https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01126070.html

page 1 - 849: story (continued from part 1)
page 850 - 1073: illustrations (no text)
page 1074 - 1083: character profiles

part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/2773170/642008f6cf/

a very good design ruined by a very awful presentation format.

Still luckily the last pages that compiles all the scenes saves it.

Last edited on 22 December 2023, 04:20.

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Bro should just fire up Visual Novel Maker and turn this into something official. Even if it's completely linear with no gameplay, a huge stockpile of images is the wrong way to go about presentation.

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Art is sooo good, really is crazy how much Agu has improved over the years. But yeah, presentation needs work.

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Agu work's do look more suitable for VN's.

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homelander.jpg

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易孕体质

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一作生一個

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做爱的时候脱裤袜要入刑的你不知道？

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Page 21 onwards :)

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so 3k pages in total just lol he really just made a vn at this point

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somebody tells me what VN is plz

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Visual novel, brother. Think like your typical H-game where they have an image with maybe some basic animation and voice-acting, but it's mostly you reading and clicking through dialogue boxes at the bottom of the screen.

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