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Since the translation was so atrocious for the last one, here's a rewrite!
See, I realized that I confused Byuku and Buki for a few of the sfx (oops!), which was fixed.

And I think the translation is better!

If not... oh well!

Have a wonderful day/evening/night!

P.S. I admit it! I'm an idiot! I don't understand torrents! Actually... I don't understand most things in relation to this site....

P.P.S. Btw, my favorite sfx was the "ooze" on pg 4

Stop wasting your time trying to machine translate things. Instead find a partner or two through the forums to work with or simply volunteer to proofread, using your local knowledge of english.

You could actually learn Japanese fairly fast and put out actually good translations by first learning the basics of Japanese and then helping with the workload of a native Japanese translator that is translating into English but has not spent sufficient time around english speakers to appropriately localize the translations and use natural sounding phrases and slang.

Art 7. Plot 6. Sexiness 7. Translation 3. All out of 10.

Base +10, bubbacubba64 +6

Thanks for fixing this. I think you shouldve just updated the origjnal gallery instead.

Base +7