We got a rewrite before just a translation

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the worst part about the majority of rewrites is that it's people that cant read the original, cant translate, and/or are failed artists that want to tell their own story or little comic... but they're also shit at writing.

they really appropriated someone else's art for THIS? at least find or make art of similar quality to the story you write

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Single glance at the first image and already numerous typos on top of cringe writing. What is WRONG with you?

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Honestly it's not like actual hentai dialogue is much better than this but still, it's full of typos and doesn't flow at all. That's ignoring the fact that rewrites are inherently worthless and disrespectful because I do not give a shit about Random Dude's sexual fantasy and you're co-opting someone else's work to present it to me.

Fuck off, and die too!

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