I objectively had the better translation, but Ryuuga had the better editing. So, here's the best of both worlds.

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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This is just sad. And malicious. Pretty sure you were warned not to tempt the mods with your bullshit.

For those curious, the OP stole our lettering and overall editing and slapped his awful machine translation on top of it.

Here's our work, with the actual translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/2804114/927acf1db0/

Bonus: the OP has a meltdown in the comments. Double the entertainment for you guys.

Actual credits for the lettering/editing since OP is slime:

Lettering: cutegyaru
Cleaning/Redrawing: crimsonraes
Cover page (minus the disgusting "a book" and "teacher" additions by the OP): crimsonraes

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You're literally a machine translator lmao https://files.catbox.moe/nxe99v.png

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I see OP has decided to downgrade Juri from "Master/師匠/Shishou" to just "Teacher". 0/10, would not read again.

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"We- well you see I uhhh looked it up on Jisho after my OCR got the kanji for me because I can't write it myself... a-and it says you can ALSO use teacher!!! Ch-checkmate cuckgyaru!" *adjusts glasses, pats hairy belly in satisfaction of owning the libs on the Internet once again*

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If you keep saying mean things to me I'm gonna have to obsessively update my comments in this gallery over the course of days, then finally spend even more time re-editing some MTL onto this gallery until you learn your lesson!

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This is pretty pathetic behaviour, honestly.

>Nothing malicious about wanting to give people the best translation (mine) with the best editing.
It's pretty cope that you acknowledge the other TL is better than yours in some way, but insist that it's only the flashy photoshop skillz that's better.
Except splicing your shitty editing drags the whole thing back down lmao.

If you're going to bark this loudly, at least have some semblance of competency to back it up.

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"Mistress" is the female equivalent for master, but that has sexual connotations, so I went with "teacher".

THE ENTIRE DOUJIN IS ABOUT JURI FUCKING HER STUDENT
"MISTRESS" WOULD HAVE ABSOLUTELY WORKED AS A DOUBLE ENTENDRE
IT'S EVEN PROPERLY TAGGED AS "FEMDOM"

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Awful work. Never touch Juri doujins again!!

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Translation error:

1. pg 3: こンぐらいで へばてんじゃねえよ！！
Your translation: You better no go moping over something like this!
Actual meaning: She's telling her not to get knocked out over something this light. Moping over does not mean that.

2. pg 4: どこ行くつもりだテメエ!
Your translation: Where do you think you're going?
Actual meaning: Too proper given that she's calling him a bastard at the end there (Teme). Author's intent ruined.

3. pg 4: キャミイ師匠も。。。
Your translation: And Cammy too...
Actual meaning: He's referring Cammy as "teacher" too. Be consistent with your translation.

4. pg 5: これ。。。つ なんの 意味が。。。
Your translation : Um... What is this supposed to be...
Actual meaning: He knows what they're doing, he's asking the point or purpose for doing it.

5. pg 9: もう無理です~つて ツラしてんな？
Your translation: You're thinking this is too much for you, huh?
Actual meaning: She's saying his face is obviously showing that he can't hold back from cumming anymore. Your translation doesn't carry that meaning at all. "Too much" can also implies that he doesn't like it.

6. page 10: いいぜ?
Your translation: How's this, then?
Actual translation: She's giving him the go ahead. You're making it like she's giving him the condition that he can only cum in her mouth.

7. page 11: オイオイもう終わりかよ
Your translation: Hey, you're done already?
Actual translation: You completely missed the tone. She's egging him and not just asking a question. Something like "Don't tell that's all you got?" would be a better translation.

8. Page 14: オラっ もっと腰つかえ
Your translation: C'mon, Grab onto my hips!
Actual translation: She's telling him to work his hips, not grab hers.

9. Page 15: そのままもっととばしてけっ！
Your translation: Thrust them further in!
Actual translation: She's not telling him to go deeper. In fact, she's telling him to continue doing the same thing (sonomama) but rougher.

10. Page 17: まだまだイけだろ？
Your translation: Can't you hold it in?
Actual translation: Missed the tone again. Something like "You can still go on, right?" would fit better. Your translation make it seems like she's mad at him when in reality, she's actually have expectation that he can do better.

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Why the fuck do you MTL'ers feel the need to release this and shit up the galleries? Why not just keep this shit to yourselves? Are you all fucking stupid or something? You're a plague upon the scanlation community.

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I'm just here for the lulz. Hope i end up in e-hentai.txt's post.
@greengrasstree
Peruse these: https://e-hentai.org/g/274869/052c6b9d43/ and this https://web.archive.org/web/20150408105241/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?3308-Typesetting-introduction

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>Miss me with these nitpicks bro
>updates gallery with "these nitpicks"
>updates comment to remove it "Last edited on 22 January 2024, 19:54."
Can't even make this level of cope up

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Maybe if you keep bumping your gallery people will believe you actually know what you're doing :^)

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I think one more and you get a free coffee.

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It's only a doujin... y u heff to be mad
I mean like, THIS mad?

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Ok this is coming from someone with no real experience with translation, but kinda knows about the world tour mode this is based on.

1. In game Juri is refered to as a "Master" so no matter what you think Master is the right translation since it's accurate to the official source. And you can't just claim to know better then the official translation team at capcom without sounding like a GIGANTIC douche. If you really needed to hammer this point then at least use Sensei due to the martial arts connotation of this work.

2. Repeated Gallery bumping can actually get you banned so be careful with that.

C. I get you wanted Juri to sound more like Juri but there are better ways to do it.

Taco. How in the 7 layers of hell did you expect not to get flamed into a shitnado by opening up with "my translation is better fuck you" to one of the guys adamantly fight against MTLs on this damned website.

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Why is the quality of translations around here in fucking free fall?

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Now that's Street Fighting™.

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Bruh, SHISHOU MEANS MASTER.

It's even more commonly use within the confines of the master/pupil dynamic of martial arts education. I mean fuck I just googled that to double check and if you didn't even do a basic bitch search like that to be sure of accuracy then you have no business translating dick much less a doujinshi.

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Why would you even LOCALIZE shishou anyway?! HONEST and TRUE translations use Sensei instead of teacher, so why are you ABSOLUTELY DESTROYING THE AUTHOR'S INTENT here by doing the same to shishou!!!!!!!!111

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This is some last of us 2 cuckman behavior im seeing... greengrass why cant you accept youre in the wrong here and grow as a person?

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@HoodieGuyLairud
He keeps getting mowed back down when he grows. It's quite sad really

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And nothing of value was lost.

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Just kill yourself loser, it will have a better impact on the community than what u doin now.

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Little bro was hardstuck rookie when he could've been gold ranked if he just grinded and labbed some Japanese these past 2 years.
Instead they never changed. Proceeded to steal another group's work, called it "ass" (ironically after stealing it), and then threw a tantrum.
Amusing and bemusing all at the same time.

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A gentle reminder to everyone, if this kind of content upsets you, complaining in the comments is literally worse than useless. The moderation of this site couldn't care less about the content of galleries, let alone what the plebs and serfs that actually use the site think about it.

Go complain on the forums https://forums.e-hentai.org/
They're forced to see it over there, let them know how the community feels in a way they can't ignore.

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this is actually the most embarrassing thing i've seen in my decade of jerking off to lines on this website

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Not a translator but I I could have sworn I've seen people use teacher/sensei in place of Shishou for Scathach in fate grand orders official translations on multiple occasions, though that could be because the title master contains a very different meaning when the fate series is involved.

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I don't use "master" for females. All there is to it.

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@greengrasstree woah there, assuming Juri's gender? how shameful!

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She identifies as female, the devs consider her female, she has tits and a vagina, etc.

Anyway people my translation is objectively more correct than cutegyaru's. It already was before but it definitely is now.

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could you upload the rest of jmg's art?

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Wait, so you don't refer to women as master even when it would be the only appropriate title in this case.

That's, i mean, wierdly disrespectful since there isn't a female title in many professions that use master to refer to ones of high skill levels.

Failing to refer to a female martial arts instructor as master or sensei would actually get you disciplined harshly if not outright removed from the class.

Like, translation or not, that is a factually incorrect ting to do.

I mean this, you do not refer to a female Martial arts instructor as "mistress" or just teacher. It is very disrespectful.

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What the fuck.

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You can call martial art masters teachers lol

Last edited on 25 January 2024, 01:39.

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So you adopted more fixes lovingly provided to you by a person that actually understands Japanese. Good on ya, it takes a big man to concede to someone who has a grasp of the language, especially after you fought against them.

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First MTL's wanting patreon money, now a retard thinks MTL is better. I'm honestly curious how far this will end up going.

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What should I translate next guys

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It's quite sad, every time you generously ask the community for input on what to work on next, which is frequently, no one ever takes you up on it. Wonder why that is.

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@greengrasstree Your obituary, preferably with MTL.

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I'm not saying the world would be better off if we threw all MTL "translators" off a bridge, but it wouldn't be worse.

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Remove my name from the title.

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Why? Have some pride in your "work", buddy.

Also, here's the manual of style for gallery names:
" (Convention Name) [Circle Names (Artist Names)] Title (Parody Names) [Language] [Translators] [Special Indicators]"

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Yo this greengrasstranny may have taken the greatest L in the history of this site. Absolutely BTFO.

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