For the love of god, stop releasing things in English.

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An xxx-era custom that still passed down > an xxx-era custom that's still being passed down
this year only participants > this year's only participant.
page 4
he cummed into her mouth > he came into her mouth

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when a cock, damp with sweats, offerered to her, > completely nonsensical sentence. When a damp and sweaty cock is in front of her...

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she had her first orgasm that day > she had her first orgasm of the day

page 9
Feeling the heat of exposed glans and the weight of the big rod one her face, she didn't realize how many times she climaxed > Nonsensical.
Due to the heat and weight from his cock on her face... She ended up cumming countless times.

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Even though she cummed > Even though she came

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She swallowed it to the throat's depth > She deepthroated his cock

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A choking odor filled the closed room > A nauseating stench filled the closed room

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After a short break, the old man try to teased her exposed genitals > After a short break, the old man teased her exposed genitals.

His clingy caress and clever words completelt engulfed her > His insistence and sweet whispers overwhelmed her.

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Semen was easily shot into her defenseless womb > His semen filled her defenseless womb with ease.

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His pistoning turns more violent and reckless > His thrusts became more forceful

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he continues to shake his hips without caring > he continues to thrust without a second thought.
applying his full body weight with a forceful piston. > he relentlessly thrusted with his entire body weight.

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The thickest shot semen of the day > The thickest load of semen of the day

Last edited on 29 December 2023, 16:11.

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Excellent work, great translation - Thank you for sharing it with the community

Waiting for new translations of other works from this great artist, which have not yet been translated

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Tagging for rough grammar.

page 3
An xxx-era custom that still passed down > an xxx-era custom that's still being passed down
this year only participants > this year's only participant.
page 4
he cummed into her mouth > he came into her mouth

page 6
when a cock, damp with sweats, offerered to her, > completely nonsensical sentence. When a damp and sweaty cock is in front of her...

page 7
she had her first orgasm that day > she had her first orgasm of the day

page 9
Feeling the heat of exposed glans and the weight of the big rod one her face, she didn't realize how many times she climaxed > Nonsensical.
Due to the heat and weight from his cock on her face... She ended up cumming countless times.

Page 10
Even though she cummed > Even though she came

Page 13
She swallowed it to the throat's depth > She deepthroated his cock

page 15
A choking odor filled the closed room > A nauseating stench filled the closed room

page 16
After a short break, the old man try to teased her exposed genitals > After a short break, the old man teased her exposed genitals.

His clingy caress and clever words completelt engulfed her > His insistence and sweet whispers overwhelmed her.

page 18
Semen was easily shot into her defenseless womb > His semen filled her defenseless womb with ease.

page 19
His pistoning turns more violent and reckless > His thrusts became more forceful

page 20
he continues to shake his hips without caring > he continues to thrust without a second thought.
applying his full body weight with a forceful pistion. > he relentlessly thrusted with his entire body weight.

page 23
The thickest shot semen of the day > The thickest load of semen of the day

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I mean, I appreciate that there's _a_ translation available, but you and every other ESL needs to STOP RELEASING TRANSLATIONS IF YOU DO NOT HAVE A NATIVE ENGLISH SPEAKER PROOFREAD IT FOR YOU FIRST.

This is pretty shit, and in a way disrespectful towards the artist.

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Rich divorced old man with a big cock that will keep you up all night. I think she hit the jackpot with this one.

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Neckbeards go fucking ape shit over any slight spelling mistake lmfao

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I hope the artist doesn't actually claim your garbage translation belongs to him now and tries publishing it.

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god damn it.
fuck you.

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WOI KONTOL PROOFREAD DULU LAH SEBELOM RILIS ANJINGGGGGGG

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"Let's take Japanese, a language I (probably) don't speak that well, and English, a language I don't speak that well - and do a translation of one into the other, surely that will produce great results!!!"

Why do people do this shit??

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What do u expect from indonesian shitty translator lol.

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Brown ESLs yap the fucking loudest when it comes to shitting on one of their own. Translation is flawed but you'd get what's being conveyed if you had a braincel or two from the pagpag breakfast that you guys skipped.

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