Brain dead plot lol

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Last edited on 02 January 2024, 09:13.

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good art but the same NTR theme is boring.

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The translation is so terrible, the NTR elements were wiped off lol.

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Its not NTR if there no m:humiliation. Anyway not so bad :)

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Jesus, calm your shit Terasu. You can't just blatantly say that redpill shit out in the open like that.

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This shit is too funny. I wonder if Terasu really belives that crap or makes fun of Redpill crowd. Either way this guy is riot lol.

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@Chris2999
So guess this is a rewrite?

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I usually see the "horrible translation" comments and go oh man you guys are getting this for free shut the fuck up BUTTTT. this one is actually bad pulled me out of the immersion of it like 6 different times i mean its readable? just odd

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Why do you keep uploading crap when everyone tells you it's shit every time?

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@Athenex "I usually see the "horrible translation" comments and go oh man you guys are getting this for free shut the fuck up"
either get some standards or kys you fucking retard, we don't need anymore of this MTL/rewrite shit or dumbasses supporting/encouraging it. even if it is "free"

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Its better that things remain untranslated than shite like this be released. It dissuades others from actually translating.

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Man has 1 good story and the rest is trash

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@erozone hey bud, here is a better idea how about you take your own advice and kill yourself instead eh? it'll do everyone a favor

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Bruh these plotpoints are so boring, stale, overdone.

> MC has tiny penis
> Guy who NTRs him has huge cock (although 17 cm is only slightly larger than average and definitely not the length depicted in the manga)
> has had 200 sexual partners at age 20. Like really? Cmon, even if he became sexually active at age 12 that's like at least 2 per month.
> Is handsome, outgoing, wealthy, athletic, just missing smart to complete his Gary Stu like traits of being a perfect character.
> Sexual training, what even? That reads like it was some sort of class he followed in school lol.

I also liked that theres a massive error where Kazuya (the woman) is called he on the first page.

Regardless of this being a translation or rewrite (I have no idea) this is terrible.

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@Cyrukus
"> has had 200 sexual partners at age 20. Like really?"
Have you been under a rock the last 5 years? There are plenty of Onlyfans girls and man-o-sphere guys who are triple digits by 18 these days.

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^ I have a bridge to sell you

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why so low res?

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I don't know what more you guys expect from ntr. The story isn't "revolutionary" enough? Why don't you try revolutionizing your own dick then?

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bad translation/rewrite. skip this one and wait for the better translation thatll inevitably come (this shits happened multiple times now)

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When it comes to generic plot nobody cares until it is NTR, then suddenly everyone is a critic expecting the deepest narrative on a japanese porn comic.

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@ joseliski
Speak for yourself, I cannot fap without plot.

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Honestly for me the stale NTR plots are hilarious. While I wouldn't mind a long well designed plot in a hentai comic I think at this point people should admit those are pretty rare especially under a certain length.

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