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[Tsuruya (Tsuru)] Issho ni Kaisuiyoku ni Itta Ko wa Chou Daitan na Mizugi Sugata de Onnanoko no Nakami ga Marumie Joutai desu [English] [CulturedCommissions] [Digital]

[つるや (つる)] いっしょに海水浴に行ったコは超大胆な水着姿で女の子のなかみが丸見え状態です [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2023-12-19 07:13
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Language:English  TR
File Size:78.56 MiB
Length:49 pages
Favorited:536 times
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Posted on 19 December 2023, 07:13 by:   ValacBroker    PM
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#132, and we're down to the last week of my 25 days of Hentai Christmas release. This one is... weird. Let's go with that.

Also, that title is a mouthful.

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Posted on 19 December 2023, 12:51 by:   vlnshnltt    PM
Score +112
Pretty fucked up but strangely hot
Posted on 20 December 2023, 02:38 by:   WeAreTheMeta6    PM
Score +57
we need more of this artists works translated.
Posted on 20 December 2023, 03:53 by:   MagicalJuko    PM
Score +52
I have so many questions. She said 'human poop' as if she were just an alien wearing a human body. I'm surprised she can actually hold anything inside her for a given amount of time, so is the swimsuit just making her like... the Goku of anuses?
Posted on 21 December 2023, 18:44 by:   grhjklgfadkl    PM
Score +29
I know the TL is free, but I'd like to give some comments!

page 11:
砂でつくっちゃった isn't "she got sand in her pussy", it's not the verb つく, it's 作る, つくっちゃった is 作ってしまった. It should be "I made it in sand".
子宮口は普段からだらしなく半口あけててね --> that sentence wasn't translated?

It's an alright TL. The meaning is almost all there but I think it would've benefited from more skill in English. The sentence at the bottom left of page 10 is very confusing. I think she could come off as cuter also -- like page 7's "ほーら、噴水だよっ" could've been "Look, it's a fountain!" rather than "Look. It's a fountain.", because it's clearly her saying it. Also the various usages of "おまんこちゃん" are her saying pussy in an cute, endearing casual way, as is usual with this artist, so instead of just "pussy" it could be "my lil's pussy" "my cute pussy" or something, and have the girl refer to her pussy as "her", for example saying "isn't she cute?".

Really nice that this was TL'ed after six years though! Good job.
Posted on 03 January 2024, 20:32 by:   SirJames    PM
Score +53
Dude knows his fetish/audience.
Posted on 09 January 2024, 16:18 by:   EisakuOtani    PM
Score +41
Wow here's something I never expected to see translated! I hope you have room for more of his works!

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