Commissioned by→ Anonymous
Raws→ https://e-hentai.org/g/1483032/88c867a06c/

The "previous" work that kept getting referenced was coincidentally posted as this was being worked on:
→https://e-hentai.org/g/2824362/b4c70e2c2d/

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→https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=324539

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I think a few lines might need to be tweaked

005
OG: いい
TL: "Okay"
ED: this is a refusal

OG: そう
TL: "Then..."
ED: this is a complete statement

006
OG: なんて
TL: "Oh my!"
ED: this isn't an interjection

OG: 昨晩は気取ってみたものの、あまりにも情けないウラがあったりする。
TL: "I tried to stay strong yesterday but there was just a very pathetic side to me."
ED: he's not talking about staying strong, he's just putting up a front

OG: 最近のメルトはずっとこんな感じで、俺の言葉ひとつに動揺することもなくなった。
TL: "Lately, Melt has been acting like this, she no longer gets upset about anything I say."
ED: not upset, just unmoving

007
OG: 今更言うまでもなく性感のないメルトであるが…
TL: "But she lacks a sense of touch."
ED: he's talking about her sex drive, he hasn't arrived that this conclusion yet

OG: いったんはなれてッ
TL: "Where are you touching!?"
ED: this is an imperative

008
OG: 着替えさせられ、さらに口で抜いて貰って尚も手を出せなかった俺。最早、誇りなどなかわた。
TL: "I had to change my clothes, and even though she let me cum in her mouth, I couldn't do anything else, I had no pride left in me."
ED: changing the middle portion (口で抜いて貰って尚) reduces the impact of the whole line

017
OG: なんだか切ない…？
TL: "Isn't this a little lonely?"
ED: she's not talking about loneliness

019
OG: 動悸でおかしくなりそう…だっ
TL: "It's weird how it pulsates"
ED: she's talking about herself

022
OG: もっとゆっくり…
TL: "I'll be more careful..."
ED: wrong speaker

Last edited on 27 March 2024, 09:57.

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