You're doing god's work, thank you.

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I think the dialog text could use some antialiasing.

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Thanks for a translation that isn't just a troll one, this one deserved it.
About the translation: there was a typo on page 10, you wrote fellatio wrong, aside from that and the "anti-aliasing" thing you did pretty great.
I hope you also read the comments here, and if you do, you can update this work, still, it's good to see some actually serious translators appearing here, it's like they say, nothing gets someone motivated more than pure and raw hate XD

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idk japanese but this does seem like an nice, honest effort to translate, so thanks

Only issue is one small typo and the quality of the lettering

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