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Originally, I sent a PRd version to HMC for his first 30 pages, but radio silence, so I just re-translated everything.

edit: new pages, fixed leveling, optimized file size

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Translation/Lettering: cutegyaru
Cleaning/redrawing: Anonymous 1, crimsonraes
Typesetting: crimsonraes
QC: Anonymous 2

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Did Kaedoko / Yozo say something about the target number of page ?

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LEST FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THANK YOU MAN IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT!
this series reminds me of Scar of Summers for some reason, probably because the bottom page of Page 43 reminds me of Yasuo 2nd Hotel scenes (can't wait for the sequel to come out).
anyway, you can kinda see things a bit rush in mid-story but they made sure the single pages give a good impact.
the 69 is soooo fucking hot with how she is just instinctively being aggressive and the instant loss on her first fuck is so good.
I love how she instinctively wraps her leg when she got those deadly mating press + kiss combo.
that page 46 talks about her sweat is still my favorite so far.

good ol reliable mating press is nice and all but prone bone for first raw sex is a good choice (mating press used for their first sex anyway).
with the anal tease it seems like this series will still take a while to be finished page count wise and that's great.
we're all pirates here so it doesn't really matter how much this will be milk kek

Last edited on 13 November 2023, 18:30.

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I get a weird sense of déjà vu when I read this. I know a lot of hentai stories use the same tropes, but this seems awfully similar to something I've read in the past (the kendo, the damaged floor, the nature of the blackmail, the character designs etc.). Although admittingly I have a hard time finding it (perhaps removed from the website due to shenanigans?). It wouldn't exactly be the first time I see a manga ripping off another manga. Heck, it even happened to a mainstream artist like Kubo with his series Bleach when an American artist basically traced his work, which caused a huge scandal back then. However, I'm probably wrong and therefore take what I say with a grain of salt.

Edit: updated comment to reflect that I'm not certain that what I remember is correct.

Last edited on 22 August 2023, 01:06.

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@Forgunia, maybe this one? Idk, there are a lot like this tbh, but this is the most similar imo.

https://e-hentai.org/g/2035747/81515124af/

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@Zaiup, no, to my knowledge it was basically similar when it comes to the plot (e.g. girl does the same sport, same blackmail etc). However, I'll refrain from further commenting, because I have zero proof right now and are just recalling things from memory based on something what I read more than a year ago. In hindsight, I should not have commented since I'm not 100% certain and am unable to verify it at this moment in time and could therefore be mistaken, but deleting a comment as a regular user isn't possible for me. But anyway, take what I said with a grain of salt.

Edit: updated comment to reflect that I'm not certain that what I remember is correct.

Last edited on 22 August 2023, 01:09.

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ngl by the time this finishes i've probably finished reading multiple doujins of the same thing.

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@Forgunia, you and me both. I am getting serious deja vu vibes off this.

if this story ends with a typical NTR moment of the tanned asshole fucking the mind broken girl in front of the poor kid, and then pans out with the kid desperately fucking her insensate body, trying to prove how manly she has become for her? then I will know flat out that I have read this exact plot before.

in fact, it was that exact plot that first introduced me to NTR. and established my dislike for it.

Netori is one thing, it is often wholesome and involves rescuing one member of the relationship from an abusive and/or negligent partner.

netorare however? that I typically have an issue with. one, it portrays women as weak, and two, it is often done as a way to punish the guy in the relationship for being a wimp, and is often geared towards destroying the male's self worth to the point of suicide.

I know it is porn, but I have never understood the appeal of Netorare. sure the art is often good, and the characters often have large endowments. but the story typically sucks which breaks the immersion for me.

I know for a fact, if someone tried pulling that shit on me? I would kill them. zero hesitation.

main reason? because he is raping my girl. when blackmail is involved? consent does not matter, it is still rape. if you have to force the girl, whether by force or by blackmail? it is rape. end of discussion.

but yeah, that is why i dislike Netorare.

netori is different. but netorare? yeah, stories like this are why i hate it.

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I love you

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Thanks cutegyaru-senpai, this and "Kanojo ga Gaikokujin ni Netorareru Manga Ouchi Fuck Hen" the authors are taking too long. At least here, you've avoided premature ejaculation from MTLs.

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what the fuck is taking so long

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"I have a date at X time... So just get it over with"

I feel like that line has been uttered A LOT, for a similar scenario, in real life. XD

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The reason for blackmail in here is even more hilarious , an underage student try beer for the first time ? Preposterous ! No school for him and turn a blind eye to all the guy and gal around him that encourage him to drink beer . As if they can do that , the best a school can do is lecture all students who involved in said activity for hours and that is probably the worst outcome for being caught red handed . Now that is another thing if the no eye guy trick the loser MC to try drug , a typical Japan school will take more seriously , which honestly will make better and more believable blackmail material .

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For god's sakes, finish this already Kaedeko/yozo....

Also, thanks for the TL

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@suratkabar yeah the 69 and leg locking is sooo good. I also love the slow sex stuff in this and yozo's artoria NTR where the dudes just lay on top of the women with their dicks inside of them.
I think my favorite thing so far is her refusing to kiss him for the second time and then immediately get dominated and dirty kissed after. Perfection. Really can't wait for more

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@Coledas Ukgent yeah i saw the dramus fanbox latest post the doujin will have 82 pages and so far have 44 pages but dramus is faster than kaedeko/yozo

@iganasuK yeah I was almost tired of waiting of this and now in the latest post say this month say will or will not post the new chapter

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This is my favorite JK/blackmail/NTR of all time. Slow degradation of a fierce girl. But it's taking more than a year at this point. Surely it's gonna end soon?

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Idk how to fap to something that is incomplete ;-;

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Too much condom sex man, understandable for the story but I just can't feel it.

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I can not wait for the finalond break moment where she gets creampied and cancels that date while going for another round

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still waiting

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edit: fixed

Last edited on 13 November 2023, 22:46.

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Thanks again for this translation and the update, keep up the good work! Much appreciated.

Torrent has 19/20 in wrong order too.

Last edited on 13 November 2023, 14:40.

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The way this guy draws dick is so....weird looking

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H Manga DLC, Hope this won't be a meta later.

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Kinda dumb reason for falling for blackmail....

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Moral of the story: Do not be a beta and your woman will not f**k (sex) around behind your back. "If you treat her like an idol then she will treat you like a fan (not the guy she will have sex with)."

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NTR stories are all the same garbage
"muh girl gets convinced to have sex with the other guy for retarded reasons and gets conquered by rough sex"

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Prediction: There will be a moment where she gets creampied, then a time lapse occurs where they fuck for hours and she forgets/cancels the date.

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This guy's a kimberly player

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Slow as molasses updates.

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cutegyaru's translations are way better than most others. I don't understand why more people don't try to target natural-sounding english. "Accurate" translations are boring and dry as fuck, and a lot of them are so cringe-sounding they kill any eroticism in a scene. What sounds sexy in Japanese does NOT sound sexy in English. Thank you cutegyaru for understanding that!

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Still waiting for update and tl :)

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cutegyaru said "fuck it, I'll do it myself", thank you for the great translation

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Ah... so clumsy. Well, I mean it works, but reading this story I figure Yuusuke could have stolen that senpai from Takumi in a more clean way if he had instead slowly been tricking the guy into having sex with some of those sluts that was following him around. Then play the nice guy during alkl this time and create several instances where the senpai slowly finds out about Takumi by herself. Now just be there and allow her to fall into your embrace and then finally she will give herself to you.

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The author gotta wrap this up man 😭bro out here giving weekly updates like he shonen jump

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This genre is in the gutter. Time to use this great artstyle into something else.
Seriously, this genre is like a 40 year old hooker. There is nothing else left to see.

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Why is this doujin such a goddamn drip-feed. he releases like one page every 4 weeks... its genuinely ridiculous, just get on with it already ffs! I'm gonna be too old to get it up anymore by the time this mf is finished and the shit is fappable. =

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Okay, so he watched her try to buy condoms. Which he presumably can’t fit because the other guy is so big and strong and better and whatever. He’s definitely not going to have use of them even if he somehow fit (we all know he doesn’t). Also she ran out on him in a weird as fuck way.

There can’t possibly be much more story left, no? There’s no way the author manages to make the MC so braindead that he doesn’t find out something is wrong now, right? If he manages to drag this on further, I think I’ll get a brain aneurysm (more so than the plot already gave me before).

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Great, we're almost halfway through the story 😃

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@Forgunia, @noctusdark

This has been translated (at least in part) a couple times over the past couple years. Perhaps the deja vu is just that's you've seen most of this before?

Prior translations:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2591986/0c2aab2849/
https://e-hentai.org/g/2312290/ede44177ff/

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@speederzdk most of these stories end up with a clueless MC or they end up going along with it for whatever dumb reason, so I'm sure it's still going to be dragged out with the MC is none the wiser and the girl gives him some convenient excuse he'll take as fact.

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Damn what a stupid way to end.. And this has been ongoing for years now???

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Am I gonna live to see this one finished?

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@HCY450 Much like A Song of Ice and Fire, the author will die before the work is complete. We can hope and cope, but no man shall ever see this one finished. RIP

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Would a Love Hotel, a business built entirely around helping people have sex, really not have a condom size so common that it can be found in any random convenience store?

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Damn by the time finish I probably have grandchildren

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This appears to be missing the last page compared to other versions.

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