Machine Translation of "The Demon Foetus"

What an amazing job.
Amazingly bad, that is. Why do you even want to share something that you cobbled together in five minutes?

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atleast it readable. also guro is rare so it help with machine translation when we got no budget for good translation also help the trouble of manually translation with google image or other ocr translator

but yeah should've giving title some detail like mtl so didn't have bigger hope of good translations

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You know, before I started to learn Japanese, I used machine translation for some of the things I posted. They were passibly good, and I never got a single complaint out of them. Probably because it never reached someone fluent in the source material to check the details for discrepancies, but I digress. But the reason no one ever complained is that, aside from using machine translation, I would take great pains to spell-check and typeset, and reformat for more grammatical sense in english. It took time, yes, but not that much, all things considered, and certainly less then an actual translation. It wasn't perfect, but it was good.

And then you have trash like this, which I can't even imagine the lack of self-respect one has to have to be willing to show this kind of work to another self-respecting human being. The absolute lack of any care at all is staggering. I literally can not comprehend the thought process behind this gallery. This was, in all likelihood, shat into a translator and auto-formatter, and then the result that was shat right back out was immediately uploaded without a second look. Truly, you, uploader, are a disgrace to art as a medium of human expression.

Edit: The new version looks prettier, for sure. It's still not great, but the willingness to actually attempt to address the issues puts you leagues ahead of others in the MTL space. For as accusatory as I was initially, you have earned at least some of that respect back. I hope you continue to improve and bring that honesty forward. Goodness knows we have enough garbage swimming around already.

Last edited on 29 December 2023, 04:02.

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just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

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Updated the translation,
Sorry about that, new to the translation but wanted to give it a try.

Thank you Mr.Heartbeat, I'll take your advice and see what I can do.

For those who want to support the artist, you can find links here:

https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01048822.html

https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/7636417

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... you've put in some effort. I can't say that I'm happy yet, but I'll give credit where credit is due. If you truly do care about getting more stuff like this out there, then keep improving your skills and especially your standards.

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Had to check this out because of the name and thumbnail, kinda wish I didn't but curiosity got the better of me, subjected to guro and MTL at the same time, I need some holy eye bleach to process this.
Gotta say that the artist does draw beautiful women when they're in a non cut up state.

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@vanilla, that's what I do also

I even enter specific terms into the translator to help it with context, as some character names get interpreted by the translator as something else

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I dont care about the MTL butchery, its good to at least have one of the rare preggo/guro doujins translated to something I can read. There really is a derth of bursting doujins

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