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herio goated as usual

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You forgot your white stroke on page 23

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I guess it’s good that this finally got a TL for the sake of closure (thank you!), but I think this might be my least favorite among Herio’s stories. It’s not even adequately bittersweet; it just feels kind of awkward and unsatisfying to me, like their relationships just ended up worse than they were at the start.

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Here's some mistakes.
Page 9 "I knew it // we're a perfect match"
Should be connected to his previous line. "After all, we're such a perfect match."

Page 19 "How tight is your pussy // like never before"
broken grammar

Page 21 "so you're saying // you pretty chill today?
He's talking about using the condom, should be something like "Is it safe today?"

Page 21 "No... // I feel like going crazy"
She's replying to him "No, it's dangerous/not safe"

Page 21 "So we feel the same"
He's replying again "Then it's a no-go anyway"

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@ozuuma123 thanks for your feedback, I've fixed up all those issues

Base +10, electrocardia +8, LordBlubberNuggets +6, DJ_Puchuu +16

Huh, this honestly turned out to be rather disappointing.

Base +6, LordBlubberNuggets +6, Gabs999 +6, Palaxius +29, Obsket +9

Insanely disappointing ending

Base +7, Palaxius +29, fuckmewitharake +7, Obsket +9, LordBlubberNuggets +6

I honestly like the ending. Relationships are messy! People make bad decisions! Kind of feels more realistic that Manimi is caught between wanting a relationship and not wanting to hurt her best friend.

Last edited on 04 March 2024, 19:00.

Base +6, DJ_Puchuu +16, Almanik -17, Amaduyu Mitsumi +26, fuckmewitharake -7, KamizakiP +6, trulvir +6

this reads more like a mainstream dumpster fire rather than a conventional thinbook. probably needs a few more chapters to flesh out the story properly

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