Finally, thank you for the translation! You are awesome :D

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"play dick guessing game with your pussy or we gonna chop all of your limb"

just hope this "R18 VR game" not adding a G on the R18

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Thank you!

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damn i want to play this game

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I've been waiting for this translation, thanks!

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Wow. imagine if you could dive into a world like in sword art online when ever you want and you are basically god in that world. Crazy. This game just enslaved her or a digital clone of her. I wonder what the effect would be for her in real life. Would she still be mind controlled by them? And the orcs don’t seem to be players since they gave birth to some of them.

I wonder why she doesn’t kill her self?

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The one small correction I'd recommend would be that "I'm" and "that's" both need apostrophes. Apart from that, no suggestions. Thanks!

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@stigma Tomoko was trying to pin down whether they're programmed NPCs, a rogue AI, or hacking players controlling the orc NPCs. I think ultimately the joke is that, after 200 days of non-stop gang rape, it won't matter one bit, she'll be traumatized all the same.
If this happened in say, SAO, the nature of the orcs might become relevant, and the story would probably lead to the orc players finding the girl IRL, but here the whole thing will last two hours, that's much too short.

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