We'll soon be gone and the next generation will replace us."
• Alfie: "I guess I'll live out my days as the longest lived Goblin-but-Ugly, I'll try to steer the generations to not steal so much. I can finally put my powers manipulating people to good use."

Posted on 29 October 2023, 11:09 by: Liquid Shadow

I was curious as to why Alfie still wants to piss off her mother when it looked like they were finally making progress, but I'm not sure that is what this is. Think about it, even when she tries to do everything right she gets dumped and called a rat by those she thought she could trust.

She is ripping off the band-aid. In her mind, she probably thinks it is better to come clean now rather than try to hide it what she has done and have it blow-up in her face again. She isn't going to be apologetic about it, in fact she seems to be playing up how awful what she's done is. My guess, it is because she already expects her mother, even with all she has learned about Vera, will hate her for what she has become. Just like everyone else does.

Because that has been her life since leaving her hometown. Trying to hide who she is blows up in her face. Coming clean about what she has done blows up in her face. Doing exactly what others request of her blows up in her face. And all of her so-called friends abandoned her when she needed them most. To make it all worse, she has seen hypocrites get rewarded for doing the exact same things.
https://e-hentai.org/s/0f60b8358e/2339962-70
https://e-hentai.org/s/f0606a25d5/2339956-20

I hope by the end of this story her so-called friends get their comeuppance.

Posted on 29 October 2023, 22:11 by: PureEnergy

@Liquid Shadow:
Well reasoned and well said...I tip my hat to you...

Posted on 29 October 2023, 22:38 by: Shannon St.Claire

@LiquidShadow

Both Alfie and Vera would like to be free of social norms in order to pursue what they want, the main difference between the two being Vera doesn't give a shit if people like her, she just knows she's boxed in by what people think because that's how society is (expecting her to wear a dress and get married and be a mom, expecting her to be a dutiful wife, expecting her to stay faithful to a man who isn't faithful to her, etc). Alfie, on the other hand, wants everyone to like her in pursuit of whatever it is that she wants (it's never been clearly presented that Alfie even knows what that actually is).

This difference had resulted in virtually everything we've seen. Vera's interludes with Ailduin were a desire to have satisfaction in spite of social norms, right there in her community. Whether it was seeing "what it is two men do together" or indulging the fact that she enjoyed seeing it or simply reveling in having someone who was attentive to her since her husband was not in order to be able to say she did it, she wasn't concerned with what anyone in the village had to say about it.

Alfie has run into problem after problem due to the fact that she clearly gives a shit about people seeing her in a specific way (that isn't actually who she is). When she throws rotten veggies at the Havlin who fucked a human, it was so that none of the other Havlins thought she might be doing it herself. Vera never would have done that (she even sarcastically refers to "the fun" when she caught Melinda peeking in on it) because she doesn't really care what people think.

When Lydia tells the group she fucked Alfie and Alfie has the option to confirm it, Lydia says "Fuck 'em. We do what we want, right, Alfie?" and Alfie's inner monologue is that she can't do it because she can't live like her mother. Vera absolutely would have been like "Fuck all of you. Yeah, I did it. It's my fucking business." whereas Alfie, despite an ongoing desire to fuck both Lydia and Marco (and Ogze!), opts to lie because she'd prefer for people to believe her lie rather than live the truth with her friends. Even Ogze gives Alfie the sideeye at that point.

If Alfie's behavior right now is ripping off the band-aid, she just doesn't know how to read a room; Vera's really the only person who loves her unconditionally. It's less her coming clean on what she's done and more gleefully reveling in admitting to doing awful shit. And done with "friends" that she met mere hours ago in terms of the story. Her current look isn't an evolved progression that she chose for herself, it's because they were like "Nah, we can't party with you looking like that." If her look is a symbol of anything, it's the embodiment of how she fully embraces the fact that she lives by how others see her rather than how she sees herself.

Posted on 30 October 2023, 04:12 by: HLR3

This went from good smut to a spiraling roller coaster. People are writing short essay about characters here lol. Feel like I need to 2 popcorns, 1 for the story and 1 for the comment. Just hope no one here feel the need to justify the actions of characters in a story, it is a story. You don't need to justify shit, just sit back and enjoy the ride. Vera could be on track to a better and happier and life, Alfie could be on track to isolating herself from everyone, or Vera about to be crush by Alfie transformation, or this whole thing could resolved with a camp-wide orgy with mother and daughter fucking it out. Either way, I got the snack and the lube.

Posted on 01 November 2023, 18:05 by: Shannon St.Claire

Unlike most of Incase's other work which is either one-offs or short comics solely about the titillation, Alfie has been about character development and has spanned literal years. It shouldn't be surprising that it invites discussion and analysis.

Posted on 02 November 2023, 00:58 by: Sweet Breaker

I checked out at around chapter 4... what the hell happened to Alfie? She changed so much.. she's consorting with criminals now? And people are DEFENDING her KNOWING that she's party to thieves? Maybe I should come back here after I catch up properly. Christ...

Posted on 02 November 2023, 06:41 by: Sternomator

Alfie is pretty much just angry, she wanted a confrontation and screaming but got an apology instead. Which came too late.
I think if Vera let Alfie have space (which she tried to do) and Alfie took 1-3 day to calm down, these two could have a more productive talk.
Now it escalates into, lets show you my 'i rebeled, cause fuck everything'-life and see if you handle this. All in an atempt to drive Vera up the wall and make her condem Alfie the same way she did before.

I think Alfie wants to confirm that her mother is still the old way, while still beeing 'traped' in her new rebelious-goblin-lifestyle.

Posted on 02 November 2023, 16:29 by: Liquid Shadow

Here we go! As nice as it is to see the goblin standing up for her friend, Alfie looks uncomfortable with the direction this is going. I'm genuinely hoping she attempts to de-escalate the situation. Whether it works or not will be interesting to see.

@Shannon St.Claire
I can agree with that assessment. Most of Alfie's problems stem from her being too afraid of how other people see her. This is partially why I sided with Alfie earlier in the conflict. Instead of Vera teaching her to be more independent, Alfie spent the start of the story being afraid of her own mother most of all, and was proven right to be scared of how her own mother would judge her when she got used as an emotional punching bag.

I think you are right that she is trying to spark a conflict and I misread it. I now think Sternomator has the right idea of Alfie's intentions, still wanting to dig out the bitch she was afraid of so she can have that final confrontation, but it isn't going the way she expected.

What I'm hoping for is that Vera can see through this for what it is, or that Alfie calls off her goblin, and they can work through their problems. Alfie still doesn't yet know how much Vera tried to change at home before she realized her daughter ran away.
https://e-hentai.org/s/0a7300d952/2339833-46

Posted on 02 November 2023, 19:57 by: Ermanarich

I just love the sly smile Cillian has when saying that his cock doesn't work anymore!

Posted on 03 November 2023, 04:03 by: HLR3

@Shannon St.Claire
I get the story is compelling, so people want to talk about it. It just interesting that the discussion direction in this chapter heavily lean toward defending or criticizing Alfie's character, which I get is because we are seeing the consequences of her actions exploding in her face, still. So to putt this discussion a bit away from that, let's talk about a major factor in the development of Alfie and Vera, the people/person in their journey. As it stand, Vera got the luck of the draw with her travelling companion. Cillian is a damn positive influence on Vera because he went through a similar situation, and that obviously give Vera another perspective and steer her to a more positive development. Meanwhile, Alfie's traveling companion Lydia, Marcos, Ozge, and the caravan in general honestly are crappy influences on Alfie. Lydia is running away from her issues, Marcos is stuck in his principle and dense as all hell, Ozge is actually going through a similar journey to Cillian in his younger day, and the rest of the people in the caravan are a mess of hypocrite and manipulative elven ass. This is not to excuse Alfie's actions, rather to say, I would hazard a guess that without Cillian's influence, this meeting between Vera and Alfie would be an even bigger firework. Alfie had considered alternative path, but without someone to grounded that path like Cillian did to Vera, it is not surprising that she spiraled like she did. I am not even gonna bring in the goblin cause goblin just being goblin yo. At this point, I wonder if Cillian gonna step in and get Alfie to cut her crap, so she and Vera can have an actual heart to heart talk. Also, shoutout to the lamia milf in Cillian's past, she played some part in snapping Cillian out of his funk, and a fine looking snake lady.

Posted on 03 November 2023, 12:36 by: Neeckin

Damn shits getting me anxious, I hope Alfie breaks soon. Like god damn if she started to crying next panel and we moved to healing or something that would be great.

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Posted on 03 November 2023, 12:46 by: Drakhesh

@ Shannon St.Claire

I like when people call out Alfie lying to the caravan, as if that was a decision made solely on some deeply rooted desire to lie just for the sake of lying.
Because it's not like the entire caravan, except Hana, outright shunned her whe the truth came out. It's not like all the women in the caravan began to treat her like filth, not even hiding their contempt and disgust. And it's not like all the men in the caravan either joined n the practice, or began propositioning her like she's a cheap whore.

People like you outright ignore the fact that there were very real consequences for alfie to tell the truth. Just like Marco ignores it. It's easy to expect and tell someone "just don't lie and always tell the truth", when they don't have to deal with any fallout of being honest.
Marco, Lydia and Alfie are all sexually open. Except despite it, only Alfie is being openly hated for it. Alfie is the only one havign to deal with beign called slut about a dozen times when she has to go through the camp - somethign both Marco and Lydia are conviniently spared. Maby because Marco is a man so being promiscuous is not seen asbeing a slut. And maby Lydia is spared because anyone who'd call her a slut would have his teeth knocked out.

I sympathize deeply with Alfie's position for a simple reason - I'm gay. And not living in nice progressive area of a western world where it is pretty much accepted. I grew up in are where were my sexuality ever became known, I'd have the everloving shit beaten out of me for it. So I know deeply and uncomfortably that sometimes "living honestly" is just a nice sentiment. It's easy being honest when it does not carry consequences.

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Posted on 03 November 2023, 18:26 by: fuckalfie

Those goblins need some goblin slaying fr

Posted on 04 November 2023, 20:01 by: Liquid Shadow

@Drakhesh
You bring up a really good point. Looking back at earlier chapters, I had forgotten just how backwards her village was.
https://e-hentai.org/s/3a5efaa77f/2339818-52
They put a poor guy in stocks and pelted him with produce for the sin of... fucking a human. Not even a married woman, or having gay sex, and it was consensual. He dared to have sex with someone who was different from them, and that was worthy of harsh punishment. Imagine what they would have done to Alfie. No wonder the girl has spent most of the story terrified of how others view her.

Posted on 05 November 2023, 03:47 by: Shannon St.Claire

@Drakhesh

On the topic of "People like you..."

I'm gay. And Black. Which means I can have the everloving shit beaten out of me for just existing. I don't get to hide it, I have to embrace it and be truthful within it.

So I suppose I'll never be able to sympathize with Alfie —a character who has friends who are more than capable of protecting her... is in a group that's never presented as physically violent towards her... a group that of people she doesn't even particularly care for... a group led by an elf who is sexually promiscuous and gay— over her choice to betray her friends like that. Nothing about my trauma has led me to empathize with THAT. Alfie makes her thoughts known in the moment and the dilemma for her is never presented as her worrying about her physical safety; she's concerned about the perception of people she doesn't even like. The group is objectively more open-minded than the Havlins and even when the Havlins sentenced one of their own to public humiliation, his life wasn't physically endangered.

I don't discount your trauma. It's very real. But never assume that you have the monopoly on it or that it supersedes someone else's. PEOPLE LIKE YOU seem inclined to believe that you own righteous trauma. You don't.

Nor does Alfie (not that she claims to but I'm not here to discuss my personal experiences and am more interested in discussing the comic as it is presented).

Posted on 05 November 2023, 15:30 by: Drakhesh

@Shannon St.Claire

"People like you" referred to people judging others and ignoring the circumstances that led to behavior they judge. It not meant anything beyond that, nor was it meant to imply you or anyone here does not know trauma. Apologies if it came out that way - English is a second language, so my choice of words may had unintentionally mislead.

And the point is - does Alfie has friends? Did she betray them in anyway?
She did not betray anyone. All she did was deny that she sleeps around with Lydia, Marco and Ogze. Should she call Lydia a liar? Perhaps not.
But Lydia had NO right to drag out their colelctive sexual life out in the open like this. It was not Lydias right to make that decision for Alfie. Whether we as individuals agrree or not with Alfie keeping her sex life personal is not relevant - it's her sex life. Her choice to be open or secretive about it. But Lydia ignored it - just because someone pissed her off and she pays no attention to the consequences. She forced Alfie into position where she either betrays her friends, or she is shunned as a depraved outcast. A friend does not put their friends in places like this. A friend does not break off a friendship JUST because their friend did not wish to admit on a public forum that they are sleeping with each other.
Ogze, Lydia and Marco had exactly one conversation after the whole event about Alfie? And what did they say?
"Oh, yeah, we did put her in horrible situation, but it's her fault, she did not have to lie, even though we realize it's not malice but her feeling weak and defenceless"

Zero accountability for their own actions. Not a shred of care fow how their supposed friend is doing. Not a thought spent on considering WHY she lied. Not one of them asked her why she's afraid of being scorned by the group, or society at large. Not one of them tried to help them, even though Alfie helps them constantly.

Those are supposed to be her *freinds*? Those assholes without a shred of empathy in them that put her in a horrible situation? The people who expect Alfie to jsut disappear, figure out her shit and magically come back as a better person?

Thats the thing in inCase writing. He makes a clear message people need external, positive influence to become better people. Both Marco and Lydia needed a 'push' from Alfie to start talking about each other like adults. Vera needed Cillian, and he in return needed the snake-lady from his past. None of those people became decent on their own - but everybody expects that of Alfie. Nobody reaches out to her. Nobody helps. "Just figure your issues solo Alfie, and then we'll ease on the ostracism. Or we won't, after all once you did bite the bullet, admitted to everything and apologized to us we still ended up treating you like dirt."

To hell with that kind of 'friends'

Posted on 09 November 2023, 00:28 by: dy_1625

I'm no psychologist, but I'd say Alfie shows signs of Borderline Personality Disorder. She exhibits impulsive behavior (such as running away), promiscuity (indiscriminate sex with multiple partners), and a cycle of emotional pain which leads to said impulsive behaviors to relieve the pain, which results in shame/guilt and new pain, and more impulsive actions to relieve the pain.

I'm getting all this from Wikipedia, but I'm interested to know if there are any psych practitioners in the comments that may agree or disagree with this.

Posted on 09 November 2023, 00:52 by: redragon1990

everyone is writing essays in the comments now

Posted on 09 November 2023, 05:19 by: HLR3

@dy_1625

Technically, I am not a practice clinician, but the degrees in psych should worth something here. Might as well make this a PSA, for any kind of mental disorder, time is a huge factor, shits need to hit the fans enough over a pretty long period of time, typically months, for any kind of disorder to get confirmed. Not to said if you catch it early and brought it to a clinician, they not gonna keep that in mind, but they do need evidence of sufficient amount of frequencies over a certain amount of time. The time factor get even larger with personality disorder; we talking shit need to show up in childhood for it to be considered personality disorder. So for Alfie, Borderline Personality Disorder (BPD) is definitely nowhere near the table, unless flashback start to happen. But nah, Alfie is going through what a lot of girls from extremely conservative and religious background do once they taste freedom, typically during college, hypersexuality and other hedonistic acts, including petty crimes.

@Drakhesh

If you saw my earlier comment, I already agreed with you that Alfie was surrounded with shit influences. I do want to keep it from laying the blame solely on external factor. As far as we know, Alfie never properly convey to Lydia that she want to keep their "meeting" a secret, further, whether Alfie was blinded by her admiration of Lydia or something, it should be obvious that Lydia is extremely open about her sexuality, that is not flag that is a billboard. Does that excuse the consequences of Lydia's action? Nah, it still a shit move. But Alfie's failure to communicate is also a factor. In fact, a big theme in this whole story is communicate with people who care about you better, also to never let your expectation blind you.

Posted on 09 November 2023, 12:33 by: Drakhesh

@HLR3

I'm sorry but I can't accept that reasoning. It was not Alfies job to tell Lydia to keep her mouth closed on this subject. Some boundries exist without expressly stating them, just like I, for example, do not have to specifically say to my neighbor he should not let his dog shit on my lawn. Or to make more accurate comparison - if I were to trust a friend with deeply embarasing secret about myself it should go without saying I expect said friend to keep a lid on it and not blab about it the first chance they get. Were they to tell my secret, I don't think anyone with half a wit would say "wow, he really should had made it clear he does not wish his secret to be out" - they'd just say my friend is a really shitty friend.
Lydia may be extremely sexually open and be unashamed about it, but she is not some witless child. She undersands the certain standards and boundries society has in place. Not talking about your sex life is not some odd thing only Alfie does in this world - it's the baseline for the people living in it, and Lydia's the odd one out, since most people who are as promiscuous as her generally do not make it into public announcments.

Posted on 10 November 2023, 18:47 by: fuckalfie

All this is doing is making me like Vera all the more for putting up with this shit. What an unlikeable sack of crap her kid is. You can put some of the blame on Vera, but end of the day if Alfie had been in her mother's shoes - gay husband and unwanted kid - that kid would've grown up with the town bycicle for a mother, if she even stuck around that long. Also the restraint on Cillian. Not his place to speak up and my man is managing to just keep cool and keep quiet.

Posted on 10 November 2023, 21:07 by: Imagine_Breaker

Alfie is rage baiting her mom. She's saying the most vile things possible and putting herself in the worst possible light to get a reaction out of Vera, since she can't stand how reasonable and accepting Vera was being. She needs her mom to snap at her so she can retaliate. It's clear that she doesn't believe half the shit that is currently coming out of her mouth and was obviously uncomfortable when the gob bitch called Vera a cunt. It's hard to watch, but that's just because it's great character writing.

Posted on 11 November 2023, 01:53 by: Foostini

I'm gonna side with Alfie on the most recent page here (22) and i'm gonna predict what she's gonna say next in that she never really knew Alfie. Credit to Vera for trying to be accepting and contrite NOW but she spent all of Alfie's life too wrapped up in her own personal drama in her shitty little village and any time Alfie's tried anything she's been put down. I don't think Alfie should be trying to make things worse like she is but for as much as everyone is, not entirely undeservedly, siding with Vera, she wasn't a good mother and having her say "this isn't you" like she ever knew to begin with hits home for me.

Posted on 11 November 2023, 21:59 by: HLR3

@Drakhesh

I am gonna say it again. I am not absolving Lydia of her action. What she did was shitty. I will also repeat that you should not allow your expectation to blind you (this is a recurring theme of this story in fact). When you said "some boundaries exist without expressly stating them" that is your expectation not an objective rule everyone live by (this is me speaking from experience after moving from one country to another and just encountering a lot of people in general), and you do have to tell you neighbor not to let his dog shit on your lawn, or he will continue to do so. You need to look at people for what they are and build your expectation base on that, not letting your expectation get ahead of that person - if you know for a fact that your friend is a blabbermouth who constantly gossips about everyone and anyone, I would bet that no way in hell you telling that friend any of your secret. Similarly, Alfie had spend enough time with Lydia to knows that she flaunts all of her sexual partners to everyone, in fact she want to do so because she want to flip off the societal expectation of everyone else. In fact, Alfie parading proofs of her hypersexuality and petty crimes to Vera to flip off Vera, and in part, to push Vera back into Alfie's expectation of an overbearing mother. Hell, on page 22, Vera did just that by utter the trigger words "this is not who you are", which I would bet will give Alfie the license to explode in Vera face. Could be wrong, we could have a twist or something. I am waiting to see whether Cillian would step in and throw a wrench in Alfie's plan.

Posted on 12 November 2023, 01:26 by: DScy31

Holy fucking essaying. I actually love how invested and passionate people are about this comic and it characters

Posted on 12 November 2023, 04:07 by: -Slark-

I get that Alfie probably doesn't herself believe what she's saying, but at this point almost everyone in the caravan hates/ostracize her; fucking them over and running away wouldn't be her worst option

Posted on 12 November 2023, 11:54 by: fuckalfie

@Imagine_Breaker

Rage baiting or not, the thing is that she's not lying about anything. All the shitty things she says she did and the stupid reasons she did them for, that's all true. She set out to prove her mother wrong, surrounded herself with pricks, turned into one herself, and now all she can do about it is dial it up trying to get her mother to conform to her warped view, cause if she can't even blame Vera for how she turned out then all she has is to blame herself, and that just doesn't go for Alfie. Like i said, shit person, believable, but not very fun protagonist.

Posted on 12 November 2023, 17:22 by: Jarvis_42

Next time someone calls Alfie a rat, Vera is going to have a bit more of the picture. Thats still her daughter and she is going to be pissed, but theres going to be a _bit_ more understanding along with it.
Hopefully some plot contrivance lets her overhear Alfies original reason for helping plot that heist, to keep goblin heads off elven pikes.

Posted on 12 November 2023, 20:27 by: Drakhesh

@HLR3

Except there are rules of society that are not expressly stated and put into writing but still are followed. This is not time and place to go in-depth into evolution, biological drive to form complex hierarchies and all that but as societies form there are things that are inheritly not approved by said society. Because despite what you may say, I doubt we could find even a single society on this good Earth where neighbors are just fine with other dogs shitting on their lawns. Just like even if written law did not expressly stated it, the society would still frown on thievery, or assault. And while exact span of those invisible lines may vary from culture to culture, group to group, they are always there.
And for the society "Alfie" characters live in clearly promiscuity is being frowned upon - from Alfie home village beign bunch or borderline puritans, through the caravan opinions, all the way tho the fact despite brothels beign established buisnesses, people frown on them (other kids mocking Cillian for being son of a prostitute). Lydia is brash, but she's not an idiot - she KNOWS people around her find it all morally questionable. she simply does not care.

And the other important factor is one we all glanced over in this vivid discussion.
Lydia was not a blabbermouth. She likes to fuck, and she did fuck, but throughout all of the chapters she did not ever discuss her sex life, outside of their little circle of adoration. So Alfie had no basis to suspect she would suddenly decide to start yapping on about it, because why would she? Lydia never did that before, and the society in general do not do it. How can you prevent something you cant even realistically predict might happen? And why would it be your responsibility to do so?

Posted on 15 November 2023, 13:06 by: Neeckin

Jesus Christ Alfie

Posted on 16 November 2023, 00:18 by: Demonking45

@fuckalfie

Yeah, from the start of her adventure to her confrontation with her mother, you can tell Alfie has developed a case of narcissistic personality disorder, i.e., aggression, a warped sense of moral superiority, a high opinion of her own accomplishments, lack of empathy (she stole and threatened nice people who treated her kindly), and looks down on those who disagree with her views. Because of all the shitty things she's done or has happened to her, Alfie has been thrown into a spiral of hedonism and self-destruction, and her surrounding herself with people just as hedonistic and self-destructive only made her get worse and worse, so much so that she believes that's how the world works or should work. The more things don't go her way, or when karma catches up to her, Alfie immediately deflects and blames others for her misfortunes, including her own mother. Sure, while Vera was much the same as Alfie, and it's understandable why her daughter would blame her, Vera got better and conquered her demons, found someone who truly loved and cared for her (her husband cared and loved her, but not in the way she hoped), and finally loved and respect herself as a person. On the other hand, as people pointed out, Alfie continued to stew in her own mess and spiraled down, becoming a broken foil of her mother.

Posted on 16 November 2023, 01:42 by: TakoyakiRemastered

I am now officially on team "Curbstomp Alfie Repeatedly"

Posted on 16 November 2023, 02:29 by: Balistik Intsik

Me seeing Alfie update after a long time: "HOLY SHIT!"

Me after reading the update: "Holy shit."

Posted on 16 November 2023, 05:26 by: redragon1990

that was uncalled for

Posted on 16 November 2023, 06:32 by: HLR3

@Drakhesh

I agreed that there are natural unspoken lines that get form overtime when a group of people are around each other long enough. However, that is not the default, rather that is the results of being around each other long enough to form an expectation of each other; and sometime thing clash and explicit lines do get drawn. The world as depicted here is not homogenous, heck as they are part of a caravan moving from place to place frequently, there is no single "society" because they encounter different groups of people with different standard constantly; the puritan group is not "the society", neither is Alfie's home village. They are just another group with their own standard, values, and expectation. In fact, the Voch'khari village they were staying in at the time of the incident has an extremely open policy with their sexuality, and the puritan group is the minority of that time; so I don't think they would be consider "the society" at that time. I double back on the previous chapter, and you are right; Lydia not a blabber mouth. She does not hide her conquest and flirt openly; she is also impulsive and even more so when she get corner in some sense, like when she slap Marco because she didn't want to admit her feeling for him. I will agreed that Alfie was unlikely to guess that Lydia would spilled their relationship to the puritan group. But, oh man, I went back and re-read that moment, and that was not as shit of a move as I remembered. Lydia was being accused of stealing somebody's lover, and she defended herself by revealing that Alfie was also a part of that affair, which is the truth. Alfie ditched her friend by denying it to avoid being labelled a whore/brooker just like her mom by people that she honestly did not care about; and they believed her and considered her part of their group. Alfie confessed everything later on and got herself shunned by the puritan group. I think the point that Alfie got the short straw, and there was no Cillian figure on her time with the Caravan to keep her from spiraling still stand; but she definitely contributed to her own spiral. And I definitely did not expect that low blow; oof, I sorta expected an explosive "you don't know me", but not calling her mom a whore. This series get less sex overtime, but it still hooking people here, lol.

Posted on 16 November 2023, 07:19 by: theguywiththemask

Certified ♀️ ☕

Posted on 16 November 2023, 09:54 by: fuckalfie

Bruh, i ever end up with a dumbass whore of a kid who speaks that way to me, that kid's getting a bag out the door and a one way ticket to the streets

Posted on 16 November 2023, 10:29 by: Jarvis_42

OK, ya, points to the author for a character staying IN character.
She built herself up to be this flaming bitch. She held onto the bitterness toward her mother, kept picking at the wound and nurturing that hate.
Now that she sees genuine care from her mother, the woman she made out to be the epitome of evil, she has no idea WTF to do with that, so she is falling back on bitch mode.
Coming out of that is terrifying, and takes time and care. I hope she does eventually get that, but I am loving the journey.

Posted on 16 November 2023, 15:44 by: Liquid Shadow

@fuckalfie
Damn, good luck threatening to abandon your kid that already left you. I can imagine it now.

You - "Fine! If you really feel that way, then get out!"
Your kid - "You're in my house you schizophrenic bitch! This is why I left!"

A lot of people seem to be forgetting that Alfie didn't seek this confrontation out, so let me put this in simple terms. She left to try and find a better life away from her ABUSER and bigoted village. Vera is an abusive mother and wife, maybe not physically, but emotional and psychological abuse are very real. Vera has been an abusive bitch for the entirety of Alfie's life, and now she is here, tracking down her victim after she tried to escape. VERA sought out this confrontation in hopes of reconciling, and I'm sorry to hear that you would never be able to do what Vera is doing right now.

If she is genuine in wanting to make things right with her daughter, she needs to take her licks. Frankly, she deserves every bit of it for the years of abuse she put Alfie through. If she explodes on Alfie now, then she is exactly the bitch Alfie needs to get away from. But if she really wants to make things right, if she didn't come to assert control over her victim's life like you would have done, then she needs to let Alfie vent her frustrations on her until she finally calms down enough to talk.

I'm genuinely frustrated that so many people seem to think that the power dynamic of being a mother means Vera can do no wrong and that she should abuse Alfie harder to take control of her, that Vera didn't invite this on herself when she chased her abuse victim down. Vera is currently in the right, but don't forget her past sins. She is currently doing everything right for proper reconciliation. It just isn't easy to reforge bonds with someone who cut you out of their life.

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Posted on 16 November 2023, 19:36 by: fuckalfie

@Liquid Shadow

I really have little to say after reading all that. Really don't wanna get into a twitter-like argument in e-hentai of all places, so suffice to say i thank you for the glimpse into this character's pov, where victim mentality is everything and everyone is horrible but at least she's justified in being so.

Also, in my hypothetical scenario the dumbass whore of a kid had obviously yet to leave the house. But otherwise you're absolutely right, props to Alfie for already setting herself up in the streets. Now all that needs to happen is for Vera to give her up for a lost cause so Alfie can finally leave behind her abusive monster of a mother (lmao) and become what she was always meant to: the fantasy equivalent of a toothless methhead, giving out gumjobs to leprechauns by age 25.

Posted on 16 November 2023, 20:25 by: Liquid Shadow

@fuckalfie
So you didn't just forget the context of the scene and the first 6 chapters of the story demonstrating her broken home between sex scenes, but are actually just a victim blaming retard. An abuse victim lashing out at their abuser who hunted them down is "victim mentality"? Not wanting to stay in a village that wants to kill you for liking the wrong things is "victim mentality"? Really? And the mother should solve it by being even worse?

And no, it isn't obvious that you are ignoring the context of Vera seeking out her child that already left to avoid this exact confrontation in your hypothetical. What is obvious is that you either forgot the context or believe that Vera is automatically in the right to mistreat her child regardless of any other details, which isn't surprising considering your username.

Please don't have kids. Future generations don't need more serial killers.

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Posted on 17 November 2023, 12:26 by: SETHRX7

Yippe! Alfie's plan finally worked just how she wanted. Her mother is devastated and will leave her alone, just as she wanted. Now nothing will stop our protagonist from becoming the happiest honorable goblin.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 12:41 by: Drakhesh

@HLR3

I would argue that most societies we see depicted in the series share the maby not puritan but defiently conservative values.
The Caravan, Alfie's home town as well as city from Cillian past share those sentiments about sex and relationships. The Voch'khari and the goblins are depicted as way more open, but they are also very much portrayed as very different to majority of people - with people generally unsure how to deal with openly promiscuous goblins, and Voch'khari being downright alien to them.

And while yeah, Lydia may not had threw Alfie under the bus intentionally, but under the bus she threw her nontheless.
While we may argue that Alfie could handle her reaction better, but it's not as easy as "opinion of people she did not care about". Admitting to her promiscuity had real consequences - other women calling her a whore straight to her face, and random men propositioning her like cheap slut - which is something Marco and Lydia got conviniently spared from despite the truth affecting them just as much.
Alfie had her part in it, but imho it was a panic reaction made in horrible situation fueled by her deep fears. No matter how we dissect the situation the majority of the fault lies with her so-called friends - not only for putting her up in this situation, but also for not sticking by her side when she did admit the truth and tried to fix things.

And honestly, now that I'm also re-readign some parts... Lydia is a terrible person. Oh, she was more than happy to forgive Alfie when she wanted advice on how to charm Marco, or get herself some oral from the shortstack. But when she was in a bad mood because she did not wanna discuss her pregnancy? Suddenly it's all "fuck you you rat".
It's all just so shitty with those people. Lydia letting her mood dictate her actions and lashing agaisnt Alfie because she's mad at soemthing unrelated, Marco not wanting to go against Lydia so he ends up being milquetoast spouting empty slogans, and Aildun pouring gasoline on the fire because he's a viscious little twat that gets off of abuse in all forms.

It's a miracle Alfie did not go crazy and ran away to live with the squirrels earlier, with the level of borderline psychological abuse people around her inflicted on her.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 12:51 by: Neeckin

Oh my god what if this is how it ends
Vera leaves and doesn't come back, and Alfie gets to stew there in Giblin Town as a train wreak of a person with nothing left.
While I understand all the stuff going on with Alfie I am finding it hard to have any sympathies at this point, that regret is gonna kick in way to late, as it always has.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 15:26 by: Liquid Shadow

@Neeckin
I'm still hopeful things will turn around, though this would fit with incase originally wanting Alfie to be a wreck by the end of this. Alfie is clearly uncomfortable with her own snipes at Vera since the goblins got involved, so I'm hoping either she will come to her senses and apologize, or that her "friends" will show up before Vera leaves.

We still haven't gotten a follow-up with Lydia's realization that she is and has been a horrible person in chapter 17. A bit of Vera's judgmental anger seemed to be exactly what Alfie's "friends" needed to slap some sense into them. That and the goblin did say that angry humans were on the way.

There is another bittersweet possibility where Alfie and Vera fail to reconcile here, but Alfie's life could still improve due to her "friends" treating her better.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 16:19 by: Neeckin

@Liquid Shadow

It all hinges on Alfie having a realization or 180 in the next few 0ages. Vera will leave, that much seems certain now, her daughter is a stranger and a terror in her eyes that does not want to go back or be near her or their home again. Meanwhile Alfie has nothing, and at best it seems she will realize what she did long after it can be fixed, just like every other time she fucked up.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 18:56 by: DeepPzizzl

Props to everyone around Alfie for putting up with her shit and trying to accept her, cause goddamn I woulda slapped the shit outta this girl ages ago.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 20:25 by: Lelter_skelter

Well, at least the goblins won't start to hate her and abandon her. Alfie's set for life. Nothing bad will happen.

Posted on 17 November 2023, 21:43 by: Neeckin

@Lelter_skelter

Lol or they do something terrible when they find out she can't get pregnant

Posted on 18 November 2023, 06:44 by: Jarvis_42

Time for Cillian to either make himself look really good, or really bad...

Posted on 18 November 2023, 08:52 by: HLR3

@Drakhesh

I think Incase did an excellent job with world building that the way the different areas visited were not portrayed homogenously. Alfie's hometown and maybe Lydia's are the more conservative places, but they are not without their open secrets. I would not said that the caravan lean toward the conservative side of thing. I think the intention was that the caravan was split quite evenly in term of their value toward sex, to the point that the puritan has specific clothing piece to mark themselves. Cillian's home town is also split similarly I think, with people like young Cillian and people who jump into the lamia orgy on the daily. Even in the goblin town, we see other species having similar value toward sex, so I would not say the goblin and Voch'khari being that much of an outlier; I would say the goblin chaotic nature mark them more than their open sexuality and the Voch'khari's incorporation of sex into their hierarchy make them stand out more than their openness to it.

In that particular incident, I disagreed that Lydia threw Alfie under the bus, intentionally or not. Remember that Alfie got away with that incident, her being shunned was not from Lydia revealing their sexual relationship. The puritan found out that Lydia slept with Marco while being aware that Marco was sleeping with Alfie, so they thought Lydia was stealing Marco away from Alfie and confronted Lydia. Lydia defended herself by telling the truth. Alfie actually denied at first, and the puritan believed her. Alfie threw Lydia under the bus in that incident. Later, Alfie herself confessed that she and Marco was in a purely sexual relationship and Lydia did not steal him from her.

I definitely agreed that Lydia is not a good person. She is far from it, and I had noted her impulsive action in the previous comment. No character in the caravan is being shown as a good person here. Everyone has some serious flaw, and that including Alfie. I started out wanting to buck the trend of people solely place the blame of Alfie's spiral on her by pointing out that she is surrounded with pretty shit people, but I also do not want to negate Alfie's role in her own downfall. We are reading about a glorious mess of a journey to the bottom, and it is through damn good storytelling to incorporate both external and internal factors. After this though, I want some more sexy time with that lamia milf in Cillian backstory, including Vera would also be good, and Cillian, sure. Incase is very good with those mature mama, and I do want more of that after this drama story.

Posted on 18 November 2023, 18:31 by: fuckalfie

Well, congrats. Doubt Alfie's gonna come to the realization herself that she's an asshole, so Cillian probably will have to step in.

Posted on 19 November 2023, 18:00 by: Drakhesh

@HLR3

On that we agree. Don't get me wrong - as much as I'm playing hardcore advocate for Alfie in the comments, I am far from saying she's blameless in the entire thing. The entire situation is, in on itself, a good commentary on how society be it on big or small scale, feels like it has to include itself in privare sexual or romantic life of individuals.

My one complaint with inCase writing is the 'downfall' part should be better timed and played out. Alfie should had stayed on the spiral longer, let it really get spinnin in Goblintown, and only admit the truth to the caravan after a talk with Vera and Cillian would nudge her in the right direction - leading to the caravan shunning her, but her freinds re-embracing her and getting to lick their collective wounds and other body parts. Because of the timing it almost seems like Alfies first attempt at redeeming herself was doomed to arbitrarily fail just to justify the ongoing scene with Vera. The story's trajectory clearly seems to be that ater this encounter Cillian will drop some fatherly wisdom on Alfie which will nudge her in right direction.
But this way it feels like "Redemption 2: Electric Boogaloo". It does feel like Alfie's attempt to fix things failed just to justify the fiery encounter with Vera. Skipping the whole "Well you are a rat anyways" bit would, in my opinion, serve better to emphasize the fault on Alfie side, while also would make Lydia, Marco and Ogze seem less like dicks who still ditch Alfie even when she's genuinely trying.

Posted on 24 November 2023, 06:35 by: HLR3

@Drakhesh

That would depend whether inCase is aiming for a redemption arc anytime soon with this story. This story could goes the way of Metamorphosis by ShindoL. Alfie could hit absolute bottom, and we get one chapter or a few pages at the end that give a bittersweet ending to the story. I think one of the characteristic of Alfie's spiral is that she snapping back and forth between her old village-self and her new adventurous-self. Maybe it a comment on how change is not easy? She snapped back to her village-self as soon as she faced pressure from the puritan, then snap to her wild adventurous-self, when she is faced with the hypocrisy of the puritan. I would say her redemption arc seem to hinged on Vera and Cillian right now. For her friend to re-embrace her, Lydia need to acknowledged her own shit tendency to lash out when under pressure. Marco need to get less dense? He is just clueless for the most part in this. In term of Ozge, she need an acceptance arc like young Cillian; I don't see her end up with Alfie, but I do see her growing from her encounter with Alfie. Ozge is the flipped side of Alfie; they both grew up only knowing their village and both want to go out and expand their horizon; the clash is where Alfie grew up in a puritan environment, Ozge grew up in the opposite environment. Anyway, the point is none of them is at a point to re-embrace Alfie. Vera is staying, which mean this encounter basically ended with cliff hanger. We will see where this is going, inCase can still surprise reader at this point.

Posted on 24 November 2023, 15:50 by: Arjay

That "I Love You". I'm not real sure about these two seeing each other again.

Posted on 25 November 2023, 16:19 by: tamagin

Man I just want to see goblins, halflings, and everything short getting fucked by humanoids of regular to large sizes.

Posted on 29 November 2023, 15:41 by: BlitzimX

I just realized that almost across the whole comic, this is the first time someone ever said "I love you" to Alfie. I think this may be the shift.

Posted on 29 November 2023, 16:18 by: soso188

The I love you that shattered her ego

Posted on 29 November 2023, 17:00 by: Shannon St.Claire

Page27... FUCKING FINALLY.

Posted on 29 November 2023, 17:35 by: Zo22y

>What is wrong with me?!

You're a twat, Alfie, that's what.

Posted on 29 November 2023, 23:38 by: MagicalJuko

So, the hubris stage is over, if we are using the monomyth theory.

Posted on 30 November 2023, 07:58 by: Colonel Slammovich

She never got that angry confrontation with Vera and the apology and acceptance from Vera means that she never will. Best way of putting it is that Alfie had been building it up inside her head for so long and now that it has happened and it was completely different she realises how much she fucked up. It'll sink in more and either she'll try to make amends or she'll fully commit to burning the bridge.

Posted on 01 December 2023, 15:22 by: ancientsofmumu

"You are
Lisa
Simpson"

Posted on 01 December 2023, 23:14 by: Lelter_skelter

apology tour?

emphatically, she needs to apologize to ogze.

Posted on 06 December 2023, 17:19 by: Dreamnyaner

What has she become....

Posted on 06 December 2023, 17:31 by: Deity Link

I am so emotionally invested in this plot

Posted on 07 December 2023, 03:20 by: redragon1990

shes gonna reform somewhat and then shes going to meet the nagas

Posted on 07 December 2023, 07:52 by: Colonel Slammovich

"She's going to hate me! I know it.... I'll give her a reason"

Oh no, she's incinerating that bridge isn't she.

Posted on 08 December 2023, 05:03 by: Jarvis_42

Bridge identified. Target locked.
Press F to begin orbital nuclear strike.

Posted on 11 December 2023, 00:02 by: Shannon St.Claire

"I totally need to change! I actually WANT to change! Buuuuut I'm pooped so maybe I'll start on the who 'being-a-better-person' bullshit tomorrow?" might be the most realistic moment in this whole comic.

Posted on 13 December 2023, 23:48 by: Neeckin

Jesus are they burning the entire city down?

Posted on 14 December 2023, 03:13 by: redragon1990

Alfie done fucked big time now that the village megaphone is the focus

Posted on 16 December 2023, 01:18 by: lex15226

Oh, hey look: Alfie helping the goblins steal from the caravan led to something bad, who could've seen it coming? Also: I know this is a story heavy porn comic but 32 without any sex is a bit much.

Posted on 16 December 2023, 03:49 by: fissile_bear

Anybody else getting a really strong classic Disney movie vibe from this? I'm waiting for them to burst into song and burn the whole damn place down.

Posted on 16 December 2023, 13:40 by: Deity Link

Things are gonna get worse before they get better.

Posted on 20 December 2023, 13:15 by: Lelter_skelter

Oh. So Alfie's lies are going to get someone actually lynched.

Posted on 20 December 2023, 15:09 by: Gedankengut

@ Deity Link

Things here only get worse, to appear slighty better for one or two pages to become even worse after that....

Have fun guys, I'm out. :(

Posted on 20 December 2023, 18:36 by: Razka

Page 11 lmao

Posted on 20 December 2023, 20:19 by: sixugliness

As soon as Alfie decides to be a better person her propensity to run gets her running in circle. Hopefully Hana's orc lover is going to show up and save her.

Posted on 20 December 2023, 21:09 by: lex15226

Wow, Alfie, i can't believe you're actually thinking of leaving her to take the fall for your doing, i know next page you'll do the right thing but fucking wow.

Posted on 20 December 2023, 21:39 by: PureEnergy

I can just see Alfie being bothered by her conscience, and saying, "Ah, Hana was probably sneaking off to get banged by her monster lover, and me...? Oh, I was just discovering my Father's been gay for ages, and my Mother's taken a human lover...Yeah, everything's fine..."

Posted on 22 December 2023, 09:23 by: Jarvis_42

It is frighteningly easy to imagine this woman chanting "Expiation!" and taking a crossbow bolt to the face. (and if you dont get that reference go look up a movie called The Stand)

Alfie is precisely as obligated to step in on Hanas behalf as Hana, Lydia, Marco or Ozge were obligated to step in for her when this lynch mob was pointed at her. And she already understands the long game that HER of all people stepping in would just make Hana a permanent outcast. Though it would make a great bridge to Vera demonstrating some long range embroidery techniques. The orc stepping in would be great, but then it would be him vs the pitchfork brigade, which would kick off the larger scale battle.

This is Hanas moment to stand or crumble. Then see who steps up based on that.

Posted on 22 December 2023, 11:13 by: SETHRX7

Alfie fault in all of this aside, I am amazed how fast "saggy tits" reacted. It is almost like she was called by her name.

Posted on 22 December 2023, 13:04 by: Neeckin

Oh no she is still wearing the damn necklace

Posted on 22 December 2023, 17:12 by: Jarvis_42

Rut roh, Saggy! (I honestly dont remember her actual name, but thats now it)
Battle lines are definitely forming, Embroidery Club vs Team Slut, possibly with Angry Mommy sniper support.

Posted on 22 December 2023, 20:12 by: Draupnir7

Here we go. What's up with everybody bailing before Alfie can get more than 5 degrees through the heel-face turn?

Posted on 01 January 2024, 22:58 by: Drakhesh

Glad Alfie is at least trying to stand up for Hana, since she's her best friend - or at least the only one who bothered with showing some empathy toward our shortstack.

And I'm *really* hoping the story will not go down the lines of Alfie being all "Oh woe is me, truly I am the worst, everything that happened is purely and exclusively my fault, including the caravan milk supply going sour as well as inflation" with rest of the cast gracefull accepting her groveling "It's okay, we're glad you finally admit you're garbage". I'm *hoping* it'll be more of a mutual admission of fuckups on all sides, following Vera's example.

Posted on 12 January 2024, 01:15 by: Shannon St.Claire

Busted. Here we go...

Posted on 12 January 2024, 05:33 by: Deity Link

How many critical fails has she rolled so far?

Posted on 13 January 2024, 18:26 by: lyaksandra

@Deity Link Yes.

Wow, she's written as an imbecile. Just take it off and return it while saying the goblins sold it to you.

Posted on 13 January 2024, 19:21 by: Jarvis_42

Of all the moments to grow a spine. The way she's holding that necklace, its almost like somewhere in there, a single, solitary brain cell is screaming into the void "this is what a noose feels like, rat! now shut up and run!" Ah well, at least Hana is out of the spotlight for the moment.

Posted on 13 January 2024, 20:40 by: sixugliness

@lyaksandra If she did that, she is just returning to her lying way.

While Alfie's action seems stupid, at least she is owning it instead of spinning it off like it is not her fault. For the moment I think she is taking the first and painful step to be honest with herself and those around her.

Posted on 14 January 2024, 02:44 by: PureEnergy

Ah, "sicced" doesn't have a 'k' in it...

Posted on 14 January 2024, 10:38 by: OccasionalGoldfish

How can a woman with tits as great as Alfie's, constantly find herself in so much trouble?

Posted on 17 January 2024, 12:01 by: Dreamnyaner

@OccasionalGoldfish

Big mass affects gravity

Posted on 17 January 2024, 13:11 by: jodedoor

dawn alfie, realise your stand-Bass Slut

Posted on 19 January 2024, 16:20 by: SETHRX7

Who else feel now like scenario "When I was reincarnated into fantasy world just to smack Saggy Tits for her idiocy" is reaaaaaaaly compeling?

Posted on 25 January 2024, 14:00 by: Liquid Shadow

Here it is. She finally gets the confrontation she wanted. While it isn't her mother, it is someone similar enough to how her mother used to act. Good enough for her, let the rage flow.

Posted on 27 January 2024, 03:26 by: MetaSnake

Well this is the climax we needed to see.

Even if this goes badly for her, it's good to see Alfie finally doing what she needs to. Better to go out on your own terms.

Posted on 28 January 2024, 01:21 by: Notomoe

Alfie poisoned our water supply, Burned our crops and delivered a plague upon our houses!

Posted on 29 January 2024, 19:49 by: whichdude

Alfie has been doing so many Jojo poses these last few pages. I'm waiting for the DIO walk.

Posted on 31 January 2024, 18:26 by: DiroMustang

Is this the start of the Alfie redemption arc?

Posted on 31 January 2024, 19:34 by: OccasionalGoldfish

Guys, I heard that Alfie wounded the Warmaster with a poisoned blade.

Posted on 31 January 2024, 22:16 by: SETHRX7

@DiroMustang

50/50 chance. I'm almost sure that she started "big reveal" chain right now.

Posted on 01 February 2024, 03:25 by: Foostini

Good for you, Hana

Posted on 01 February 2024, 22:08 by: PureEnergy

I foresee a semi-riot in the offing...

Posted on 02 February 2024, 12:53 by: GrimEater

Gentleman Ork

Posted on 02 February 2024, 16:58 by: Draupnir7

Yeah, Saggytits, it's all fun and games until THEY have to crouch to talk to YOU, huh?

Posted on 03 February 2024, 12:32 by: MrHarveste

Immediately bitched out when faced with Beef Mclonghuge and his 7 ft frame.

Posted on 03 February 2024, 18:07 by: Alphieus

Grasha is so wholesome.

Posted on 04 February 2024, 04:35 by: sexprom

we done with Alfie, give us a SoL of Hana and Grasha

Posted on 07 February 2024, 11:38 by: Jarvis_42

Place yer bets on who just told Saggy no. I'm calling Vera, prepared to make a very pointed statement.

Posted on 07 February 2024, 12:57 by: Disturbedfan077

@ Jarvis_42

Frankly I hope it's Ozge. It won't be...but I can hope.

Posted on 07 February 2024, 13:08 by: erana

Dun dun DUN!

Posted on 07 February 2024, 15:43 by: Chojiin

Grasha: Do. We. Have. A. Problem. Here? … Thought not.

Good on Hana! My money is on the ladyboi elf putting a stop to this trial nonsense.

Posted on 07 February 2024, 23:48 by: lex15226

Please don't be Ozge, Alfie doesn't deserve her, has to be Vera.

Posted on 08 February 2024, 00:42 by: Notomoe

Saggytits has some nice knockers.

Posted on 08 February 2024, 04:00 by: redragon1990

gotta be the elf, hes an ass but he owes alfie now

Posted on 08 February 2024, 05:37 by: Jarvis_42

Fair, Ailduin is the only one I can see being able to pull rank on Saggy like that. And the wording does kinda "sound" like him.

Posted on 09 February 2024, 20:46 by: Shannon St.Claire

@Jarvis_42: that's not Ailduin, that's his main bodyguard, Eamas.

Ailduin is way more femme than that (and far more loquacious). Ailduin would also NEVER dress like anyone else, certainly not like a guard (the fact that the three elves are dressed exactly alike means it's a uniform and gives away that they're guards).

Posted on 10 February 2024, 09:51 by: Katajanmarja

Yes, Eamas, whom we know best from chapter 7. I believe he has orders from Ailduin, but those have quite possibly nothing to do with Alfie. Ailduin’s master plan is to create cooperation between the various sentient species; members of his own caravan of peace burning down Lucernel of all places would be... something of a setback.

As for Alfie’s "It was all me!" scene: anyone else see a nice Bondage Fairies reference there?

https://e-hentai.org/s/a6f59e24a4/201019-49

Posted on 11 February 2024, 06:11 by: MrHarveste

I do believe an ass wooping is about to happen or a spanking at least.

Posted on 11 February 2024, 06:58 by: Liquid Shadow

I love the glare that elf is giving to that woman in the background as he takes away her torch.

Posted on 12 February 2024, 08:06 by: Jarvis_42

Vera: Hello again Ailduin, I see you have your hands full, may I offer some custom leathercraft to assist with that? Some snug and sturdy cuffs? A nice heavy flogger perhaps?

Posted on 14 February 2024, 10:25 by: theguywiththemask

All I want is for Alfie to have a metamorphosis ending and everyone else to have a happy ending

Posted on 14 February 2024, 14:18 by: WistfulDread

I have a feeling Alfie's not in as much trouble with the Elves as she thinks.
Alduin's having a hard time because the goblin's last head diplomat died, and Rug has no idea of the old deals they had going. Alfie's ability to coordinate the goblins into a bloodless encounter would impress him. Especially since their original plan was going to be robbing Him.

Posted on 14 February 2024, 14:24 by: DiroMustang

God I cannot stop being amused on how *nothing* ever goes Alfie's way.
Like if she decided to save a poor kid from a thug that kid would end up being a serial killer or something.

Posted on 14 February 2024, 16:14 by: AlbaNader1976

At this point Alfie's name could change to Taylor Hebert and I would 100% feel like it is fitting.

Posted on 16 February 2024, 10:33 by: MrHarveste

The classic "stop being stupid or we will call your parents to come pick you up" it indeed does work everytime.

Posted on 16 February 2024, 11:57 by: spartanboy2

Based Cillian. Put a goddamn ring on Vera hand.

Posted on 16 February 2024, 12:20 by: jodedoor

finally someone said it.

Posted on 16 February 2024, 13:02 by: ninesenshi

Great job with how the elf steps in and handles things. After a thousand years of managing humans, that's exactly how good they would be. I also loved `Sweetie, your kid is an asshole'. Perfect!

Posted on 16 February 2024, 17:31 by: lex15226

Love how he's trying to explain calling Alfie what she has been ever since she joined the caravan but all Vera is thinking of is him calling her sweetie, these 2 are great.

Posted on 16 February 2024, 19:39 by: fuckalfie

Man's about to drop the pipe bomb

Posted on 16 February 2024, 20:49 by: Shannon St.Claire

Vera's about to show Cillian where Alfie gets it from...

Posted on 17 February 2024, 01:33 by: Lelter_skelter

Vera, come on. He's your husband now. You can't escape it.

Posted on 18 February 2024, 05:14 by: MrHarveste

Cillian honey don't start the pep talk with "your daughters an asshole" you build up to that after explaining how she might have got there.

Posted on 21 February 2024, 16:56 by: ancientsofmumu

Cilian: Absolutely unable to not keep it real

Posted on 23 February 2024, 02:54 by: Aokodoku

Cillian has seen too much bullshit to play games, once again proving why he's the fucking MVP.

Posted on 23 February 2024, 20:04 by: Draupnir7

Oh boy, I can't wait for the degenerate elf to fuck things up like usual!

Posted on 23 February 2024, 21:41 by: Shannon St.Claire

Yes yes YES. Ailduin+Vera+Cillian sandwich. Give us the 3-way we deserve.

Posted on 23 February 2024, 22:42 by: goot_

CILLIAN WATCH OUT ITS A TRAP

Posted on 24 February 2024, 09:37 by: fuckalfie

If an actual man gets to fuck the sissy this might've all been worth it

Posted on 26 February 2024, 00:30 by: dz1jgmeyer

...well, this reminds me why I dropped this comic before. Main character whom cannot have anything go right or get to improve, while the surrounding dipshits get to either have consequence-free fun, character development, or both. Fuckin' spectacular.

Posted on 28 February 2024, 12:31 by: Jarvis_42

Notice she isnt arguing the part about being tamed.

Posted on 29 February 2024, 11:57 by: heeb

Very based and monogamy pilled

Posted on 01 March 2024, 11:13 by: superbontino

What I like about Alduin characterization is how despite acting silly sometimes, he is very capable and competent in what he does, reflecting how he has many decades (or centuries? I don't remember at the moment) of experience in dealing with all kind of people.
He knows when is time to be serious by instantly reverting back to his true competent self, like now when he aknowledged the situation between Vera and Cillian and sincerely congratulates with him.

Posted on 02 March 2024, 11:12 by: MrHarveste

That man is just begging for vera to peg him with his words.

Posted on 03 March 2024, 02:49 by: HLR3

They should put a picture of Alduin in the definition of power bottom, lol. He want to to be pegged, but it is gonna be on his term and only his term.

Posted on 06 March 2024, 12:59 by: ninesenshi

Feel better. I've been enjoying the last few pages, since the elves got involved. I like the way you portray them.

Posted on 06 March 2024, 16:00 by: SETHRX7

He managed to tell everything in just one dinner? This elf sure to know how to use his tongue.

Posted on 07 March 2024, 00:32 by: Alphieus

I think Cillian exists to the the single point of reason in this massive shitstorm.

Posted on 07 March 2024, 06:56 by: GTFODeathknight

each day we get closer and closer to the Finale and after reading it for ...idk how long, gonna be hard to fill the halfling sized hole(phrasing)

Posted on 19 March 2024, 19:27 by: 14031961PETER

Sorry to hear about InCase Hand, hopefully everything's OK and will look forward to his return..

Posted on 24 March 2024, 12:50 by: Laeron

Have not read series in a long time. Why are they green now?

Posted on 26 March 2024, 20:18 by: atomicfuthum

I started reading for the horny but now I just want Alfie, Vera and Cillian to have a happy ending. They deserve it.

Posted on 03 April 2024, 14:17 by: Zo22y

I hear Maxmoefoe's voice as Ailduin's...

Posted on 03 April 2024, 23:21 by: WistfulDread

Hope Incase gets better.

A lot of artists I follow seem to be getting major hand issues. Hope they all get better

Posted on 03 April 2024, 23:58 by: Deity Link

Take it easy Incase! Recover well!

Posted on 04 April 2024, 04:59 by: scar1966

Having been in the Military and seen various injuries of a similar nature, you need to take care of that hand. The drawing can wait, and so will your fans, myself included. I love your work, and I'm waiting to see more. Enjoy your respite, and rest that hand.

Posted on 04 April 2024, 06:45 by: PureEnergy

In the last three years, I've encountered three women that have had crippling hand problems due to using a mouse for eight hours a day.
I'd been having problems myself because of learning CAD, and had alleviated perhaps 80% of the problems by tripling the distance I had to move the mouse to move it 3mm on the screen.

I mentioned this 'hack' to all three women, and it helped two, but all had serious muscle and nerve problems so all it could do was help a bit, not fix.
The two it DID help switched to a Vertical Mouse and their problems - eventually - were reduced to a manageable level.
The third one needed surgery, but her employer refused to alter her workplace space to allow a Vertical Mouse to be used...the lady quit and went to a place that was more 'flexible'.

To be honest, I'd never heard of a Vertical Mouse, but it helped three women, so it might help others...

But, yeah, Incase, take it easy, 'cause we don't mind waiting...quality is worth waiting for...

Posted on 04 April 2024, 12:20 by: ninesenshi

wish you a speedy recovery. So many of my web-comic artists going down with injuries lately. Is it a problem with how they are drawn?

Was surprised to hear you are `near the end'. I felt like the story was just getting rolling as Alfie comes to self-realization and the story moves on to it's next phase. Ah, well.

Feel better!

Posted on 13 April 2024, 08:05 by: resicane

I don't know why people are over-analyzing something that is so basic. This is not complex everyone think it is. The truth is, everyone is a hypocritical piece of shit. Lydia is a hypocritical piece of shit. Marco is a hypocritical piece of shit. That elf gay guy is a hypocritical piece of shit. Almost everyone is a hypocritical piece of shit, and Alfie is the punching bag. If I was her I would just burn the bridges or even bury them. I would publish my diary and go scorched Earth. Because why the fuck not? Everyone is terrible and they corrupted an innocent but curious girl.

Posted on 28 April 2024, 08:50 by: Starborn traveler

Stupid sexy Ailduin...

Posted on 04 May 2024, 22:31 by: karolfunibert

Yesterday I came for porn. Today I finished a great story! It was an amazing read. The characters felt real and their expressions were so on point. The writing was captivating and consistent. I stopped looking at it like porn, its a good story where somehow every development is entangled with sex. Each scenery was so lively and inventive and I whenever there was talk of a new species I was curious to see how they had sex (physically and what it meant to them socially). So still very much into the amount of sex, but I don't even care about who fucks who, by now I really want the characters to be happy! The characters were beautifully written and drawn by the way, I could fall in love with Lydia.

Really sorry to hear about your injury, thank you very much for the comic! Get well soon!

Posted on 28 May 2024, 03:28 by: jmaster

Hand injuries are not easy to get by but yeah hopefully it doesn't stop things.

Posted on 12 June 2024, 14:42 by: wyred

"How do you do fellow perverts". While we're all waiting and hoping for Incase's speedy recovery, I finally wrote the Alfie scene I've been wanting ever since Vera showed up in camp. Zero sex - just heavy emotions, hurt/comfort, and acknowledgement that Alfie is indeed Worst Girl. Hope you enjoy (for varying definitions of enjoyment).

https://archiveofourown.org/works/56434546

Mothers and Daughters
Vera Tolman, Ozge
The reunion with her runaway daughter was a complete disaster. Vera Tolman discovers that things can always get worse.
Post-chapter 18, Vera POV. Rated T for one use of a swear.

Posted on 23 July 2024, 02:19 by: monkeyjack

I read Alfie for a while up to about the point she started getting interested in the aggressive human soldier? And just got really annoyed with all the characters. I didn't like Alfie or her parents, I didn't like Melly too much, I hated all the people Alfie was hanging around so I put it down. I saw Chapter 18 and decided, okay, where are things. And lo and behold I'm glad we finally got Vera meeting up with Alfie but....gee hosephat. Awful. There are reasons why Alfie is acting the way she is and it would be silly to expect a happy reunion given how things left off but what the hell man. I hope there's a good pay off (I've only read a few pages of this chapter) because at the moment I hate Vera less but Alfie, yeesh. Kudos for keeping it going this long and not just doing the same old thing but it'll be a while before I decide to go more into this. Just depressing and upsetting. Blarg. EDIT: finished the chapter. Okay, now I'm curious to go back and see how things got to where they are. Things are complicated. People can learn and change and improve. Still a hard read, sorry to hear about your hand, Incase. That sucks.

Posted on 23 July 2024, 04:50 by: Draupnir7

And now back to your regularly scheduled familial dysfunction.

Posted on 11 September 2024, 17:35 by: Tinkerer

WE'RE SO BACK

Posted on 11 September 2024, 19:34 by: Bizmont

WISE FWOM YO GWAVE

Posted on 11 September 2024, 20:08 by: neroero

Alfie is based, she doesn't let anyone know her next move. Nobody knows her, not even herself.

Posted on 11 September 2024, 21:56 by: Deity Link

Funny how from one page to the next we suddenly shift to Incase's new art style.

Posted on 12 September 2024, 01:16 by: Shannon St.Claire

Ailduin looks so dreamy in the new art style. I know Incase is winding this comic down but I really wish we could see some hot steamy scenes with him in this style before it all ends.

Posted on 12 September 2024, 11:53 by: Zo22y

On one hand I love this artstyle, really unique, would love to see some naked bodies and sex done this way.
On the other hand, I hope InCase is doing well and his hand will get better soon.

Posted on 12 September 2024, 12:05 by: ninesenshi

Welcome back

Posted on 12 September 2024, 22:32 by: ThePunishR

We are back

Posted on 13 September 2024, 11:43 by: Imagine_Breaker

Is Incase drawing with his off hand? because the art in the latest chapter is pretty rough. Maybe he just needs to shake the cobwebs off or something.

Posted on 13 September 2024, 17:45 by: SETHRX7

Page 53: I know that is almost like asking for impossible but please, let this be scenario when Alfie is shown path to happier ending instead of this spiral of self destruction. Ailduin could stear everything in that direction not because he is so nice but for simple benefit of Vera owning him gratitude in some unforeseen future.

Posted on 13 September 2024, 17:47 by: Muffdiver884

@Imagine_Breaker

The reason for the change in design is the same reason for the 6 month hiatus. He had hand issues bad enough to require surgery. Instead of retiring, he went in another direction to keep drawing.

Posted on 13 September 2024, 21:13 by: Jarvis_42

Truss the rat up, toss her to Vera and Cillian and say "your problem now".

Posted on 15 September 2024, 15:58 by: gt2matt

Looks cartoonish now

Last edited on 17 September 2024, 13:50.

Posted on 18 September 2024, 01:32 by: lumpisan

@gt2matt if you ever get a hand injury I'm gonna be there to criticize your fapping technique

Posted on 18 September 2024, 19:15 by: Shannon St.Claire

@gt2matt Practically the only change to the style is lack of outlines. That's really it. Add the outlines and it will look the same as the previous few chapters (but don't go back too far, as a consequence of how long Alfie has been running is that the evolution of InCase's art style is so clear). Alternatively, take away the outlines from previous chapters and it'll match the current style. Journal of the Hunter and Week at the Library both look terrific. I love this style applied to Alfie.

Saying it looks cartoonish... so are you new to InCase's work, then?

Posted on 19 September 2024, 13:58 by: SETHRX7

Page 54: At this point I'm not even sure how much there is her actual fault. Still her face have says that she don't care anymore if he fire her, kill her or spank her. Seriously, someone pat her head with care so she get some life back in her eyes and no, no hugs. We know where she was last few hours so if you want to hug her, shower first and then hug.

Posted on 19 September 2024, 19:49 by: lex15226

@SETHRX7 A lot, she caused a lot, no head pats, she doesn't really deserve it at the moment, maybe later but yeah, good call with the shower.

Posted on 19 September 2024, 21:24 by: Jarvis_42

That is the look of someone who is entirely out of fucks to give, about anything, including themselves. The irony here is her worst offense, the one everyone will now be looking to hang her for, is organizing the goblin raid, something she did to save the lives of the few people who were actually accepting her at that point. No good deed and all that...

Posted on 20 September 2024, 16:28 by: Lerden

Hopefully he'll go back to the old art style after making full recovery, cause the new one looks kinda shit.

Posted on 20 September 2024, 22:22 by: Jarvis_42

I dont know how severe the hand injury was, but I dont see any loss in quality. Yes, the lack of outlines change the look a bit, and maybe the shading is a bit flatter but that could just be what the artist is going for in this scene. Or it could be them getting back into their stride after recovery. But that they are still working at all, let alone releasing content for free, depending on the severity of the injury is anything from respectable to miraculous. And nowhere even close to what I would call "kinda shit" on my harshest day. I would challenge anyone saying otherwise to do better and post it for the honest, gentle and supportive critique the internet is known for.

Posted on 22 September 2024, 13:29 by: monkeyjack

Aflie is so close to a revelation here, I hope she gets her shit together soon. I want to throttle her at the moment. I like the outlines but there's nothing wrong with InCase's art. People complaining about it, I don't know what you're talking about it.

Posted on 22 September 2024, 13:38 by: The-Kite

@Jarvis_42 I'm only speculating, but the most likely hand injury that could prevent an artist from drawing for so long and require surgery—barring an accident where the hand gets crushed/broken—is carpal tunnel syndrome. It doesn't always require surgery, but in severe cases, it causes intense hand pain, difficulty clenching a fist, and significant loss of strength. Drawing, as well as many other tasks, becomes nearly impossible. Carpal tunnel syndrome can effectively end an artist's career. It's no joke.

Surgery is a common practice for carpal tunnel syndrome, and recovery time is relatively short. However, some pain may linger, and there can be a loss of accuracy and mobility due to nerve damage, especially if the compression went untreated for too long. That said, in most cases, the hand recovers well after surgery.

I believe Incase had a severe case of CTS, underwent surgery, and adapted his style to something simpler and faster to reduce strain and minimize prolonged stress on his hand.

(For context, I'm speculating from experience: I developed carpal tunnel syndrome in my drawing hand and had to simplify my style to reduce the amount of time spent working. Luckily, I caught it early and have managed to avoid surgery through exercises.)

For those who think there's been a drop in quality, please cut the guy some slack. Hand injuries, whether from accidents or nerve damage (like carpal tunnel), are incredibly painful and can cost an artist their ability to draw entirely. Incase may or may not return to his previous style depending on the severity of his injury and how well he recovers, but if he can’t, please understand that it may be a necessary adaptation to preserve his ability to draw. Plus, this new style will likely evolve as he masters a different way of handling shapes and composition.

*edited for proofreading, missed some wild typos there ><

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Posted on 26 September 2024, 21:21 by: Miralelian

Honestly? I kinda like this new style. It is, admittedly, a bit jarring after 17.5ish chapters of slow improvement to what it was just prior to the hand injury. While it may be a bit 'simpler', it is not *bad* - just different as the artist (re)learns and heals.

Posted on 26 September 2024, 23:12 by: porno-mancer

Eh, it's just kinda.....jarring, having that sudden shift in style. Not to mention it removes a LOT of black from the color palette, which shifts the tone of things. Some of the character designs also don't work so great without linework - the new style is much more dependent upon color contrast to provide shape and definition.

Gotta wonder if he's tried anything other than changing up the style. Have carpal tunnel myself, and sometimes the solution isn't to change your physical activity but rather change the TOOL you use to do it with.

EDIT: Can't say a single thing that isn't absolute dickriding without some faggots downvoting you over it.

EDIT 2: Alright, he's tweaking the colors a bit, contrast is better now.

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Posted on 27 September 2024, 01:09 by: kalatkourgin

Incase could draw the rest of the comic in XKCD-style stick figures and I wouldn't care, I just want to see how the story ends, the writing is so good and I've followed for too long to not see it.

Posted on 27 September 2024, 06:55 by: SilverCut

What's with all the good artist's getting injured? Are we in the darkest timeline? Shiniez also damaged his hand/arm at one point and Blunt-Katana suffered partial paralysis last year. Now Incase. I know that all three of them are recovering and getting better but fuck it, why can't some of the shitty people in the world get hurt instead of good NSFW artists, damnit!

Posted on 27 September 2024, 15:03 by: The-Kite

To be fair it's a risk of the trade; a lot of artists living off posting art in a near continuous schedule put a lot of constant pressure on their hands; not to mention that it doesn't necessarily stops when we stop drawing: we still manipulate stuff, gaming still uses the hands etc... Carpal (or more commonly, tendinitis) is really hand "wear and tear" at muscle and nerves level. If one draws too much yet doesn't take care with hand exercises or due rest, it can go real bad, and not only the hands!

Carpal *can* kill your career but there's also the common tendinitis that can take months to recover and will slow you down, there's lower/lumbar back pain and the problems that comes with sitting all day (herniated discs, sciatica, and so on), potential of blood clots in the legs (which can be lethal)...

Any of these problems can take months to resolve and are very painful. If you're an artist reading this, or a streamer using your hands a lot, take good care of your health, don't forget to move a lot, stretch and drink when you draw etc; even if you're just sitting at a desk all day working in a 9/5 a lot of these can also happen to you and believe me, you don't want a lot of these long-lasting injuries!

Posted on 27 September 2024, 22:25 by: Shannon St.Claire

Sooooooo what I'm getting here is that some of you were either a.) just picked it up around chapter 11 or 12 which was about the point when the style that the latest one changed FROM truly solidified or b.) completely ignored the fact that chapters 1 through 6 look like an almost entirely different style, including just being black & white. I'm guessing you guess MUST HAVE shat actual bricks when he first introduced color in chapter 7 or lost your collective shits in chapter 10 when he did the Voch'khari orgy in a monochome (plus red). How were none of those changes not equally jarring to your sensibilities?

How is it that anyone can follow this particular comic and, with a straight face, begin to take issue with the current style as if the style hasn't evolved? That's honestly the most underrated beauty of this comic: it's a repository of the evolution of InCase's style over the years. He doesn't have any other project that he's worked on that illustrates (almost) all his styles like this one does. It was not 17.5 chapters of one style: it has been 18 chapters of about 5 or 6 different styles, each of which faded from one to the next. Because I've said it more than once: this current style is no different than the last several chapters, it just doesn't have the outlines. Anyone who thinks that the style only just recently changed needs to go back and just glance at the changes in style in chapters 5 thru 12.

"Journal of the Hunter" looks different than "Grimlewd" which looks different than "Room & Board" which looks different than "Melting" which looks different than "The Invitation" etc, etc. "Alfie" is the only one that's been ongoing through each of those projects.

Posted on 30 September 2024, 08:23 by: sinfulharry

I hope Incase manages to finish this series one day, and makes a real physical release of this. I wonder if im alone in this ? I would gladly fork out some good cash for a thick hard cover versions of this, probably would have to split it in to 2 or 3 tomes. Lets His health holds up and gets better.

Posted on 04 October 2024, 12:24 by: Liquid Shadow

@darkryu444
Bait used to be believable. You didn't even try.

Posted on 04 October 2024, 13:04 by: ringorm

I wonder if this is the artists "blue period", he semed to draw mostly depressing shit these days.

Posted on 04 October 2024, 16:05 by: SETHRX7

@ringorm
I would say that it just time for more serious things to happen so hilarity can ensure later. Last chapters made them lose some of energy needed for next shouting match so this is one rare chance for honest talk, some snark and reconciliation of some sort.

Posted on 04 October 2024, 20:15 by: Dreamnyaner

I'm so sorry to hear about InCase's arm situation
And I actually like new style more. Drawing is much more smooth without black lining. If InCase's arm is magically healed and suddenly I get to choose which style he'd use, I'd choose new style

Posted on 05 October 2024, 01:33 by: MagicalJuko

I kind of want to know what revenge Vera has planned on that smug-ass elf.

Posted on 05 October 2024, 02:21 by: rainingterror

i didn't get the context so i went back to see all ch that vera was in and in ch 6 she was very clear that you shouldn't break your vows to your husband and she took an oath talking a looot of shit then told he daughter that she was a deviant and would actively turn her back on her and said she wouldn't support her

Posted on 06 October 2024, 09:39 by: ThePunishR

incest makeup time?

Posted on 09 October 2024, 13:49 by: rajabuta

huh. The art style seems......... a tad different

Posted on 09 October 2024, 14:36 by: Mason2

Now draw them hugging and reconciling. Pls.

Posted on 09 October 2024, 15:36 by: Azrelgignes

when do they fuck

Posted on 09 October 2024, 15:56 by: lex15226

For god's sake Alfie, listen to your mom for once. I miss Marco and Ozge.

Posted on 09 October 2024, 16:50 by: Draupnir7

@rainingterror And that was back in chapter 6, before several leaps in personal growth and when she and Alfie were still back in that cesspit Pickering, surrounded by assholes behind masks. I won't say she should be absolved of all her bullshit, but this Vera isn't that Vera.

Posted on 10 October 2024, 04:22 by: Bizmont

@rajabuta InCase went on hiatus due to a wrist injury that required surgery. Now that it's healed they've switched to a less line-intensive style to avoid a repeat injury.

Posted on 12 October 2024, 06:39 by: rajabuta

yeah, I know he took a break from hand injury
at least it wasn't AI xD

Posted on 22 October 2024, 15:55 by: kongz

please let the alfie redemption arch start >.<

Posted on 24 October 2024, 15:39 by: Superman3869

Where's sex? A whole of talking for some reason. Not enough sex.

Posted on 24 October 2024, 20:30 by: SETHRX7

Page 64: And this is what happens when you don't give vital informations to your main character. Now be a smart elf and remind yourself that Alfie have bigger standing with those munchkins than you and you can use it to your advantage.

Posted on 28 October 2024, 20:10 by: johncarter

Uhoh... I think she just caused the extinction of goblins.

Posted on 30 October 2024, 15:36 by: Liquid Shadow

@johncarter
Or planted the idea of a goblin brothel in the elf's mind. Whether it is a brothel of goblins or for goblins would depend on which is more profitable.

Posted on 30 October 2024, 16:41 by: Foostini

Alright on this one i'm with Alfie, you can't get mad at people for fuckin' with your plans when nobody knows what the plans are Alduin

Posted on 30 October 2024, 22:22 by: lex15226

You're telling me no one noticed that there aren't any male goblins until now? Really?

Posted on 01 November 2024, 14:12 by: SETHRX7

@ lex15226
Goblins seems to be equated with chaos incarnation here. They literally fuck with everything, frontstab and backstab themselves for power and have even more trust issues with other races than between themselves. Maybe sooner or later we will discover that male goblins are super smart, always decide early to hide far away from other half of their race and deal with stock markets under everyones noses but as for now, they existence is questionable.

Posted on 01 November 2024, 14:54 by: Superman3869

Why is there no one having sex?

Posted on 01 November 2024, 19:45 by: spartanboy2

Haha Cillian goblin daughter is the shaman one.

Posted on 02 November 2024, 07:25 by: Bakster123

Cillian knows gobussy pretty well

Posted on 06 November 2024, 18:49 by: ringorm

Remember when this used to be a porn comic?

pepperidge farm remembers.

Posted on 06 November 2024, 21:32 by: Lelter_skelter

so...cillian fucked a 5 year old...?

Posted on 07 November 2024, 15:17 by: Dreamnyaner

@Lelter_skelter She said she was 12

Posted on 07 November 2024, 18:39 by: Winged Phallus

I've been reading and been invested in this porn comic for some 5 years now

Posted on 13 November 2024, 16:25 by: meficrow

So it's just the two of them...
in a tent...
with a human...

(Palpatine voice) DO IT

Posted on 13 November 2024, 18:54 by: Imagine_Breaker

Oh nice Alfie gets to see how cute her mom is around Cillian. This will either be very wholesome, or it's going to make Alfie feel like an even bigger piece of shit.

Posted on 14 November 2024, 00:22 by: Justtheporn

We better get some halfling incest interracial sex or this long-ass hiatus and delay will be all for naught.

I’ve been waiting for four years to see Alfie eat her mother’s pussy and I’m starting to get tired of waiting.

Posted on 14 November 2024, 00:30 by: 霊烏路空

I am reasonably certain I heard Incase is just finishing up the story, no more sex

Posted on 15 November 2024, 16:27 by: Rodnap18

This continues to be the best. People, I need recs

Posted on 15 November 2024, 16:37 by: Foostini

Dude's been writing this shit for years with long hiatuses in between, he just wants the story done and i don't blame him.

Posted on 15 November 2024, 18:29 by: Alberonce

Damn, this is what I wanted to see, pure love between both Vera and Cillian. She's lowered her guard with him, and they both complement each other. This is a healthy relationship, and this is what I wish for Alfie too. I audibly d"awwd at page 71.

Posted on 15 November 2024, 21:24 by: DiroMustang

I'm gonna call it.
Alfie is going to try to seduce Cillian.
That's her next major screw up.

Posted on 20 November 2024, 14:03 by: Iron Vegetarian

Next page
"So, wanna fuck, daddy?"

Posted on 20 November 2024, 14:35 by: mister wolf

Step Daddy about to smash.

Posted on 20 November 2024, 15:00 by: Rodnap18

please dont fuck your new dad

Posted on 20 November 2024, 21:41 by: Colonel Slammovich

Alfie, don't fuck your new dad.

Posted on 20 November 2024, 21:57 by: three_iron

Folks downvoting Alfie seducing Cillian, but it's pretty obvious to me that is going to be her next major fuckup. I recall from long back that the point of the story was to show what a total wretch Alfie would become, and getting caught in new daddy's lap trying to suck him off when Vera walks in fits with Alfie pretty good. I'd be happy if that doesn't happen and she resists, but I don't think Alfie can.

Posted on 22 November 2024, 09:51 by: Draupnir7

I'm looking forward to the CLEARLY INEVITABLE shoot-down by Cillian, so she can get back to FIXING HER SHIT.

Posted on 22 November 2024, 15:26 by: Superman3869

Why is it taking so long to get to the sex?

Posted on 22 November 2024, 15:30 by: Dreamnyaner

For all who say "Alfie don't fuck your new dad" check Incase twitter

Posted on 22 November 2024, 18:26 by: Jarvis_42

For those of us who dont have twitter, what did he say?
We have a downvote spree going on here from people who dont like the idea. I dont care either way, I'm just curious as to the actual authors word on the matter?

Posted on 22 November 2024, 21:01 by: 霊烏路空

> I’ve seen some comments around worried that Alfie might seduce Cillian leading to more drama. Worry not. I would never draw that. Never. Ever.

That's what InCase wrote under the newest page. Then he linked an image where he drew what that would look like.

So yeah. No Alfie fucking Cillian. Which wouldn't have made narrative sense anyways, considering the comic is almost over and the porn section is over.

Posted on 23 November 2024, 11:31 by: Jarvis_42

I dont follow his tweets so I dont know how to read his usual tone, but 'I would never draw that. Never. Ever.' then proceeding to draw exactly that, seems to sound like he is teasing that he actually would? I've seen other artists take that kind of jab at people before who try to tell them what to do or not with their characters.

Comic ending soon though, thats disheartening. But its been a good run, and all good things and all that.

Posted on 24 November 2024, 18:18 by: Katajanmarja

To those who would like to see Cillian seduced by Alfie: Does Cillian really strike you as the kind of man who would risk his new relationship just to get to shag a young drama queen who has given solid proof of her immaturity?

The attractive power of silky skin and nice boobs on display has its limits.

If Incase is capable of including such a scene and making it credible, then he’s a masterful storyteller, so I’m not actually casting a "no" vote. I just don’t see how that would happen, unless Cillian has been lying about his past and attitudes. (True, the revelation that he might have fathered some little goblins would give some support to that possibility.)

The "I would never draw that" prank is just another sign of the author’s great sense of humor. Had the plot progressed this far in late March, we might have gotten a great Cillian × Alfie page for 1st April.

Posted on 26 November 2024, 03:39 by: fuckalfie

People probably want Cillian and Alfie - on a superficial level - just cause every character on Alfie's side of the story (including her, and especially the male ones) are unlikeable pieces of shit. Like, for 3/4 of it Vera's only had she, Cillian and the goat, and anyone from Alfie's side would still rank fourth for likeablity. Whole reason why Vera/Cillian is way more engaging, even in terms of sexual content, than anything that has ever gone on for Alfie. Just no one you can get behind in that circus.

Posted on 27 November 2024, 15:07 by: Manzor

@fuckalfie Yep, that's why I stopped reading it as it was released.

Posted on 29 November 2024, 15:59 by: Foostini

titty alert, a reminder that we'd all fully replace her 60% water content with 60% cum if given half the chance regardless of story or hate-ability

Posted on 29 November 2024, 16:26 by: Notomoe

We have titty. I repeat, we have titty! This is not a drill.

Posted on 29 November 2024, 20:23 by: OccasionalGoldfish

Wake up, tiddies out. Ready to face the day!

Posted on 06 December 2024, 15:21 by: Superman3869

Get to the sex!

Posted on 06 December 2024, 15:59 by: Foostini

Leaving on your own when you caused a riot and are probably being actively hunted is probably not a good idea.

Posted on 06 December 2024, 22:49 by: Deity Link

Please let things go right for once

Posted on 11 December 2024, 14:48 by: Zo22y

Alfie flashed the FB Messenger thumbup.

Posted on 11 December 2024, 18:30 by: jmaster

so they have short term memory?

Posted on 12 December 2024, 19:43 by: Mason2

They don't recognise her without the green makeup.

Posted on 13 December 2024, 04:21 by: jmaster

oh just drunk memory loss

Posted on 13 December 2024, 15:22 by: Superman3869

Seriously, where's the sex?

Posted on 18 December 2024, 12:44 by: spartanboy2

Goat now belongs with Best Girl tied with Vera of course.

Posted on 18 December 2024, 22:59 by: SETHRX7

@Superman3869 They had it yesterday. Then there was that whole chaos with goblins, her mother, goblins, caravan people, goblins, her boss and goblins. Now we are at this part that may become wholesome because Alfie had enough time to gain clarity to actually make some amends or at least speak her mind in simpler way. If you want more chaos, well, there is still that uncatched goat. Gods only know, what this animal is capable of.

Posted on 19 December 2024, 13:40 by: GTFODeathknight

@Superman3869 story-wise the sex is done now its closing the story ends

Posted on 20 December 2024, 14:59 by: Lucifuge

I'd like some halfling oyakodon but I'm also completely fine with it being an "what-if" non-canon story.

And nice, Alfie tits.

Posted on 04 January 2025, 09:24 by: RedBonkleMan

Has the quality of the art gone down? I feel like in the earlier comics there was a lot more detailing that we’re no longer seeing in this current chapter. Things feel cartoony and oversimplified compared to the far more detailed art we were used to seeing in previous chapters.

Posted on 08 January 2025, 18:54 by: BlitzimX

@RedBonkleMan : That's because of the artist's hand injury. They decided to keep drawing, but with less detail to save on their hand. But when you check when the comic has restarted and now, the quality keeps improving little by little.

Posted on 10 January 2025, 16:31 by: jmaster

To think those tits will get bigger as she goes through her pregnancy.

Posted on 10 January 2025, 18:13 by: SomniumDS

The reaction faces to her "I am sorry" XD

Posted on 11 January 2025, 00:57 by: Shannon St.Claire

JFC it's about fucking time Lydia apologized for being such a bitch. Every other panel she's calling Alfie a rat.

If Marco wasn't such a terrified bottom, he might have called her out on Alfie's behalf a long time ago.

Posted on 11 January 2025, 23:12 by: fuckalfie

Lydia is so hot. And honestly, Alfie too. A tragedy they were stuck with Marco. The circus really needed a Goblin Layer dude for all the chicks to rally around. Then Marco could've been repurposed as a 100% femboy like the elf and even he could've worked.

Posted on 12 January 2025, 01:47 by: Lemonsofliberty

It's not even porn anymore, what's the point?

Posted on 13 January 2025, 00:27 by: gallardo21

I need a bow from Lydia doing it, she's the best and it's been a while since she went into action.

Posted on 17 January 2025, 13:03 by: Dreamnyaner

Man, I love Ozge so much
Still remember her first appearance. So cool. So hot

Posted on 17 January 2025, 21:26 by: Deity Link

After all this time the series provides some well deserved healing

Posted on 18 January 2025, 07:32 by: lex15226

Oh thank god, the AlfiexOzge ship is not coming back from the bottom of the ocean, also: While i am really enjoying the story, it's not fair to pile on the people that are asking for the porn cause this is a porn comic though right now it's plot time.

Posted on 18 January 2025, 10:22 by: Liquid Shadow

@lex15226
I disagree, it is totally deserved. People constantly whining about the lack of porn every new page is annoying, especially to people who actually want to discuss the story (Just look at the sheer number of comments), and some of them are repeat offenders. This is more than just a porn comic, this is what I personally want to see more of from adult media in general. It is a genuine and thought out story that is also NSFW that doesn't just use its plot as an excuse for porn, and it is chapter 18 of a long running series. There is no way the idiots constantly calling to derail the conclusion of all of Alfie's misery have actually followed the entire story up to this point.

They are either jumping into the story at the very end and complaining about why it is winding down, or doing it to be annoying. They can go somewhere else if they just want porn and don't care about the story. There is no shortage of it on this website.

Posted on 22 January 2025, 14:04 by: kikimaru024

InCase update (2025-01-17 / pg87):

I am not stopping the updates, but I’ll have to scale back the effort put into pages for a while because of issues with my hand. For the foreseeable future, Alfie pages will be uploaded in a sketch format.

You can expect two more pages next week, just don’t expect them to be quite finished.

I’ve already posted about my issues on Patreon, but that’s for members only, so I’ll repost the relevant passage here:

“Between the holidays and the New Year’s, I managed to severely overwork my hand.

I thought that I’d learned how to deal with my hand issues, but it seems that I was wrong. It looks like I still have a lot to learn: mainly, how to slow down.

I am slowly getting my hand back into working condition. Right now, I can handle about an hour and a half of drawing each day, which is a big step down from my average of five to six hours before.

I’m going to have to slow down for the foreseeable future. It’s something that I should have done last year, but I just didn’t want to.”

I thought an hour and a half each day would be enough to keep Alfie updated, but I can tell that I won’t be able to make it. Over the last week, I started pushing myself again just to finish this page on time, and that’s the exact opposite of what I am trying to do.

I really don’t want to stop the uploads right now, this close to the end, so I am opting to lessen the time spent on each page. Once my hand is better, I will go back and add color to the pages.

If you’d rather read the end of this story with the level of quality you’re used to, just come back in a year. It should all be finished. Probably. Hopefully.

Posted on 22 January 2025, 16:55 by: DiroMustang

Page 88: Spying on people is basically her second nature now Alfia is basically some party's DnD rogue.

Posted on 23 January 2025, 00:02 by: guylikesex

I'm lost. Didn't Aildiun screw over Alfie at an earlier point or did Alfie screw it up somehow?

Posted on 26 January 2025, 16:01 by: lyaksandra

@Liquid Shadow It's not that deep, my dude. It's telenovela levels of storytelling at best, so calm down. Also, if you want a story, your advice very much also applies to yourself, use it, there's mountains of books out there to read or listen to.

On the other hand, whiners are indeed annoying and should stop. You don't like the material? Stop consuming it. Hell, the best thing you can do about this and every other media or product, like marvel slop, is that if you don't like it, do not consume it in any form. Maybe not incase, but big companies track even piracy, therefore saying "you didn't pay for it so it's fine" is not enough. DO NOT consume the content you claim to dislike, period. That is, of course, assuming you are being honest and have principles, both of which are in very short supply nowadays.

I like the black and white look. That's how I met Alfie so the color is meaningless to me. On the other hand, it highlights a problem with incase's style evolution. In the latest page, it's hard to tell who says the line about one last chance, is it the guy or the woman? (Can't remember their names.) Logically, it must be the woman, but the point stands that their facial features are terribly generic without the color.

Posted on 02 February 2025, 18:51 by: alaion

Aw, I really like Alfie and Ozge...

Posted on 11 February 2025, 08:07 by: nckeo

Artist's hands okay? The last few pages are rather rough.

Posted on 14 February 2025, 15:06 by: ringorm

Guess he's losing his hands all together now, cant even put color on the pages.

Posted on 14 February 2025, 23:55 by: HLR3

Hope Incase is not letting internal and external pressure pushing him to finish the story faster.

It is not worth losing a part of yourself to finish this by some deadline. People who stuck with this story through the years will wait another year to see it reaching its proper end. Those who can't wait will move one, then stumble back to it another time and maybe enjoy a start to finish reading. A good story will stand the test of time.

Take a slower pace, and take care of yourself. You can always make more thing with a healthy hand. Not so much in the alternate timeline.

Posted on 17 February 2025, 00:02 by: Shannon St.Claire

It's like some of you don't even bother to look at some of his other works that he's doing simultaneously. Or bother to read some of the other posts here where you can find a verbatim update from the artist himself.

InCase has literally been working on this comic/character for years. He probably wants to give it an ending so that the story is complete and put it to bed. Can't say I blame him; sometimes you just want to finish something and move on, regardless of how much you like it.

Posted on 17 February 2025, 17:09 by: mancuskaj

Great, more mental illness instead of porn. This series has basically just one good part, the uptight lady secretly fucking the orc, the rest is just boring libshit insanity.

Posted on 21 February 2025, 14:42 by: Buffyakadan

Aritst's style changes are comnon. It may not be noticable if they are fairly new but If they have been posting their art for years like InCase has then you will notice it. It's called evolution of art. They get more experience in drawing the same characters over and over again like this long comic and they improve. There are other factors that can change they style of art as well, in InCase's situation, due to high demand of the comic and their own pressure on themselves to put out updates has caused injury to their hand and that would obviously affect the style.

Because InCase is so passionate about their projects they pushed themselves to continue the pace even with an injured hand and now its set back the style even further. If you can't have compassion for an artist that wants to put out this work that their so passionate about that they are injuring themselves for your benefit then frankly you don't deserve it.

Posted on 21 February 2025, 15:50 by: lyaksandra

The irony of those who were whining about the drawings without outlines, now outlines is all there is!

Posted on 21 February 2025, 16:48 by: SETHRX7

@lyaksandra
Complainers will complain, don't worry about them and focus on cool things. For me it is how we can glimpse into elf essence of long term planning.

Posted on 23 February 2025, 06:26 by: atomicfuthum

Wait, InCase had not recovered fully before going back to drawing? Shit, that's a very bad idea...

Posted on 01 March 2025, 03:41 by: Jarvis_42

Pain is your bodys way of saying "Hey stupid, dont do that!" InCase needs to listen to that.
I would rather see the comics and other works completely abandoned than see the artist deny themselves the proper healing their hand needs. They can always come back later, but not if their pushing turns injury into permanent damage. That will only put an end to sharing their glorious talent with the world.

Posted on 07 March 2025, 20:40 by: PureEnergy

History is replete with examples of athletes who ignore the advice of professionals, go 'back to work', and literally 'suffer the consequences'.
Talk to anyone trying to treat sports-related injuries, and they'll tell that short-term, it might be Ok...long-term, bad idea.
Almost all people, athletes or not, who ignore injuries when they're young, end up suffering once middle age takes hold.
InCase should admit the truth, thank folks for all the Fish, and say he/she might be back. We'll be here.

Posted on 08 March 2025, 09:59 by: Colonel Slammovich

I enjoy their work but they're never going to recover if they don't take an extended time away to heal up. I know that it sucks because it's how they make their living but you gotta listen to your body.

Posted on 12 March 2025, 17:36 by: Shannon St.Claire

I never knew so many doctors followed InCase.

I swear it's like some of you only keep up with this Alfie comic and only get your information about InCase from this comments section. You guys are like "OMG! This illustration looks like shit! InCase can't draw anymore!!" or "Well ACKchully it's clear from the brush strokes that they've strained their maximal illudium handulator and they should not be using their hand at all..." and completely ignore things like Journal of the Hunter or Office Girlfriend or Nun n Witch or GrimLewd or whatever.

Check out InCase on Txitter and you'll see plenty of updates on other comics, updates on how hand recovery is going, what sort of illustration time the *actual*ass*doctors* said would be manageable on a daily basis vs how much rest is required and how they'd dividing that time between Alfie & other comics/commissions. No need to jump to conclusions based on anyone's random opinion here.

Posted on 14 March 2025, 12:51 by: SETHRX7

@Shannon St.Claire
So true. Even if author makes awesome story, you sometimes get even greater action in comment section. InCase made great job with whole thing if people are so willing to make philosophical debates about fine line between character bashing and actual consequences of making wrong choices.

As for me, I just want to see sooner or later complete story in one place.

Posted on 14 March 2025, 14:06 by: Chojiin

Man, poor Alfie. She thinks her mom is happier without her around. Like she was holding Vera back from the life she wanted. The next few pages will be hard, but I think they've learned to communicate well enough for it to not be so brutal.

Posted on 31 March 2025, 02:36 by: Draupnir7

MAH HEART, IT SOARS
Now there's just whatever bullshit they have to put up with as a FAMILY

Posted on 01 April 2025, 06:18 by: scar1966

Hey! Incase! How are you doing? Give us an update on your hand issues. Inquiring minds want to know!

Posted on 03 April 2025, 02:42 by: iamhere23

Good end for Vera and Alfie...both free and healing.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 04:34 by: Kolyat

So it goes.

Thank you for the story and for the memories, InCase.

Rest. Heal up. Live well.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 04:56 by: Wind-Pet

Been following this story since the beginning, and to have it end is bitter-sweet. I hope you heal up well, get some rest and continue to make comics. You are a master and the world needs entertainment and happy memories, right now more than ever! <3

Posted on 03 April 2025, 05:47 by: Wubstep

This ending, while Bitter-Sweet, is so touching. This entire comic, has been a roller-coaster of emotions. From the highs of happiness and sweet moments. To the drops of anger and sadness. All held together by the steadiness of hot sex and cold truths. Alfie, shows a story that not everything about life, relationships, and upbringing is so black and white. Many parts of everyday life are held together by the good and bad. Yet, like the odds of the flip coin. They are many factors at play that can always play a part of a decision.

Incase, you have created a masterpiece of storytelling. Should they publish this a physical book, I would gladly by at least 2 copies. I hope now that they take this well earned vacation and bask in the peace of mind from making this wonderful feat of literature.

I like to believe that most of the readers who joined this ferry of a story can all agree. We may have came for the hot sex scenes, (and they were incredibly hot.). Yet, we stayed for the grand story behind it. This was a fun trip, so let's enjoy this cruise while it finally comes to port.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 08:59 by: kikimaru024

InCase: April 2, 2025

"Hey, look at this! The last page of the story! Well, there’s still the epilogue coming up – after a break – but this is it as far as the main storyline goes. These two dummies found a way to have a relationship that doesn’t stink. Yeehaw!

I was gonna write more here, but I pulled some back muscle on my vacation and writing hurts. So this is all you get. Expect the epilogue to begin in the first half of May.

See ya!"

Posted on 03 April 2025, 16:01 by: Foostini

Yeah that's a pretty good ending, i can deal with that. I'd always wanna see more about these characters and what they do next but this neatly ties it in a bow.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 19:10 by: anon102938

This is the end of, what, 11 years? Incredible work and commitment.

Posted on 03 April 2025, 22:27 by: Katajanmarja

To me, the ending felt a bit rushed.

For Alfie, it is indeed possible to try to get to know her mother’s new character – provided that they figure out how to make a living in the same place without staying too close to each other. Sure, they might start by adventuring a bit with Cillian, all expenses covered by Ailduin, and come up with more plans, so that might work out.

But for Vera, it is really hard to get to know the new Alfie. Why? Simply because Alfie still does not know herself. She has just taken a major step towards self-discovery, and a constructive one for a change. Is it believable? Hum, borderline.

Modern stories about people who fuck up their lives tend to concentrate on the piling of fuck-ups. At best, they show in an epilogue that total alienation, collapse, and death are quite often avoidable, suggesting that it does not make for a good story to show and explain minor successes in life. I dare disagree. But since there are so few high-quality models, I’m not sure I could fare well with the task myself.

Please do not get me wrong. I do think the ending could have been built better, yet Alfie is one of the very best drama-meets-porn serial-art sagas I’ve read in my life, possibly the best sword-and-sorcery one, and one of those I’ve followed with most interest since my return to western online comics during the latter half of the 2010s. Great character designs, enjoyable art, nice worldbuilding, important themes, a good basic attitude. Interesting story arcs, too, for the most part, albeit I’m not especially good at judging those. This is one of the relatively few long free-of-charge comics that make me feel ashamed for not being a paying customer.

My thanks to the artist. I will be looking forward to the epilogue.

Posted on 27 April 2025, 09:27 by: Cattapratta

Great ending, could'nt have been better!

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