If you worked on this, this is for you, read bellow, if you just uploaded it @uploader, please stop. It's been a long day and I don't have the patients to justify why this need the rough grammar tag. If you don't have a full grasp on English why would you translate something into it? Also, stop making everything left justified. In almost all cases the text should be centered. Removing the original title and mangaka to give yourself credit is just fucked. As for the spoiler, please don't. Don't work and release anything else unless you get a better grasp on the language, a proofreader, a typesetter, and a cleaner.
Also I see this was uploaded by another user and at least has the rewrite tag on it. Since I can't find the original to check, if it is a rewrite, keep this shit to yourself.
Ok, I actually found it, its [SINK] Haha no Naka no Kotokunibito (BUSTER COMIC 2012-09), also chapter 5 of [SINK] Oyako Acme After looking at that title and its translation (I would think it would be something like "Stranger in Mother's Heart"), after checking further, this looks like MTL (barely changed from google translate), and where they couldn't figure out how the sentence should actually be structured in English, they made shit up. So the worst of both worlds, I would say this should be tagged as a rewrite as well.
Last edited on 19 December 2023, 16:33.
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This is disgusting. I don't mean the contents of the manga, I mean whoever "translated" it. This is just awful. Some of the worst stuff I've ever seen.
You don't even know how to use editing tools correctly. Every text section is left-justified which is incredibly ugly in comics/manga, and you made extremely gross choices about everything else too.
edit: don't even get me started on the "translation" itself. It's a complete joke. The translator clearly does not speak english (constantly uses male pronouns to refer to the mother), and may not even speak japanese either, this is likely a fucked up MTL that "Mr. K" tried to "clean" and actually just made worse.
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