Posted on 18 December 2023, 05:52 by: Felix N-word
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My third fan translation of Acid Eater's. Featuring absolutely zero mistakes and mistranslations, what are you talking about? If you have any other doujins you want translated, send them my way. They're my way of learning Japanese, unironically
Hmmm. It feels like her character gets inverted once the sex scene starts. I would have liked it better if she had taken the initiative and actually wanted to have sex with the boys. She intentionally went into their locker room and locked the door behind her, so I was thinking that that's where this was going. Having her get overwhelmed and being unsure what's happening feels tonally inconsistent. And then, on the last page, her personality flips back to being confident and assertive. I would have liked it more had she been like that during sex as well.
Base +6, the dru one +7, Charles di Britannia +26, 2Ecchi4You +6, ezbreezy +6, 佩恩克特 +6