Raw Version: https://e-hentai.org/g/2771980/6014c32e4b/
I know my English is not good, I'm just trying to practice, it's really not MTL, sorry.

the quality is so terrible you even got the series wrong

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apologies fix it.

Base +2, Darknessend +7, SenpaiNM7 -6, TCJJ -9

Change the Japanese title too:

シンデレラガールズ --> Cinderella Girls

シャイニーカラーズ --> Shiny Colors

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okay real talk

i am not a translator so im not gonna comment on how translation quality goes. other people can comment on that but im not going to be critical about it.

HOWEVER, i can absolutely comment on the edit work and typeset job you have done.

>this do not look like the source raw you provided. it looks like you somehow developed some sort of black magiks to reverse engineer the scan back to its terrible raw state and use that as a basis for your typeset (or you have one scanned yourself and did a terrible job at cleaning it. i dunno)
>weird font choice. you could've easily done some quick googles on what appropriate font to use in this sort of thing but nahhh times new roman lmao
>why left align
>no anti-aliasing
>weird indents and off centre text

i dunno man you have a very decent last page but somehow all basic typography goes out the window when its time for typesetting. whats wrong with you

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