It's too bad the drawings are not finished...but art is pretty good !

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Hi, illustrator and your drawings are really pretty good, you should have a cleaner finish and color if you could give would be great but overall the pictures are very good, I suggest that you register at: http://www.hentai- foundry.com hentai is a community I see in this page an you closed some galleries.

is so you do it right.

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Like cacainsa said Hentai Foundry is a pretty good place to host your artwork you can get a lot more feedback on it and if it makes it easier you could probably switch to doing a page by page basis. I highly recommend you think it over.

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Why two stars? This stuff is great.

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Excellent b4p ^ ^

Now I am no longer in the skin, to see the new end ^ ^
I quote Comrade Claus when he says pregnant.
I hope that the son put his own mother pregnant, and that a sister or aunt discovers them, and in a moment of weakness, they will let go with his nephew, or brother, though in that case was his sister.
is always fun to see two or more women want the same man XD
Especially if they are mother and daughter, or aunt, you know it's good to see his mother a little jealous of his son, why would not like to share with her sister, in this case, the aunt XD

P.S
If I may, just advice^^
If you were to introduce an aunt or sister, or possibly both.
Aunt must be a single career woman, who always busy at work, she never could look for a man. XD so that i image, is fiery and can not wait to be able to have sex/love with his nephew XD

For the sister, you could do something like this, her husband betrays her, tired of his betrayal, she returns to live with her mother, so little by little her little brother will take care of her XD

If I knew how to draw, as you know you draw XD
I guess I already tried to draw similar stories.
I really like your style, and I guess you become more skilled.
Again thank yoy

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Thanks for the support guys, and as always I hope you enjoy

@Bahamut, Yes, you have stated those things that you want and most of them are all planned. Think of each one of these coming up chapters are alternate endings that are separate from one another.

@Comrade, I will try to work with darker lines.

As for hentai foundry, it is far too much of a hassle in the year 2010 to upload images one by one when you have a lot to submit.

These are the alternate endings in progress.

Base +5, Victor DoUrden +11

love your work & is that pregnancy I see in the easter egg pics??? ^_-

Great!

Maybe we'll find out he has a hot sister too.

Since you draw using a computer, could you darken the lines a bit? It's hard to see te thumbnails since they are a bit faint.

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where is this one ? After chapter6 ?

Could you makes bigger text ? It' s a little difficult to read even on a 24".

Great to see the mom cum, i think it' s her first time on the whole book ??
She deserves more pleasure IMHO. (and she was a little too passive in my taste)

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