Hi everyone! Here's the translation of one of my favorite NTR doujinshi. I did for myself, then decided to share it here because why not.

It's mainly translated from the chinese translation, as i know chinese but not japanese. Also, please be forgiving if there's mistakes, english is not my main language, and I did this translation for fun, I'm not a professional by any means.

Anyway,hope you enjoy!

https://e-hentai.org/g/2584481/bc6630d34f/
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01067943.html

me personally give a thumbs up

Base +6, Louptoi +12, RaizelX +7, PinguPrin +7, Nopex1234 +4, jack955 +5, Brego1 +6

Bro, that witch is way hotter than his fiancee.

Base +6, PinguPrin +7, Louptoi +12, knucklesluigi +7, Nopex1234 +4, baguete +6, anon8092354 +3, as102 +13, vllx6 +6, Sonora +10, VVendettas +6, Lostalgia +10, Hoe12112 +8, and 1 more...

I hope my man becomes an A rank adventurer and cucks some other dude in the countryside, repeating the cycle

Base +6, Louptoi +12, lestatv3 +7, knucklesluigi +7, Nopex1234 +4, breanyman +6, anon8092354 +3, jack955 +5, Hoe12112 +8, Der Hunter +6, Legojack +10, Zeroshiki~ +7, atarau +6

Why is the score so low?

Base +7, Louptoi +12, Brego1 +6, star_fox -6

This feels like a one-shot, but if it continues, the only way I see him getting power is with a mystical pact of some sort. Given the tone of the story, I'd wager a demon rather than a God. The proceeding story pretty much writes itself.

Base +15, Louptoi +12, deth212 +6

Pretty good work in terms of the presentation, but there's a bunch of small errors that could be fixed by having a primary English speaker proof read your work.

Base +6, Louptoi +12

@Islar: it scores so low because some vanilla dumbass fans jump straight to this Ntr doujin to vote it down.

sigh, if they can't stand Ntr, they should get out with silent. I don't like incest so I just run away with silent when see incest tag

Base +6, Brego1 +6, Endgenesis +11, star_fox -6

I want to see where this goes. Will he become more and eventually surpass those B rankers by forming a pact with a demon like a post above? Moving onwards and eventually forgetting his goal only to become not even a shadow of his former self? Probably not, but hey it would be cool.

Base +6, Louptoi +12

Got bamboozled by the title, thought maybe this is one of those mega rare ones where the guy gets his shit together. But alas, I got 70 pages of the same generic formulaic garbage as other NTR, the hentai equivalent of isekai as far as lack of originality and thought put into it.

Base +6, Endgenesis -11, elvendrunk -11, Anadort +6, Clitbasher +6, Iv27SKrI -7, Brego1 -6, atarau +6

That's rough buddy.

Base +11, Louptoi +12

Overall the build up is pretty decent but to be fair the cover made me believe he was going to be banging the witch for a while. Only one scene... but good stuff anyways.
I think the only disappointing part of this work is that our protagonist despite finding a pretty godlike life hack (Getting paid to fuck onee-sans) he's still a cuck in the ending. Is the heroine pretending she doesn't know him to forget what she has done to him or is she truly done with him/her past? Who knows! I like that kind of mystery.

Assuming this gets a sequel a revenge story would be way better since it has all the elements to stand out and build up like that but... like someone already pointed out it might end up just being another mid NTR work because god forbid you from giving your male leads an spine.

@moximoore
Maybe one of the chicks he whores to might teach him a thing or two, who knows? Just like the girl finding out she's mage potential, the kid might be good doing something else.

@Dark-wings
You are allowed to criticize any work man. Not every single bad review is from people that genuinely hate the tag.
Like, I'm all in for NTR but I'm not going to give 5 starts to another generic ugly bastard with a phone blackmail and a retarded heroine manga even with (Insert trending skeb or fanta artist's name here) doing the artwork.
I enjoyed this work but I wrote down what I liked and what I didn't like, don't expect me to 5 star rate but also not to 1 or 2 star it bro.

Base +6, dirtyhairry +28, Louptoi +12, ByCreativ +5, Caravaneer +6, deth212 +6

@ChronicLogic I honestly find the pale girl way hotter but regardless it’s like you said, the pale girl is his fiancé, the witch is just some whore who basically buys male prostitutes, you could even see she doesn’t care for him at all, of course he’s gonna want be with his fiancé

Base +5, Louptoi +12, deth212 +6, Korgal +6

Thumbnail misled me to think that the witch orchestrated the whole thing.

If the story ends here then it's sadly realistic. But I hope there'll be more.

Base +6, atarau +6, Louptoi +12, deth212 +6

This is probably the most thoroughly cucked I've ever seen someone get. Not only did he lose his finace, after wanking it while she was getting fucked, but she went on to live his dream and is more successful than him at it.

And looking at it from her POV, you can't even blame her for it. The guy that took her is already a successful adventurer. Lots of money, promised treatment for her father, soon to be knighted and become noble and he's hot. For a pre-industrial age isekai setting that's a lot. Much, much more than the MC could offer her. She'd be crazy to refuse. The only he doesn't offer is love and fidelity. He outright says he wants her for her body.

It is possible he was planning to dump her once he got bored of her, considering the type of man he is. And she's a country bumpkin she she'd have no idea that was even a possibility. It's very lucky for her indeed then that she turned out to be a magical prodigy. That ups her value from bed warmer to actual asset.

Compare to the MC who has nothing. No money, no natural talent, no prospects. He doesn't even seem to have a party once he starts adventuring. Even if he manages to solo level to A-rank it'll take him years. His dream of stealing her back looks all but impossible. He'd need a cheat ability to even have chance, I think.

Oh, and the cover lead me to believe the witch had more significance in the story but she doesn't. Maybe she's related to the adventurer guy? Perhaps an old conquest of his? Maybe he has a fetish for training innocent girls into seductive sorceresses?

This really leaves me wanting.

Base +7, deth212 +6, Louptoi +12