[Dokuneko Noil] Nakano Yotsuba ni Osake o Nomasete Warui Koto o Suru Hanashi | A story about Yotsuba Nakano drinking alcohol And the awful things that happend to her. (Gotoubun no Hanayome) [English] {HMC Translation - Fixed Order}
Simple reorder of https://e-hentai.org/g/2058127/4d5fccce57/ to match the original work, since the order of events makes better sense like this. I imagine the translators, despite the otherwise appreciated work, fumbled the order when downloading the raws or something. Sadly, one of the translated lines makes less sense this way, but I have no experience editing these, so I'd rather not mess with that. I figure that it should cause less confusion than the previous version of it, at least. Bothered me enough to go through this effort.
If this is not the correct way to deal with this situation, I hope you'll notify me so I can rectify it.
“Let me save evidence of me committing this despicable felony crime in my phone so I can blackmail her into having even more sex.” Like what? Going to the police would have been so much simpler and effective than waiting for some guy to catch on and save you. Doujins involving blackmail are always so dumb.