Why are comics like this always ruined by the presence of an fat old gross ugly man. Am i suppose to imagine he's me? Is the artist trying to insult their audience?

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@Zelreth
I'm fat and ugly. I'm working on losing my weight right now but I have no way to repair my face outside of surgery. It feels good to have representation. If you hate it so much just ban the tag in "My Tags" so you don't have to see it again.

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There's an empty black text bubble in the middle panel of page 10.

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What's wrong Zelreth, could it be you cannot self-insert as yourself?
Serious reply though, couldn't you just delete his face from your mind, that's a far easier thing to do. At the very least that's how I did it, because I only need to focus on the beauty or could it be secretly you want to get fuck by ugly bastard is that why you are always focusing on them?

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remember when you have FIVE shota sex slave from one country

start collecting harem from the opposing team to balance stuff

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There's no concept of a princess but a queen exists?

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This is the good stuff, thank you for your work!
Will you also translate the previous chapter? https://e-hentai.org/g/2663054/ff9006444b/

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Page 10 one of the bubbles is blank

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02: In Nalux / Naluk
- inconsistent
02: you feels => you feel
02/03: Reinyes / Erinyes
- inconsistent
04: It is too late to regret it now?
- one time clause too many
- interrogative
=> Is it too late to regret (it) ?
10: blank bubbles in middle panel
13: you the one => you're the one

02: summoned to in Nalux
- one preposition too many? => summoned to Nalux
(゜-゜)

Last edited on 24 February 2024, 20:42.

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Ok, I know it's stupid, but I can't stop thinking about that retarded premise with only boys in that world. How do they even reproduce? By budding? They're finding their children in cabbage?

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I don't want to self-insert, I just want to see hot guys instead of fat ugly bastards for once.

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@WhiteCore I'll consider it. But considering the work it takes to clean up the text, I can't guarantee anything. Plus, I was already starting on translating it when the my PC broke down and HDD got corrupted. So I lost all the files, and also kinda killed the mood.

@ridkor Yes. I found it weird too when I was translating it. They didn't say consort or such, but specified Queen(王妃).

Last edited on 24 February 2024, 08:37.

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Where's the translated Knight commander chapter?

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amazing art but incredibly offputting pov, switch around the focus of the internal monologue

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i like this autor exaclty because he use fat ugly old man has protagonists (yes im old fat and ugly and probably someday you will be too)

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Missing text on page 2.

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Trap Elf is cute... but that is all this comic has. I don't watch or read fantasy to see somebody's reflection of real life with the fat ugly bastard. I 100% would rather a hot or normal guy fuck the cute trap Elf.

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the chinese scans colors are all fucked up sadly.

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Seriously how difficult is it to draw a neutral background character that isn’t a fat ugly bastard? I can’t imagine how things are going in your life if you need to use that as a self-insert. Christ.

Give me a hot guy character, seriously just anything to go by that won’t make me want to tear my eyeballs out.

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Am I just tripping, because for all the flame in the comments, he looks like a pretty normal, albeit rotund, middle aged Japanese man. I've seen fat ugly bastard characters a thousand times (and I hate the concept), but this guy doesn't seem to be ugly or gross or nasty, and his weight doesn't really seem to stand out very much in the sex either.

Call me crazy, but this guy just seems...fine? Not my preference, but like totally fine otherwise. Everyone here is either "I hate this and it's awful" or "I'm just like him and so are all of you" over this guy.

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Yeah the colour is all out of wack

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I Think some have had the experience of an older man that they did not think was very attractive but he was the first that did not judge them and would do to them the things they secretly wanted to do, you never forget your first sex encounter and it can become an ongoing fantasy that persists for a lifetime your point of focusing on the young crossdressers internal dialogue would make it much more stimulating for those that would otherwise not enjoy someone that is not to their wishes.

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Nalus
Erinyes the Falcon named no name
Not inhuman, Nalus
not Nalux, not cool, Japanese use sugoi

So for an english translation that way

Joe Biden's America!

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